khwaish (sujal aur kashish ki) - Page 56

Originally posted by: shruti_gauri1

thx jaan u r the best reader ihave some time ago u become don traini😆but i love it u fight with me u love me just want to say i have no words to express my feeling thanx dear

hila phirse thanx jaldise wapas lelo warna is baar paka tapkadoongi samjhi😡

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hila phirse thanx jaldise wapas lelo warna is baar paka tapkadoongi samjhi😡

haila tapkao mat leti hoon thx wapis but ur best i love u😛just pm me ur meesanger id i want to talk with u

exceeeeeeeeeeelllent part yaar...just commented on the other link....it was amaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing...great work shurti...your the best 👏

Originally posted by: shruti_gauri1

ANA-MY ADORABLE FRND

no thanx di....................u r too sweet k hum ko bhi sweet samjh bethay..............app say thora kaam hi sweet hain hum

or app iss love to deserve kartay thay di...................

ur story is just teriffic...............mind blowing👏 .......mind blasting............sonu..................sweet ooo..............(just like my RAJ & SRK).................clute..................janu..... ..........lovely dovely
😳

this part was rocking
chah is so sweet........................piyush waqt pay entry mari..............pehli bar time pay aaya hai😆.................anadi naam accha hai...........(meray naam say thora match bhi kar raha hai😉)....................lalit uncle tau baass khanay k peechay hain😆.................veena aunty ko dekh loo.................khila khila k kia bana dia hai😉....................dear sur dii jii..............story kamal thi............dhamal thi.................

we will miss u tooooooooooooo badddddddllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyy😭
jaldi wapis ana
or first attempt kaffi aachi gai................hope k agay bhi acchi jaye gii
BEST OF LUCK

HAVE A GR888888888888888 VOCATION.
lots of love
ana

Originally posted by: rajeev1

exceeeeeeeeeeelllent part yaar...just commented on the other link....it was amaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing...great work shurti...your the best 👏

thx farah ji u r the best reader of my story

Shruti ur story was AMAZING!!!!!!!!! 👏
Bahut hi achi story likhi hai aapne... I loved it!!!
Ending to Zabardast!!!!! it was sooooo gooood I don't know how to express it!!! It was just tooo good...
Thank you sooo much for taking ur time to write such a wonderful story! 😳 😳 😳

-Areej

wow sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooo
sweet lol i loved it, ending was awesome 👏

Originally posted by: sun_423

my dearest shrutu ab main tumhe kya kahoon.. tune itni zabardast ending di hain apni story ko ki main bayaan nahi kar sakthi mujhe teri story kitni achchi lagi.. 👏 tho diya piyush ki biwi hain coolllllll main is sawaal ke jawaab ke liye kabse wait kar rahi hoon.........😆 😆 sujal kashish ka chah ke liye pyaar , sujal ki bebasi , kashish ke aasoon , sujal trying to tell kashish the truth , charu ka sujal se kehna ki woh kashish aur chah ko rokhle , sujal ka kashish ko haath pakadkar ghar le aana , sabke saamne kehna ki kashish uski biwi aur chah us ghar ki pothi hain uski beti hain , sujal ka kashish se poochna ki kya woh uski humsafar banegi aur ek ek scene likhthi jaogi tho yeh kabhi khatam hi nahi hoga 😳 all was just toooooooo damnnnnnnnnnnnn goodddddddddddddd..... ur story is just the best..mind blowing......... 👏 & ya the songs u have used are so apt to the situation aur tere last mein poetry ka tho kya kehna... seriously tumhara tho jawaab nahi wah wah wah.. 👏
no shukriya for posting your story...... 😊 😛 😃 i totally loved reading it.......tum jaanthi ho i took 1 hour to read your story aur it was soo intresting that mujhe waqt ka andaza bhi nahi hua... 😛
khawish was just SUPERB , AWESOME, EXCELLENT, FANTASTIC, PAR EXCELLENCE , MIND-BLASTING in short according to me the BEST OF THE BEST........... 👏
love you loads.......... 🤗
plz start a new fanfic soon.. me will be waiting teri likhne ke andaaz par tho hum fida ho gaye dil tho ek dum kayal ho gaya.............u just ROCK........ tu tho ek STAR hain...👍🏼

haila janu kya comment hai main to ro dungi 😭😭itna pyaar tumney diya hai kabhi lagta hai ki is pyaar ke kabil bhi hoon main neways jaan tuney to poori detail main story pardi thi😳😳

pata nahi kaisey likha bas likh diya😆

love you lot.......... 🤗

and jaan u know na whenver i will be free i will surerly write something