FF: Sacha Pyaar - Part 5 Pg. 37 - Page 17

Originally posted by: ayeshaaa.

please add me to ur pm list ;D

amazinggg. love flirty maan :)

You're added! 😉 And who doesn't like the flirty Maan? 😛 😆

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

great ff

just loved it

plz add me to ur pm list

Thanks!! 😃

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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome ff. loved it.
read ll parts.
pm me when u'll update.
update soon.

Thank u! Will definitely PM u when w/ my next update... 😉

Originally posted by: tinatartari

wat a beautiful ff!!im amazed!!i love this flirty nature of maan;so cute n m looking 4ward 2 the dance.plz dnt go into unnecessary details n write more scenes n dialogues,if u dnt mind i gave ma suggestion.the decoration of stage etc z nt so imp.plz add me 2 ur pm list n update soon n pm me abt ur next update.

Hey, you're the first one w/ a criticism. Nice! 😆 I wish all the readers were more honest like u. 👏

But I have to back myself up, right? So here it goes:

I felt like I needed to describe the setting of the stage b/c if you read carefully, I mentioned towards the end of Part 3 (right before where I included the video of the stage) that that's how Maan felt when he saw the stage. I needed some way of expressing his feelings, so I used the description of the stage.

And also, I needed a way to bring in some more characters like Pinky, Meera, and Dr. Yash through the decoration of the stage. Since this Sanjeevani Hospital is Dr. Yash's father's, the decorations needed to be approved by him. This is a way to show his role and importance in the hospital.

Pinky and Meera helping out in the hospital portraits more of Geet's character. As I already mentioned in the Intro (at Yash's part), Geet volunteers at the hospital. Through Pinky and Meera, both whom are Geet's friends, decorating for the show shows the admiration and importance Geet has in the hospital.

I hope I didn't sound too strict. 😆 I still appreciate your honesty. ❤️

You're now added to the PM list. I'll def. PM u w/ the next update... 😉

Originally posted by: sanjulee

nice part...

update nxt part soon

eagerly waiting for nxt...

& Plz PM me...

Thanks! Def. will PM u... 😃

Originally posted by: trishap

nice update .... add me to pm

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Originally posted by: Shalve

wow.... nice storyline.... pls add me to yr PM List....

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Nice update

hey dear..

nice FF..

cont soon..

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Originally posted by: sweetshab

hey dear..

nice FF..

cont soon..

add me to ur PM list..