khwaish (sujal aur kashish ki) - Page 57

Originally posted by: cool_SK

no thanx di....................u r too sweet k hum ko bhi sweet samjh bethay..............app say thora kaam hi sweet hain hum

or app iss love to deserve kartay thay di...................

ur story is just teriffic...............mind blowing👏 .......mind blasting............sonu..................sweet ooo..............(just like my RAJ & SRK).................clute..................janu..... ..........lovely dovely
😳

this part was rocking
chah is so sweet........................piyush waqt pay entry mari..............pehli bar time pay aaya hai😆.................anadi naam accha hai...........(meray naam say thora match bhi kar raha hai😉)....................lalit uncle tau baass khanay k peechay hain😆.................veena aunty ko dekh loo.................khila khila k kia bana dia hai😉....................dear sur dii jii..............story kamal thi............dhamal thi.................

we will miss u tooooooooooooo badddddddllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyy😭
jaldi wapis ana
or first attempt kaffi aachi gai................hope k agay bhi acchi jaye gii
BEST OF LUCK

HAVE A GR888888888888888 VOCATION.
lots of love
ana

ana that was really sweet thx nahi bolungi kyunki sis ko thx nahi boltey hai😛😛

and wah wah kya comment hai main totally fida

and ji i will miss u alot but i promise jab bhi main wapis aaoungi i will be back with a bang😆😆

luv u lotttttttttttttttt😳😳😳

Originally posted by: Shezaadi

Shruti ur story was AMAZING!!!!!!!!! 👏
Bahut hi achi story likhi hai aapne... I loved it!!!
Ending to Zabardast!!!!! it was sooooo gooood I don't know how to express it!!! It was just tooo good...
Thank you sooo much for taking ur time to write such a wonderful story! 😳 😳 😳

-Areej

hey areej thx u yaar for ur sweet comment i always love ur comment they motivate a lot i m happy that u liked my story thx

Originally posted by: Kashish_88

wow sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooo
sweet lol i loved it, ending was awesome 👏

thx kashish for ur sweet comment

dear shruti

The story was just wonderful. Loved it. Anadi and chah were very sweet names u choosed. This story was just wonderful. you are a wonderful writer.

Pls write another story. as soon as possible start anotherone. Will b waiting for it.

golu

Originally posted by: golu_1677

dear shruti

The story was just wonderful. Loved it. Anadi and chah were very sweet names u choosed. This story was just wonderful. you are a wonderful writer.

Pls write another story. as soon as possible start anotherone. Will b waiting for it.

golu

thanx di i m glad u liked my story actually main aapki story ki bahut bardi fan hoon di pls write another story di

hey shruthi kya mast part likha hai 👏
bahut ache part the aur story bhi 👏
keep up the good work 😊

hey dearest shruti,
wowwwwwwwwwwwww man.....wut a wonderful part...toally luved it...it was shoooo shweet......i almost cried at the end....luved all ur dialogues n everythin.....our song selection ka kya kahoon...it was jus fantastic......sorry i cudn't comment earlier....but since i ve my examz...i m not able 2 keep up wid everythin ....n da poem u had at the end...i was jus spell bound....it was AMAZING.....i m really gonna miss ur story....n da name khwahish totally suitz it...the way u used da nme at the end in dair conversation....sooo creative sweety......now plz don't stop writin.....i ll b eagerly waitin 4 ur nxt story on our best jodi...n awwwwnnn....anadi was a sweet name....----it was so sweet of sujal not 2 marry diya...n he told everythin 2 oderz....soo kewlllll.....i noe my msg iz soundin kinda weird..cuz i keep on goin back n forth n changin my topic....ths cuz there z soo much 2 mention---i get started newhere.... i used u luv ths story b4 too...but after ths part....i wanna get writin lessonz 4m u.....i guess den my stupid english budhi teacher mite b happy---i hate readin....but den i don't think dair z ne fan fic of sk dat i ve ever missed readin.....newayz....so when shud i expect ur nxt story....i ll keep mi fingerz crossed n jus hope dat u start ur new fan fic soon.....u noe wut...ic an go on 4 hourz n keep on writin abt ur story....but i don't want u 2 get bored...so i better stop now...tc....luved ths awsum, fantastic, teriffic, sweet, cute, creative, n spectacular stoy......GOOD JOB... 👏

hi! shruti

Thanx for liking my story i thought all of u would have forgotten abt it. As far as the new story goes now i dont have time to write a story very busy now adays.

Sorry cannot fulfil ur wish.

golu

Originally posted by: parvathicanada

hey shruthi kya mast part likha hai 👏
bahut ache part the aur story bhi 👏
keep up the good work 😊

thx parvati dear u r comment always give me strength txx a lot luv u

Originally posted by: group_1223

hey dearest shruti,
wowwwwwwwwwwwww man.....wut a wonderful part...toally luved it...it was shoooo shweet......i almost cried at the end....luved all ur dialogues n everythin.....our song selection ka kya kahoon...it was jus fantastic......sorry i cudn't comment earlier....but since i ve my examz...i m not able 2 keep up wid everythin ....n da poem u had at the end...i was jus spell bound....it was AMAZING.....i m really gonna miss ur story....n da name khwahish totally suitz it...the way u used da nme at the end in dair conversation....sooo creative sweety......now plz don't stop writin.....i ll b eagerly waitin 4 ur nxt story on our best jodi...n awwwwnnn....anadi was a sweet name....----it was so sweet of sujal not 2 marry diya...n he told everythin 2 oderz....soo kewlllll.....i noe my msg iz soundin kinda weird..cuz i keep on goin back n forth n changin my topic....ths cuz there z soo much 2 mention---i get started newhere.... i used u luv ths story b4 too...but after ths part....i wanna get writin lessonz 4m u.....i guess den my stupid english budhi teacher mite b happy---i hate readin....but den i don't think dair z ne fan fic of sk dat i ve ever missed readin.....newayz....so when shud i expect ur nxt story....i ll keep mi fingerz crossed n jus hope dat u start ur new fan fic soon.....u noe wut...ic an go on 4 hourz n keep on writin abt ur story....but i don't want u 2 get bored...so i better stop now...tc....luved ths awsum, fantastic, teriffic, sweet, cute, creative, n spectacular stoy......GOOD JOB... 👏

hey fiza janu thx yaar for ur sweet comment i loved u u know the song i selected for my story r my personal fav darling ur comment is amazing and i will continue my story as soon as i m free