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Ayesha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#231

ELLO JI... GUYS... I AM FEELING BAD THAT I DIDNT DO MY UPDATE AT MY REGULAR TIME.. VERY SORRY FOR IT... LOVE YA ALL

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Ayesha

@-Ms.Muffin-

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

Elloooooo ji guys.... Am very sorry for late update... i got buxy in a work... Guys i am gonna say this is one of the best part i have written by now... Becauxe I cant believe i CRIED while i wrote this part.... 😭 soooo guys i hope u will like it soo enjoy...😊

PArt 6:

A drenched Armaan and Shilpa make their way towards the Cottage... Cute smile playing on their lips..... Shilpa tried to remember when she had this much fun... On the other hand Armaan was totally lost in the moment.. He couldn't understand the new feelings arising his heart.. He was sure that he had some feelings towards Shilpa.. At that time a thought escaped his heart... COuld this be love?? Armaan's thought was interrupted by Shilpa's beautiful voice...
Shilpa: Armaan.... Thank u soo much for such a wonderful day... I really enjoyed it... Thank you soo much Armaan...
Armaan: Shilpa... Dont make me feel like a stranger by saying thank you and all... I thought we were friends......
Shilpa: (in a whisper) Ofcourse Armaan.. We are friends.. And i am very greatful To have a friend like you....
Armaan: ( Whispers back) And i am greatful to have you in my life.....

Shilpa was taken back by Armaan's words... She couldnt understand Exactly what he meant by those words.. Greatful to have me in his life.. Is this getting beyond Friendship.. Or his just meant like a friend... All this thought kept wandering in her mind....

Armaan was himself surprised at his own words... Why did he say it.... Was he falling for her... Was he talking her more than just a friend... Damn this was just getting beyond friendship.... Ohhh man... What would she be thinking about him now... Armaan hesitently Looks at shilpa only get lost in those beautiful green eyes.. His heart started beating rapidly when he saw her staring at him.. They just kept staring at eachother.. The unknown connection was back between them... Ohh it was just a perfect moment..
Until Rahul's voice interrupted their lovely eyelock session....
Rahul: ( teasingly) Oyye u guys... Are you playing a game.. i mean you both are staring at each other from last 5 minutes.. Is this really a game or something else....
Both Armaan and Shilpa were flushed from rahul's comment... Shilpa just kept staring at the floor due to embarrassment...... While Armaan just kept glaring at Rahul ready to kill him any moment....
Rahul: (lil scared) WHAT !! Armaan just chill bro.... I was just joking okkk

Muskaan just kept suppressing her laugh all the time.. She looked towards shilpa.... Ohh my... The girl was blushing now.. She was really happy to see the satisfaction in shilpa's face.. She just kept thanking god for sending Armaan here... For shilpa...

All their thoughts were interrupted by A ring of phone.. Shilpa realized it was her phone which was ringing.. She takes up the call only to get a big shock...
Meera: Where are you shilpa.....
Shilpa: ( terrified) Massi.... Woh... I am...
As muskaan heared the name she just knew it... Shilpa's biggest fear was returning....
Meera: I SAID WHERE THE HELL ARE U???
Shilpa: (whispering) Massi... I just finished my duty... I uhh... Am just returning back to home..
Meera: That's better..... Cauxe we will be reaching home within an hour... AND I WONT THE DINNER READY BY THE TIME WE REACH HOME.... GOT IT !!!
Shilpa: Yess.... yess maasi... It will be done..

Shilpa cuts her call with a pain look on her face... She glance towards muskaan.. Muskaan could see the fear in shilpa's eyes... How she wished she could take away the fear.. She knew What was gonna happen to Shilpa once they are back... She wished Shilpa would listen to her... How she wished he could change all this.. Shilpa turns back to Armaan... Totally avoiding to look at him she speaks in a low voice...
Shilpa: Armaan... Uhh i have to go now.. Bye and thanxs for the trip...
Armaan: (lil dissapointed) Shilpa... Wait.. Plss lets have dinner.. You can go after that....
Muskaan: ( covering up for shilpa) Uhh Armaan.... She needs to get back soon.. Ummm.. her maasi Is coming back... So she needs to be home soon...
Shilpa( this time looking directly in his eyes... Pleadingly speaks) Armaan plsss... I need to get back home...

Armaan was surprised to see the pain look on her face.. What was behind this plead.. He saw a fear in her eyes... What was the reason for it.. Damn he wish he knew about her fears...
Armaan: (giving up) Okkk... Umm i can drop u guys back to home.. U knw...
Shilpa: ( cutting back his words) NOO PLSS.... Uhh sorry i mean I will go with muskaan.. Dont worry...
Armaan was still not fully convinced.... He clearly saw a fear in those eyes.. He really wish he knew the reason....
Rahul comes to Shilpa with Ariya in his arms.. Who was now fully awake.. Shilpa takes Ariya back into her Arms and bids a quick goodbye to Armaan and Rahul... And literally runs from there with Muskaan and Ariya.. All the time she just kept thinking.. She shouldnt have forgotten the fact that She was not Independent..... She was just a slave for them.. And had to live like that only...

As Shilpa reached the house... She got the biggest shock in her life.. There they were sitting with deadly look on their face... Shilpa felt her heartbeat stop for a second.. Didint they say they are gonna be back after one hour... Meera gets up from her seat and walks towards shilpa... glaring at the poor souls... Before Meera could start.. Tina butts in and starts talking...
Tina: Ohhhhh soo madam is back... didint mother tell u to be back soon.. I pity you Shilpa.. Okk mom am off to bed.. Good luck Shilpa...
Shilpa knew it... Tina has just added more fuel to the burning fire.. Which she could clearly see in Meera and Veer's eyes... She puts Ariya down and with a trembling voice Shilpa speaks up...
Shilpa: Maasi... You told.. you told u will be back after......
Before she could complete she gets a tight slap on her face....
Meera: WHAT YOU THOUGHT HUH...... WHY DID YOU TAKE SOO MUCH TIME TO REACH HOME.....
Veer: And you listen... We will come whenever we want.. Dont forget THIS IS OUR HOUSE....
Shilpa: ( slightly sobbing) But... but you told you will be back after one hour...
Veer goes near Shilpa And fists her hair roughly and push her harshly to the floor...
Veer: DONT U DARE ARGUE WITH ME.... YOU BI****
Meera goes near Shilpa and kicks her hard on her leg and speaks...
Meera: SHE IS A ANNOYING BI****....... JUST LIKE HER MOTHER.... I HATED HER AND I HATE YOU BOTH ALSO....

Shilpa just lay there taking up all the pain.... Their harsh words and Beating... Suddenly she remembers about Ariya... OHHH NOO... ARIYA WAS HERE ONLY ALL THE TIME.... Hesitantly she glance towards Ariya to see her fully Petrified and crying bitterly looking towards her..
Shilpa quickly gets up with all pain and holds Meera's legs begging her...
SHilpa: ( crying hysterically) Massi... Plsss... Not infront of Ariya.. Plss.. Dont do this... Not infront of her plss...
Meera pushes her roughly back onto the floor.... while veer goes near her and roughly holds her face and speaks...
Veer: WHY SHOULDNT SHE SEE... OFCOURSE SHE SHOULD SEE... SHE HAS TO KNOW THE PUNISHMENT HER DI GETS WHEN SHE DOESNT LISTEN TO US... With that they pushes shilpa back on to the floor and both moves towards thier room....

Shilpa with great difficulty gets up and glance towards the door.. To get a another shock... WHERE WAS ARIYA??? SHe looks the whole living room buts didnt find her.. She kept thinking.. OHHH NOO.. ARIYA... OHH GOD.. PLSS KEEP HER SAFE... With that she runs out of the house...

9:00 pm near Star cafe' :

Armaan gets down from his bike to get some Coffee.. Ofcourse he was now getting obsessed to it like Rahul.. As he made his way towards the cafe' he hears a soft cry... He quickly glance over his back to see Ariya sitting on the same bench and crying bitterly... Armaan worriedly
runs to her...
Armaan: ( worriedly) Ariya... Sweetheart... What are u doing here...? Where is your shilpa didi...? Ariya stop crying baby... What happened...
Ariya just kept crying... Armaan takes her into his arms and consoles her... Just then he hears a scream behind him...
Shilpa: ARIYAA !!!!
Armaan glance back to see a totally worn out shilpa... She was looking soo vulnerable..
SHilpa quickly runs bacto Ariya and takes her into her arms and hug her tightly...
Shilpa: ( crying badly) Ariyaa... Why did you leave from there... Didi was soo scared Aru... Plss dont do it.. plss dont leave Didi.. Didi loves u baby...

After a while Ariya calms down and just kept hugging shilpa.. Shilpa weakly turns towards Armaan and speaks in a low voice...
Shilpa: ( between her sobs) Armaan... I ... I was sooo scared... I was soo scared...
Armaan: ( hugging both shilpa and Ariya) I know shilpa... Shhhh... Its okk... Stop crying now.. She is safe...
Shilpa: ( still crying) I was sooo scared Armaan... If... If anything happens to her i would Die...
Armaan: ( lovingly) nothing with happen Shilpa.. I will not let anything happen to her... AND I WILL NOT LET ANYTHING HAPPEN TO YOU....

(tu jahan main wahan
sang sang yuhn chaloon tere
jaise tera aasmaan) - 2
jo dhoop nikli
chaaya ban jaaonga
jo ho tu akeli
saaya ban jaaonga
jo uljhan mein ho mann
main behlaoonga

tum aa gaye ho
to jeena aaya hai
khushiyon ka tumne
yeh jaal bichaya hai
khoya hai khudko ya
sabh kuch paaya hai

tu jahan main wahan
sang sang yuhn chaloon tere
jaise tera aasmaan
ho ghum ke badal
mujhpe tham jaane de
bechainiyo ko
mujhse takraane de
dukhti ho koi baat
mujhpe aane de

dil sochta tha
ke koi apna ho
koi raaz na ho
jo usse rakhna ho
aankhein na kholoon main
shayad sapna ho

tu jahan main wahan
sang sang yuhn chaloon tere
jaise tera aasmaan

NOTE: HEYY GUYS... PLSS DO COMMENT....😉

Edited by aish_lovv - 14 years ago

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Sri

@OkThanksBye

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#233

kya baat hai....SUPERB.................👍🏼😉🤗😛

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Jeny Thomas

@J3ny

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#234

*edited

Mindblowing update di...It was simply fab....👏
Just loved the way u wrote it.....👏
Too too good....😊
Good how i wish i could kill that chudail family😡
Arrgg hate them to the core...😡
Poor shilpa...I so pity this girl that she has to live with such ppl....
N ariya...Wat has that poor soul done..I could feel wat she must have gone through....😭
N armaan i love this guy...Hope he gets to know about this family soon
U truely rock di...very very well written update...Jitne baar bolu kum hain....U rock👏
A fantabulous update...🤗
Continue soon....😊
N thanxxx a lot for the PM🤗

Edited by Jenny_KaShian - 14 years ago

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Ayesha

@-Ms.Muffin-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: -KaShti-
kya baat hai....SUPERB.................😛

Oyye srish.. u read it... thanks hai ji... love ya

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anusha

@Laddoo.Phaddoo

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#236

oye meri pyari si bhatakti aatmaon ki rani first of a ll a hug from me🤗
kya likha hai yaar
i can imagine kash oops arsh on it😆
chal ab zyadi taarif nahin karungi warna phir update 4 saal baad milega
gr8 part keep it up👍🏼
-luv teri bhootni😳

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ana_kash

@ana_kash

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#237

m speechelss aish...just one word..woww

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#238

WOW. Aish that is an awesome part!

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Ayesha

@-Ms.Muffin-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: kAsH_hOt2hAnDlE
oye meri pyari si bhatakti aatmaon ki rani first of a ll a hug from me🤗
kya likha hai yaar
i can imagine kash oops arsh on it😆
chal ab zyadi taarif nahin karungi warna phir update 4 saal baad milega
gr8 part keep it up👍🏼
-luv teri bhootni😳

Oyye mere bootni... am sooooo happy u read it... and sorry 4 the late update.. i am soo buxy na... and yaaa love yo comment... and i love u also...

your only batakthee aatmaa Aish... 😆