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Posted: 14 years ago

Ok!
Sorry for that huge delay. Im just gonna post this now and come back later and write everything else ok?
I gtg to the gym but be back later!


Alright, so like hello!
I am sooo sorry for all that time i took, i mean there was no excuse after the second week of june lmao, after that i was a]lazy b]bad with time management
really, like i just couldnt update becuz i had a brian freeze and the ideas are blotchy so like...yea...
btw thanks to jasangel, my motivator 😆🤗


Part 8: Our Song is the Love in Your Eyes, and When We Dance, Baby, It's on Full Blast

He still remembered that day. The annual fresher's day bash at Delhi University School of Business. Like every year since the day he had arrived, Shravan and he had decided to go stag. There would be plenty of single ladies around- why restrict themselves?

He had never believed in love, never thought he ever would. His life-his parents- had served him only to veer away from any hints at that ridiculous concept. But that day, that moment, that instant. The second he set eyes on her, he had known right then and there that life was about to change.

He hadn't known who she was, had never met her before. He had only seen her across the dance floor, dressed in a simple aqua blue floor length gown, adorned only with her bracelet, chain, and earrings; she had been beauty in simplicity. In the back of his mind had flickered the silly notion that they were meant to be, because the color of their clothes- he had worn an aqua colored shit underneath a black blazer- had matched.

But, yes, he remembered when he had spotted her, and his breath had caught. As he made his way across the floor, he had felt nervous for the first time since he was a fifteen year old teenager. He had felt slightly relieved to find that she was talking to someone he knew, Prithvi from his economics class. The moments after walking up to her had always been a blur. He could never quite remember what they had conversed about; the only thing he remembered next was that they were on the dance floor.

She had fit into his arms like they were two pieces of a puzzle-perfectly. As they begun swaying to slow beats he remembered not being able to keep his gaze away from her. And each time their eyes met, he had seen her blush deepen. It was then he knew that it was love, and that she felt it too.

That moment, that time, that song. It would forever be ingrained in his mind. He had heard that song so many times before that day, but it never made an impact, it had never seemed very special. That night, it had turned into one of his most favorite songs.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hb9tNY6tVIM[/YOUTUBE]

Mujhe teri aankhon ki gehrai mein doobne de
Mujhe teri baahon ki jannat mein khone de
Tere bina ye jeevan jaise suna sapna
Tere bina tujhko har pal dhoondhe ye dil mera
Mujhe teri aankhon ki gehrai mein doobne de

Na na nahin jaana pyaar kya, nahin jaana hota hai ye intezaar kya

Teri aankhon ne sab kuch kaha, kyun na kahe teri subaan
Maana maana maine pyaar hai, kaisa chaya dekho mujhpe khumaar hai
Mere sang zameen aur aasman, phir kyun khoyi meri har disha
Mujhe teri aankhon ki gehrai mein doobne de
Mujhe teri baahon ki jannat mein khone de

Tere bina, tere bina har pal lagey suna sa

Ik tujhse hi ban ta mera jahaan pyaara pyaara
De do na mujhko har khushi, haan kehta hai mujhse ye dil mera
Mujhe teri aankhon ki gehrai mein doobne de
Mujhe teri baahon ki jannat mein khone de

Har zarre mein, har jagah mein mehsoos karti hoon main

Ik tujhko hi haan tujhko hi mehfuz rakhti hoon main
Khayalon mein, dil mein, meri saanson mein
Gungunati hoon tujhko har baat mein


Mujhe teri aankhon ki gehrai mein doobne de
Mujhe teri baahon ki jannat mein khone de
Na na na ..

*/\/----\/\*

He couldn't believe how easily they had fallen into each other's lives. She had returned home to Mumbai soon after, but they had kept in touch. Evading Shravan's playful remarks and teasing he had spent over an hour a day talking to her on the phone or Skyping. It wasn't long, however, before he had reached Mumbai after her.

The affluent and caring Mr. Modi wasn't one to pass up a chance to make his son happy. Junior Mr. Modi was soon the MD of a new branch of Modi Enterprises, owner of an awesome flat, roommate to his best friend and associate Shravan, and of course, loving full time secret boyfriend to Rhiddima Gupta.

He remembered the day their father's had found out about them. Or well, they found out that the fathers had known all along. Her surprise birthday party had set the stage for a huge revelation:

Sid and Shravan walked in together, Sid nervously adjusting his hair and shirt as his eyes searched the room. They had been invited as mere acquaintances through the clever cunning of Rhiddima's friend Saachi. Now that he was here, however, he felt ready to bolt out the wooden and glass doors that led into the grand Gupta house. As he took deep breaths, he felt a reassuring hand land on his shoulder. He looked towards Shravan, who smiled at him confidently, winking to show his support. Rolling his shoulders, Siddhant looked out at the crowd filling the hall, he had to find the elusive Mr. Gupta, and make sure he made a great first impression. It was, after all, the question of the rest of his life.

"Siddhant Modi?"

Sid and Shravan turned at the sound of a female voice from behind them. They found a petite woman around their age staring expectantly at them, "yes," Sid replied, "hi."

She smiled brightly, "HI JEEJU!" she leaped at as surprised Sid who shot a bemused Shravan a look of panic, jeeju?

"I'm Arohi!" the girl said pulling back, "and it's my job that you find Shashank Uncle and make a great impression!"

Sid smiled brightly down at her, he liked this girl already!

"Aru?"

Sid froze as a strong male voice called out to her from behind him. Arohi looked around Sid to spot the source of the voice, pulling back, she gave him a pat on the shoulder, winking at him she walked past, "Uncle!" she exclaimed, "hi!"

Sid could feel the jitters setting in again, his face paling as he realized that his hopefully future father in law stood behind him. Sid felt Shravan's hand on his back again, swallowing forcefully, he turned around with what he hoped was a reassuring, kind, and nice guy, perfect for your daughter kind of smile. The smile disappeared as Shashank gave him a once over, gave Arohi a hug, said something to her' and walked away.

Sid stared after him, shocked, that was absolutely not the way that should have gone! He contemplated chasing after him, but was sidetracked to hear Shravan fighting laughter along with Arohi. He gave them a hurt look before stalking off, his heart just broke, some friend he was'

"Sid." He turned away, ignoring a smiling Shravan, "dude, listen. He'll come around. He doesn't even know you, you're a stranger. He'll love you. Really. You're Siddhant Modi remember, father's favorite?" Sid cracked a smile at the jest, a remembrance of their college days. He nodded, determined once again. He walked towards the stairs, where Shashank stood laughing with some guests. It was then that the lights dimmed, and Saachi scurried in, "SHE'S COMING!" she whisper screamed.

The hall felt dead silent as the spotlight focused on the door.

"Saachi why are we stopping at my hou-" Rhiddima's voice faltered as she saw the dark hall and spotlight on her.

"SURPRISE!"

At first fright flitted across her face, her nerves shaken by the sudden noise, as she finally took in the hall, however, surprise and excitement lit up her face. She beamed as her father emerged from the crowd, offering her a hug. She dove into his arms, always daddy's little girl. Rhiddima scanned the crowd, her sight landing on a vision that took her breath away; there he stood, nervous and fretting beside a calm and collected Shravan, she smiled at his over her father's shoulder. He seemed to stand up taller, fierce determination overcoming his stance. He began approaching the two.

Shashank pulled back, addressing the crowd to state that today, along with being his little girl's birthday, was a happy day because he finally got to meet his best friend after decades. His best friend made his way through the crowd, Shashank grinned as the man enveloped him in a hug. Rhiddima was introduced and promptly enclosed in a fatherly hug; it was after those introductions that the elderly duo made their shocking announcement.

"We've been friends for years, too many to count," Shashank stated, "but that's going to change."

Rhiddima's face paled as she realized where this was heading. The newly introduced uncle had a mischievous glint in his eyes as he spoke, "from now on, we are on the way to becoming family. Rhiddima is going to be my new daughter. Welcome to my family Rhiddima beta," he said fondly. The two fathers smiled down at a stunned Rhiddima. She'd always thought that her father would let her choose her own husband; this was so sudden, so shocking. She didn't know how to react.

Fortunately, or unfortunately, before she had to someone else did.

Sid stood in front of the three of them, his face as shocked as hers, disbelief written across his face, but what he said next managed to daze his precious Rhiddima even more, "DAD?!"


*More to come! yay! *dance dance*

Edited by malluangel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
told you there was more!
comments to be returned later!


Part 9: The Dance Goes On

"THANK. GOD."

"Finally."

"Someone give me a bed…"

"DAAT!"

"CHI"

"HAAT!"

Arjun, Shravan, and Siddhant watched aghast as Arohi, Saachi, and Rhiddima walked off to the hotel in a huff, leaving them near the vehicles.

"What was that about?" Arjun ventured.

"I don't really know…"
"I do," Sid said knowledgably, "They watch too many Hindi serials."

The three guys exchanged grins before heading towards the hotel after the girls. All six of them were exhausted after the trip; all they wanted was a hot shower, food, and a bed.

They joined the girls at the reception counter, Saachi had been in charge of the reservations and with Aru and Rhiddi's help, she had come on with the perfect arrangement. The girl grinned as Shravan was handed three keys to a suite and then grabbing three to their own, the girl pranced off ridden with giggles at poor Shravan's face.

Shravan turned to glare at his confused companions, flinging the two cards at them he began to rant.

"WHAT SORT OF ROMANTIC GETAWAY IS THIS!?!?"

He approached them menacingly, finger in the air, waving it in front of their faces he continued speaking in a steady, low, and angry voice, "tum logon ki chakkar mein, I. I have to stay in a room that's probably at the other end of the damn hotel than my WIFE'S." he turned on his heel, heading for the elevators and leaving a shaken Sid and Arjun behind, they were both wide-eyed and holding each other for support. Shravan didn't get mad often, he was a chilled out, calm kind of guy, but when he did get mad, he reminded them of Gabbar. They recovered as the receptionist giggled at their state, rolling back their shoulders they chased after the infuriated Shravan.

It wasn't as bad as Shravan had thought, the suites were in fact right next to each other, and after freshening up the three couples met in the hall, heading for a small dinner before deciding to crash for the day.

As they sat around waiting for their order to arrive, they conversed while distractedly watching the live performance. Soon that shut down and the dance floor opened, the hostess inviting couples to enjoy the night and dance. The group decided right away that they were too tired to and busied themselves eating the newly arrived food.

The girls all sat along one side of the table, each facing their significant other. For reasons yet unknown to the guys, the girls were mad at them. As the guys apologized to them secretly, strains of a familiar song came on. Sid was up immediately, standing beside Rhiddima with an outstretched hand, ready to dance despite his exhaustion. She obliged right away, and they walked to the floor hand in hand. The other two couples sat watching them, by now they'd all been friends long enough to know the story. Whenever that song came on, no matter what, Sid would be pulling her to the dance floor. It was their song.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hb9tNY6tVIM[/YOUTUBE]


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Posted: 14 years ago

Reserved...

Btw Aishu, when will you discover the art of PMing abt updates?????????????😡
Unreserved : SInce you commented abt my long comments I'm going to leave a one line comment.. 😛
I loved the update and the way you described the events from their first meeting to their 'surprise' engagement - Great job and pls continue soon and do learn the art of PMing 😛
P.S - I guess its impossible/impossibly difficult for me to give a one line comment unless its twitter that refuses to post my deep thoughts and forces me within the 140 character limit. 😆
Edited by neet06 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
No PM!? 😡 Well i prefer tweet over PM! 😆 😛

Suuueeettt update!! The way you described SR's first meeting... esp Sid's POV... lol how he was sooo sure she is the one... that was... awww shhooo shweeettt!!! 😳

lmao the otherwise sweet and sober Shravan's sudden outburst was hilarious 😆 but he was right to act that way! 😉

Shanky and daddy Modi's surprise was hahahahahah awesome!!! Caught SR out of the box!! 🤣 I mean just imagine their reaction!! 🤣

Finally i must say i am SHOCKED to see that you actually updated!! 😛 Now continue soon <<<< i know u wont 😆 but still there's nothing wrong in tryna convince u to update soon.. 🤔
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aishu🤗
Absolutely wow! I read all the parts in one go and I was totally absorbed in the story! I loved the way you flitted the narrative between the happy moments of the past and the anxiety and fear of the present.
So many questions going through my mind...who was the man in the red watching them? Is Ridhimma Okay? Whats happened to the baby?
Update soon Aishu.
P.S loved the VM!😳
Edited by -Farrah- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesomeee👏


u used my fav song as d SR song☺️

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Posted: 14 years ago
Absolutely loved it
From SR meeting to the surprise engagement
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res
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Hey Aishu
Wow... lovely update , it was awesome yaar...
SR... Issshhh this couple always make go crazy... I love them more than any thing... They r adorable, no matter whatever situation u put them into...
Their fathers must have surprised them with this news... I wish i could see their expression...
It was beautiful... Keep it up.
Edited by sonia1000 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update <333
Fresher's day bash scene was soo sweet esp Sid's POV... how he was sooo sure she is the one 😳
Shanky's & Sid's dad's surprise was awesome!!! i can so imagine SR'sreaction 😆😆😆
All the 3 couples r soo cute 😳 but ofcourse SR r the BEST 😃
Continue soon...

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