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tinatartari thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
so sweet nacaring they both r!!loving bachan 2 tis time:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi muskan

jaldi update karo na yaar
eagerly waiting for the next part
just thinking what will happen when Geet regains her conciousness

love
Nidhi
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 30

she opened her eyes, meeting his gaze. she jumped up
touched his forehead & caressed his cheeks - aap teehk ho
how is ur fever now, subha wali medicin le? abhi body pain to nahi hain?
maan held her from her shoulders shaking her slowly - geet geet main teehk hoon
tumne aapna yeh kya haal bana rahka hain
geet pulled her drips off - zaroor armaan ka kaam hoga
kanha hain woh,
she felt weak & seem to lose balance
maan held her - yeh kya kar rahi ho, just lie down now
geet - aap to meri baat nahi mante, phir main aapki baat kyun mano
maan - tumhari har baat to manta hoon
geet - I asked to be here yesterday
maan - kaam tha na
geet turned her face away. armaan walked - geet drips kyun nikala?
ridz comes in helps puts the drips back. geet noticed armaan getting restless
she giggled winking at armaan. armaan was turning pink.
ridz bend to check geets BP, she tossed her dupatta & it fell on armaans face
& he was mesmerised. geet almost fell laughing looking armaan like that
maan wondered why was geet reacting strangly
geet wispered to maan ridz hain
maan wispered armaan ki ridz
geet noded
after ridz left, armaan sat next to geet holding her hand - kaise lagi
geet - bahut pyari hain, lekin
armaan - lekin kya
geet - tu use aapni dil ki baat kab batayega
armaan looked nervous
geet - jaldi bolde warna koi misunderstanding na hojaye
maan Interupted - how can he tell her without knowing her feelings
armaan - exactly my point
geet - jab tak bolega nahi to pata kaise chalega
maan - agar usne mana kar diya to
armaan made a baby face nodding to maan
geet - is dar se betah raha to hogaya, waise bhi aap ko insab ke bare main kam hi
mallom hain, to aap insab main aapna time mat waste karo
she now looks at armaan pehle tu use pareshan karna band kar & start droping sings
maan again Interupts - agar woh signals na samjhe to
armaan - han yaar seriously, she just does'nt understand
maine to karva chaut ka vrat raka tha
geet - u did'nt tell her it was for her
armaan - but I said that I wanted to break the fast with her
maan - that was great move
geet - what great move, woh to mujhe bhi kaha tha tumne ki we will have dinner togather
woh to main inke saat thi, nahi to tumhara karva chaut phir main break kar rahi thi
maan noded for a BIG NO...
geet - arrey yaar u love her right...then why are u so scared of her know
no boleghi to mana lena
maan - what if she stops talking to him
armaan - yes yes
geet rolls her eyes - kaha na mana lena
maan seeing her getting angry - agar woh tumhari tarah gussa wali huai to
& holds is breath expecting a scream, thrash may be some thing flying
armaan - na ..woh itna gussa nahi karti
geet waks armaan - kya matlab, main bahut gussa wali hoon
maan - iska matlab hain woh uttna gussa nahi karti
armaan winks at maan
geet gets really furious & throws the flower wase at maan
maan aah!!! geet - lagi maan - LAGI!!!
geet - tu aur mar kavo, waise bhi main to bahut gussa wali hoona
& waks him with the bottle that was lying on the side table
maan holds her hand - geet bus karo please
armaan continues to laugh & stops when geet shoots a glare at him
armaan - sweet heart raj ka phone aaya tha, he was worried
geet - I will call him

geet calls rajveer
raj - how are feeling now, aur yeh sab kya hain, bachan ke liya tension & getting fever
geet - nahi woh
raj - I want u to stop talking to bachan, I don't like all this
geet - nahi raj, aisa nahi hain
raj - give to phone to armaan
geet - lekin meri baat to suno
raj - give it now
she quitely gives the phone to armaan
maan lifted her chin & lifted his eye brows kya huwa, she looked away
raj - have u met this guy
armaan - arrey he is hear only
raj - umm
armaan - do u want to talk to him
raj - nahi I am not getting nice wibes
armaan walks out - nahi aise nahi hain, he seems to be just a cool friend
raj - are u sure
armaan - umm
armaan gives the phone to geet - umm
raj -I am just worried for u
geet - sab teehk hain na
raj - yah..just take care..miss u
geet - miss u a lot

armaan - u can go home now
geet - thanxs
armaan - i will pick u at 7am tomorrow
geet looks at maan if it is ok...maan nodes his head
armaan - how far is it from here
maan - 3hrs drive hain
armaan - perfect we will leave tomorrow & will be back on sunday evening
geet - yaar prem abhi taak nahi aaya
armaan - he called, he said he will join us directly there
geet - ok
maan - challo ghar drop kardeta hoon
armaan - please have ur medicin nahi to kal ka plan cancel karna padega
geet smiled

they drew back to handa hawali
geet - see u at 7 -7.30am tomorrow
maan - umm
geet - bye
maan - suno
geet - ji
maan - may sound wired but I liked that u were bothered about me
geet - GF hoon itna to pharz banta hain..caressed his hairs
waise ek baat kahoon
maan - umm
geet - mujhe aacha laga ki aap ko aacha laga, every one feels that I am
very chipku types, like no breathing space
maan - pagal hain wo log
geet - kyun
maan - tumhare bhina saans leena bhi koi saans leena huwa
geet - aaj ke liya jaada ho gaya, bye
maan smiled & left

geet dicussed her plan to the farm house to rano
rano helped her pack her bag & got her dress ready.

next day called maan at 5.30am
maan - itna jaldi kaise utt gaye
geet - jaldi kanha hain 5.30 hogaya hain
maan smiled at her change in sence of timing
geet - I got up to switch off ur watch
maan - how are u feeling now
geet - i am fine, aap gym main ho
maan - umm
geet - suno t-shirt pehena
maan - umm
geet - red wali with blue jeans
maan - aur kuch
geet - nahi
maan - get ready now, armaan aata hi hoga

at 7.15 geet reaches in her BMW to maans place & honks
maan comes out with a back bag - armaan kanha hain
geet - he is not coming koi emergency hain
maan - prem?
geet - I have given him the address, he will meet us directly there
maan puts his bag in the back seat & asks her to move from the driver seat
she slips to the passanger seat & puts on the seat belt
maan checks her forehead - abhi bhi fever hain
geet - nahi, I am fine thoda hi hain
maan - are u carrying ur medicin
geet looked disintrested.
maan drove to the nearest pharmcy & picked her medicin, gave her a water bottle & medicin
geet made a face & had her medicin. it was a 3 hr drive, geet yapped yapped
for few mins & dossed off. the farmhouse was spread across 1000 acres of land
geet woke with the road being bumpy - are we their yet
maan - umm we have just entered
she opened her eyes to see the whole place was so diiferent from the rest of the world


the air had freshness...as they reached closer she could get the distinct smell of the animal
maan - we are passing near the stable

geet peeps out - wow its so beautiful
they reach the farm house & geet runs out to see the horses
maan - geet suno..she was already gone too ahead close to the rim & leaning forward &
enjoying the view

maan instructed the caretaker to shift the luggage & arrange lunch for three

precap
horse ride!!!!


Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome.. i just read two parts together....
love this geet so sensitive!!!... i really wish maan falls ill in the current scenarion in our serial.. where he cant do anything and geet has to take care of him or geet falling ill.. maan cant show his anger and has to take care of his geet!!!
anyway.. yeh rajvir ka kya story.. is this something like she is ij love with rajvir or something.. if thats the case maan is gonna be hurt too much!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update...

y raj is like this... is he in love with geet.... ?

i think prem also wont able to join them.. so only maneet 👏 👏 👏
Edited by nithi07 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
waoww farmhouse looks so beautiful n refreshing.. wonderful holiday destination... and whole update is really awesome.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice yaar...perfect location to propose na ,,,,,,,,
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 29 n 30
Loved Geet's care for Maan
Prem n Armaan were rght
Geet in the tension fall sick
Bechara Maan
Liked the way Armaan got mixed wit Maan
Geet kabhi bhi tease karna nahi chodegi
Maan was in short explaining his prob n Geet was giving him solution
Loved his care also
Their journey was quite
Lets c wat happens there as Maaneet are jus alone no one else there😉
Raj isnt liking ths frndshp
Hop koi prob na ho
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Posted: 14 years ago
di the last photo is hot.... im dying.... OMG awesome update.... wait wait is raj not like Armaan and prem... i think he is over protective of Geet.... tell him tat Maan will take care of Geet...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update........at last in farm house......lukin for sum real cute n romantic moments........
Bt Muskaan who is dis Rajveer.nt getin gud vibes..plz dun cum wid a parallel lead.....maan n geet r made for eachother

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