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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: desigirl_18

Update anay wali hai kya I think 3 more minutes lol

i think we're mean 😉 pressurizing the poor soul - lool but yh technically the update should be up by now😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
COMMENT!! AND I WROTE IT FAST CUZ I WAS BUSY SO IGNORE MISTAKES!!
I am moving the story forward as in showing their natures. 😃

Chapter 20:

They got ready and Geet was behaving in a strange way.

"Kya jo huwa wo sahi huwa??" she asked herself several times.

Maan noticed this….and thought…..

"She was completely normal in the morning. Maybe because of last night? We are married even we don't have such feelings……."

"Kya hum kabhi bhi ek doosre ko pyaar kar paayenge?" she thought.

"Geet!"

"Kya…"

"I have seen the eighth wonder of the world"

"Really?! What" she asked forgetting about her thoughts and now excited.

"You not talking and being a pain…" he laughed.

"Correction ninth wonder…King Kong is the eighth"she said ignoring his laughter.

"He's a disgusting animal who doesn't exist and has no respect for women!"

"Like you!!!" she hit him on his shoulder and ran upto the car parked outside.

"Geet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" he ran after her.

They reached the Eiffel Tower and Geet was jumping with joy.

"OMG!!! Maine kabhi nahi socha tha I would get to see the Eiffel Tower in real!!!!"

"Ab chalein?"

"Maine kab roka mere upar se tumhe nahi guzarna….uff Maan itni baatein karte ho don't waist my time and get out!!!" she said being hyper.

He just stared at her then she rolled her eyes and got out.

"Yeh lardki mujhe ek din mujhe psychic department main bhej kar rahe gi!!"

They got upto the second floor and Geet took pictures.

"Maan now come take some with me!"

"Geet…main"

She was soo excited that he couldn't refuse.

"Acha ab top floor pe jaana hai ya are you afraid of heights. Phir mat kehna"

"Acha, tumhe lagtaa hai main darti hoon. OMG! Agar main tumse nahi dari to woh kya cheez hai?"she said pointing to the top.

"Geet! Main yahan nice banne ki koshish kar raha hoon and you're just being impossible!"

"Maan sab ke samne scene mat create karo you angry gorilla!!" she went inside the elevator before he could stop her.

The elevator went up after 8 minutes. He was getting worried. When the elevator came he reached the top and started to look for her.

"Geet!Where are you? Mazaq mat karo Geet this is no place to play hide-and seek."

Suddenly he saw her in a corner with her eyes shut. He was relieved he found her.

"Geet! Yeh kaisa mazaaq tha!!? Geet?" he said the last word softer.

"Maan I'm scared it's too high" she said her eyes shut.

"Now that we are here we might as well take pictures, and enjoy!"

"Oye khotte!!!! Meri jaan yahaan jaa rahi hai aur tum ho ke……"

"Nakhre tum dikha rahi ho….darr bhi tumhe lag rahai hai wifey" he said reminding her.

"You were so excited ab kya huwa?" he asked holding her hand.

"Kya matlab kya huwa? Nazar nahi aa raha aankhain hain ya button?" she said clutching him.

"Geet you're fighting on our honeymoon and you call me un-romantic"

"Achaa naa, ab chup poori business presentation khade khade dena shuru kar dete ho…."

"Geet I'm going!............unless you apologize" he said finger on his chin.

She pinched him.

"OUCH!!!"

"I hope you're awake now….me and apologize to you?! You're funny" she said laughing.

He walked to the elevator still holding her hand and he glared at her.

When the elevator came people got out and Geet instantly let go of his arms and ran into it.

When it was about to close she shouted….

"Pics le lena achaa!!"

"Geet stop the-"

But all he heard was laughter.

"Wifey you're gunna have to pay for what you just did…you wanna play rough right??"

When he got off he saw Geet eating a yogurt parfait.

"Yummm, you want some?"

"No ab chalein!"

"Yeah I wanna go shopping!!!"

"Chalo!"

When they went to the boutiques Geet got perfumes for dadi, Sonia, and Rano. She bought more she liked too.

She got Balvindar and Sukhdev leather jackets.

"Ab chalein! It's been two hours!!" he said frustrated.

"Haaw hai, I have'nt even bought something for myself, aur tumne bhi to nahi kuch liya?!" she said wide-eyed.

"KYAAA!! Itni der main you got these and out of ALL this there is nothing for YOU!!??" he said while raiding his hands to hold the bags up.

"Sooo, tumhara kya matlab hai?"

They went to another store and Geet bought a nice scoop neck shirt and dark denims. Then she bought a dark-purple sweater for Maan.

"Maan come close"

"Achha, sure" he said wondering what she would do.

She held the shirt on him seeing if it looked good.

"LOVE IT!!you like it?"

"You are the designer…you should know"

"Yeah waise bhi tumse kisne poocha hai?"

"Oye Ghajni you just asked me!"

"That was because I was being nice!"

After they were done five hours of shopping, visiting parks, taking pictures, and having lunch between, Maan was tired and hungry too.

"Lets go eat, I'm Damn hungry!!!"

"I'm coming naa!!"

She got out of the bathroom and came out wearing a black net sari.

"WOW she looks HOT!! But her eyes are the best accerssory!"he thought.

"Chalo naa, itna shor macha rahe the" she said pulling him out.

After they had a nice dinner they went to their room. Geet put Vivah on as it was one of her FAVOURITES!!

"Maan have you watched this before?"

"No, I don't have time for such things" he said laying on the bed.

"Whatever…main dekh rahi hoon. Shahid and Amrita are Ah-dorable!!"

"Omg don't tell me you think Shahid Kapoor is…hot!?"

"No…I find him cute!!!" she said laying beside him.

"Aren't you going to change? That doesn't look comfortable"

"Yeah I should…she left for the bathroom while he got into action with his plan."

"Maan why are the lights off?" she asked coming out.

"Maan kahaan ho? You know I don't like the dark!!" she said now scared.

Suddenly a Man's face covered with blood and worms, his hands had a dagger and he was grinning!

The man's face popped out making a loud screaming noise. And a flash appeared.

"AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Geet screamed covering her eyes from the bright light.

"MAAAN!!!!" she started to cry.

He came out turning the lights on.

"haahahahhahahhaahahah" he said clutching his stomach.

"You should see this picture…you look hilarious!!" he said not looking at her but laughing at the picture.

He saw her crying with her hands covering her face.

"Geet?" tum ro rahi ho he said walking up to her.

"Don't touch ME!!!" she sobbed.

"Geet, I was only kidding!!"

"Get away from me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tum aise kar sakte ho main soch bhi nahi sakti thi??!!"

"Geet-"

"Shut-up!!! OKAY?? I hate YOU!!" she cried louder.

"I'm sorry lekin you kept running at making me wait at the tower I didn't cry?"

She got up and so did he.

She looked at him with moist eyes.

"You weren't scared of any of that were you?" she said looking straight into his eyes.

He was speechless. She was right.

Her eyes were angry and scared. He couldn't see the glint they showed when he came.

She walked off to the bed turned the movie on and layed on the bed.

He stood there.

Then a pillow hit his face.

"What the-"

"You can sleep on the couch!" she said focusing on the movie.

"But- I said I was sorry!"

"I don't care!!!"

"No, I'm not sleeping on a couch when there is a bed!"

"Uff, chori upar se mujhe attitude kis baat ka dikha rahe ho you undiscovered Hippo?!"

"Geet!! Ab tum limits cross kar rahi ho!?"

"Whatever…You're not sleeping on this bed with me!"

"I am….."

"Then I'm going to book a different room"

"If you didn't know this hotel is the busiest in Paris and people make reservations months before!!"

"OMG!!! I hate you!!!"

He jumped on the bed and she continued to ignore him.

He then got tired and snuggled closer to her.

"Don't even think about it!"

"I'm sorry!!!!"

"Fine there is one way you can make it upto me!!" she said mischievously.

"How??"

"STRIP!" she was sure he wouldn't agree.

"WHAT!!"

"FINE! Then move!"

He got up and started to unbutton his shirt. She was shocked.

He took his shirt off then his pants smirking.

She looked at him with her mouth open!!

When he was about to take his boxers off she yelled….

"BAS!!! Kafi haiiiii!!!"

"Aww, it's okay, I can see your enjoying it!!"

"Actually I am!!"

She got up and pulled him closer and kissed him leaving him breathless.

She kissed his chest and then his cheek.

"You're forgiven"

With that she pulled him to the bed and he turned the lights off and both fell asleep in each others arms.

PRECAP:
NONE!! :P

LEAVE COMMENTS!!!!😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Warning i may fall asleep so may have to edit it in the morning xx
did i read that correctly?? she kissed him??
she forgave him soooo easily!!!
hahaha i swear in the morning she was double minded bout their ahem ahem night and now shes sooo cozy with him - hahahaha
the things one does and feels the need to do without true feelings after a marriage - hai tauba!!!
lol.............
honestly u'd think they luved each other - well they do but like they jus slow i guess lool
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Haha it was cute!! I love the names Geet calls Maan undiscovered Hippo ROFL!! Aww I love the movie Vivah too and OMg even I get scared of heights lol.. Like how u r showing their nature and the romance/teasing part at the end;)..keep it up girlie..
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Posted: 14 years ago
super brilliant update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lol Geet forgive him soo easily..lol ans strip..haha i couldnt imagine geet thinking that ..haha..and I am Scared of dark too ..i was scare for a moment..lol but awesome part ROCKING!
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Posted: 14 years ago
the boxers part was jokes 😆 loved it and do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!!! luvv u guys and yeah she forgave him cuz she knew she had been annoying tooo LOLZ!!
Edited by cutiepie9512345 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Romantic Update! It was DaMn GoOd!!!!!!!!!!
I Absolutely LOVE This FF SooooOooooOooo Much!
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Awesome Romantic Update! It was DaMn GoOd!!!!!!!!!!

I Absolutely LOVE This FF SooooOooooOooo Much!
-Jassi




AWWWWWWWWWWW thanks lovee!!!

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