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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cutiepie9512345



jaan this is nothing come ova ill show u besharam...
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Oh d-d-d-dear...tum mujhe heart palpitations kyun ke rahi ho....if you could see me right now you'd laugh your head off seein my reaction after reading your reply. Mere mann ki shanti ke liye, lets stop with the teasing here....varna mujhe darr lagne lagega tumse
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Posted: 14 years ago


jaan this is nothing come ova ill show u besharam...
.😲🤣
Oh d-d-d-dear...tum mujhe heart palpitations kyun ke rahi ho....if you could see me right now you'd laugh your head off seein my reaction after reading your reply. Mere mann ki shanti ke liye, lets stop with the teasing here....varna mujhe darr lagne lagega tumse

shayad yehi to main chahti hoon😉
okay okay lets stop 😆
let me almost finish the update nowww😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice...do continue plzz.
thx for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
guys where r sum of ur comments...???
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Posted: 14 years ago

😃 guys you need to comment...it motivates me and i don't feel like i'm writing for no reason. 😕 Again if u don't like something say so...criticism is WELCOME!! 😊

Chapter 15:

Geet woke up and stretched then she smiled at the thought of her dream day.

"Aaj meri shaadi hai, aur har lardki is din ke khwaab dekhti hai…Babaji aap ka lakh lakh shukar hai."

Then the phone rang.

"Itni subhah subhah?" she picked it up and…

"Hey wifey!! Mere bare main soch rahi thi?"

"Soon-to-be wife that is…and noo main toh-"

"Excuses excuses…and kuch aur ghanton kit oh baat hai….WIFEYYYY"

"Maan kis liye phone kiya aap ne?''

"Aap ne? Wow meri company tumhe suit kar rahi hai.."

"Oye…dust danav zaida baatein mat banao…ek toh izzat do aap keh ke upar se janaab ke nakhre.."she said saying the first part softly.

"Acha…tum ghussa bohat jaldi ho jaati ho"

"Phone kis liye kiya?"

"Kya ab mujhe tumhaari ijaazat ki zaroorat hai apni Wifeyy ko phone karne ke liye?"

"Oye hoye vaari jaavan soneyo"

"What ever it is aaj humari shaadi hai…even though we didn't want to…ab humme ek dusre ko jhailna toh parega naa…so friends?" he said.

"Hmmmmm main soch ke batati hoon"she said teasingly.

"Geet!"

"Fine friends!!! It is….bye cutie…"and she quickly shut the phone leaving him annoyed and happy at the same time.

"Did she just cut the phone on me?? Nah..Maan take it easy..she can'tshut the phone on MSK.."

Geet was decorated like the most lavish and elegant bride ever. Her dress was simple with heavy jewery topping it off with a backless choli. The choli had deep-cut neck and fitted just above her waist line, the ghungat was set in a way to hide this because this was the dress-style. (link: http://www.paklinks.com/gsmedia/files/62296/4589.jpg)

"Aaj to virji gaye" laughed Naintara.

"That's after our plan…"giggled Ridz.

Maan waited at the mandap eagerly.

"Bro, aajayein gi bhabhi, relax"

"Yaar, pehli raat bata dena, warna poori life pashtai ga.." said Atul.

"Look who's talking" laughed Armaan rolling his eyes.

"Yaar, main keh raha hoon na…start off with a wedding-night speech. Armaan ki sunega to saari zindagi bhaagta phirega uske peeche" said Atul.

"Yeah like you can touch Anjii whenever you want?" said Armaan.

As Atul and Armaan were fighting Geet came down. Maan's stomach twisted, he was awe-struck.

She came and sat beside him blushing, her cheeks complimented the dress. He smiled at her.

They did their phere, vowing sincerely. He then put the mangal-sutre around her neck and then the sindoor.

They were married finally! They took their blessings and love, and Geet met with her parents and they were off to Geet's new home.

They were sitting in the living room while Dadi got the rasams ready.

"Aap dono main se jo bhi is ring ko pehlay dhunde ga doodh main se woh dusre pay zaida dominating ho ga" said Dadi.

"Cumon Maan…"

"Geet hi win karegi" said the girls confidently.

"GO!"

They both started, their right hands searched for the ring, then….

Geet pulled out the ring with a huge smile on her face.

"YAYYYYYY!!!!" said the women Dadi included.

"Koi baat nahi wedding night speech yaad hai na tujhe?"asked Atul.

"Haan magar-" Maan looked tense for the first time.

PRECAP:

Maneet suhaagraat!!!!


Comment and ill update faster....😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow super mindblowing update finally they got married pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome!! plz..do continue soon.
thx for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
liked the convo of maneet n the way they r trying to become friends😆
obviously geet would have the upper hand😆 n maan being tensed for the first time🤣
continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
Comment and I'll update faster?! Achaji
To phir I'll keep commenting till you get frustrated and update ASAP. Thoda rehem karo na hun :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pushpi

Comment and I'll update faster?! Achaji

To phir I'll keep commenting till you get frustrated and update ASAP. Thoda rehem karo na hun :-)



oye hoye!!😉
rehem hi to kar rahi hoon agar na karti toh itne updates karti hmmm???😃
nd did u like it???😭




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