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Hey guys: Last update for a week or two...please leave comments and I will respond back to everyone once I return..in the meanwhile I will try to bank as many parts as I can so when I return I can give you guys quick updates..for patentily waiting lol..
Note: This part has maaneet moments...I didn't put that idiot Dev in here as much lol...only at the end..so that you guys can enjoy some manneet moments while I am away!!! this came to four pages on word document..so hopefully its long engh lol..
Chapter 18

Maan and Dev returned home after work. Maan was so happy to finally return and talk to Geet but he noticed something was wrong when he went inside. Geet was running upstairs to Dadima's room carrying glass of water.
Maan: Geet what is wrong..why are you running?
Geet: Maan...mein thori busy hoon..
Maan: Geet..Geet
Dev: I think something is wrong...why is she running to Dadima's room?
Maan: Let's go and see
They both ran upstairs to Dadima's room and saw Dadima lying on the bed with Geet on the side..patting her forehead..
Maan: Geet what happend?
Geet: aap aah gaye?
Maan: maine pucha ki Dadima ko kya hua?
Geet: Woh...(Dadima opened her eyes)
Dadima: woh kuch nahi Maan bus mujhe thora sa chakar aagaya tha
Geet: haan..chakar..aaya
Maan looked at Geet and Dadima suspiciously: hmm ok I will stay with you Dadima tonight
Dadima: NAHI! I mean Geet hain na..kyon Geet?
Geet: Of course Dadima
Dev: umm Dadima I will stay with you tonight
Dadima: No beta..Geet is here...right (winked at Geet)
Geet smiled at Dadima: Ji
Maan: Sargam kaha hai?
Geet: woh apne friend ke ghar par so rahi hai
Maan: kya? tumhe mujhe bataya kyon nahi
Geet: Agar phone kiya hota to batati aapko
Maan: Geet..
Dev: umm Maan let's go
Maan: Par
Geet: Haan Maan please go hum dono bahut thak chuke hain...Nakul ko kehe dena kahana pane ke liye
Dadima smiled: Haan Maan Geet theek kehe rahi hai...humhe need aah rahi hai

Geet pushed both of them out of the room and went to sit right next to Dadima.
Dadima: thank god they left
Geet: Dadima are you sure that this will work?
Dadima: of course...you will sleep here with me..Maan will be so restless trying to talk to you..but you don't give in...
Geet: alright Dadima
Dadima: If he can be mad at you then you are no less...you have to show him the consequences of ignoring you...so he won't make the same mistake again...watch he will come here anytime and make some excuses to talk to you
Geet and Dadima laughed...soon enough there was a knock on the door...Dadima winked at Geet "Remember don't give in" Geet smiled and went to open the door.
Maan: Geet woh meri night shirt kaha hai
Geet: andar room mein...aur kuch?
Maan: haan maine deka par mili nahi
Geet: theek tara se nahi dekha hoga..fir se jaakar dekho almari mein hai
Maan: tum mujhe meri night shirt dona please
Geet sighed: ek minute...(she pushed Maan aside and called for Nakul) Nakul upar aaho please
Nakul: ji Ma'am
Geet: Nakul please Maan sir ko usski shirt dekha do...andar room mein hogi
Nakul: Ji Ma'am
Maan: umm Nakul tum jaho mein leh loonga
Nakul: Ji Sir
Geet: ok than good night...
Maan: Geet.Geet please meri baat sono
Geet: agar aapko kuch aur chahiye toh Nakul se kehe dena...Mein sone ja rahi ho
Maan: magar Geet
Geet: Good night (slammed the door on his face)

Dev was going upstairs to his room when he saw Maan and Geet's encounter...he couldn't help but smile "wow that all it takes for them to be mad at each other?...easy enough" He saw Maan standing outside of Dadima's room shocked at Geet for slamming the door on his face. He went closer to Maan...
Dev: ahem Maan what happend?
Maan: Nothing...I am going to my room to sleep
Dev: Alright
Maan: Good night Dev
Dev: Good night (he went to his room..Maan still stood outside of Dadima's room)
Maan: Geet just wait and watch..let's see how long you are mad at me...I will be waiting

Geet couldn't go to sleep at all..this is the first time that she stayed mad at Maan like this'.he deserved it for not calling her at all the whole day and for ignoring her in the morning for no fault of her own. Usually she would sleep with Sargam whenever she would be mad at Maan but that plan didn't work so well. Maan would always carry Geet back to the room in the middle of the night. She looked at Dadima who was sleeping peacefully. Geet got out of the bed slowly and decided to go downstairs to get something to eat..whenever she would be upset or angry a midnight snack always helped her sleep peacefully'

She went in the kitchen fridge puts some ice cream scoops in the bowl and topped it with lots and lots of chocolate syrup. She closes the kitchen light and makes her way to the dining table but was shocked to see Maan standing at the kitchen doorway smiling at her without any shirt.
Maan: I knew you would come for your "midnight snacks"
Geet: so I can't eat
Mann walks towards her: hmm I didn't say that'of course you can eat
Geet: I am not hungry anymore..I am going to sleep
Maan: Not so fast Geet'

He picks Geet up over his shoulder with one hand and her ice cream bowl in his other hand'. "Don't scream...you will wake everyone up"
Geet: Maan put me down right now
Maan: I will soon...(Maan walks to the dining table, he sits on the chair and slowly brings Geet to his lap and holds her by her waist).. here eat your ice cream
Geet: I told you am not hungry'now let me go
Maan: hmm alright that is fine..I will feed you than..open up
Geet closes her lips as Maan holds a spoon of ice cream near her mouth: "why do you have to be so difficult?"
Geet starts to struggle out of Maan's grip..but that only made it worse'Maan grips Geet waist tighter and tighter with each struggling moves' "Don't move too much'I am only making you eat your ice cream"
Geet: I don't want the ice cream'let me go I want to sleep in Dadima's room
Maan: hmm lets see'here this is your last chance..open up or else'
Geet: Or else what?
Maan: you want to see?
Geet didn't say anything to Maan but just looked the other way..her arms were crosses over her chest.. "ok don't regret I didn't warn you" he knew that she will struggle more'so he places his one leg over her both legs to hold them in place'Geet looked at Maan and tried to get away from Maan's grip but it was of no use'
Maan smiled at Geet: "now where were we?"
Geet: Maan let me go'
Maan: You are in no position to demand right now'now here are the new rules..you are going to eat your ice cream
Geet: I won't
Maan continued completely ignoring Geet's words: Each time you refuse to eat your ice cream than'
Geet: Than'
Maan: than wait and see'here open up'.

Geet closed her lip again refusing to eat'Maan puts the spoon down..his hands moves down to her legs under her sari..and slowly starts to caress her legs slowly moving up..Geet looks at him shocked'
Maan smiles at Geet: This is just a demonstration and I won't stop the next time'
Geet: I don't want to talk to you
Maan: maine kiya kya hai?
Geet: Apne muje ek baar bhi phone nahi kya..us Dev ne kyat ha
Maan: haan Dev ne kaha tha..Dadima ki halat puchne ke liye
Geet: hhhmp mujhe need aah rahi hai'let me go
Maan smirked: your ice cream?
Geet:I don't want it
Maan: Fine! I won't stop now!

He hand caresses her waist slowly moving in slow circular rhythm'he stops at where her sari was tucked on her waist..one by one he starts to pull out her sari'Geet felt the tug on the sari..she places her hand on top of Maan to stop him but Maan holds both of her hands'he bends down'starts kissing her waist and untucks her sari with his teeth' "Maan..please stop" "too late Geet" he moves up to her neck and starts kissing her collarbone and removes her sari pallu..Geet puts her arms around Maan and hugs him while he kisses her neck passionately..after a while he stops and whispers in her ear "Do you know how much I missed not talking to you?..the whole day I was stuck in a meeting'waiting for it to end so that I can hear your sweet voice"
Geet: Maan who..
Maan: sshh Geet you lost your chance to talk.. (He starts unbuttoning her blouse from the back and caresses her bare back'he picks Geet up and heads upstairs'half of her sari was dragging behind them'both looks at each other eyes without a care in the world'
Maan: Geet next time if you and Dadi come up with a plan don't make it too obvious
Geet: how did you know?
Maan: I saw Dadima winking at you while I was in the room'I understood that it must be you two plans..
Geet: ohh
Maan: well now you would have to pay
Geet: Maan mujhe Dadima ke room mein jana hai
Maan: Not tonight sweetheart (went straight toward their room)

In the morning Dev came down and saw Dadima sitting at the dinning table.
Dev: Where is Geet?
Dadima: Maan ke saath hogi
Dev: Maan?
Dadima: mujhe malom tha ki who dono ek doosre se gusa nahi ho sakte
Dev: ohh
Dadima: here Dev I made the breakfast today..ohh by the way I have found a girl for you'she is one of my family friend's daughter..I invited her here today for lunch
Dev: par Dadima..itni jaldi?
Dadima: Dev what do you mean itni jaldi? Yeh tumhi toh chahte the na?
Dev: haan magar
Dadima: agar magar kuch nahi..woh aaj aah rahi hai aur tum or aur Maan aaj office se jaldi aana padega
Maan: kisko aana padega Dadima
Dev looked up and saw Maan and Geet walking downstairs holding hands. Geet was smiling and looking at Maan while walking.
Dadima: Good morning beta
Geet: Good morning Dadima..
Maan: Good morning..aab aapka headache kaisa hai (winked at Geet)
Dadima: haan who mera headache aab theek hai
Maan: haan mujhe maloom tha subha tak theek ho gayega'kyon Geet?
Geet looked down feeling shy: Ji (Dev looked away not able to see this anymore..he started getting angry)
Dadima: haan Maan woh main Dev ko kehe rahi thi ki aaj tum dono ko jaldi ghar aana pade ga
Maan: kyon Dadima?
Dadima: maine Dev ke liye ladki dhond rakhi hai..aur woh aaj aah rehe hai lunch pe
Geet felt relieved..Maan: Alright Dadima jaisa aap kehe
Dadima: Geet tum hamari madad karna please'kahna banane ke liye
Geet: Ji Dadima'
Maan: Alright aab hum chalte hai
Geet: suniye Maan..ghar aate waqt Sargam ko pickup kar lena
Maan: Ok I will..chale Dev
Dev: haan (He looked at Geet before getting up)
Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 1st Yay I got here FIRST!!!!!😆😆😆
Oh my my Simi - haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii😳
That was some rubbish plan indeed😆 Maan is tooooo gooooood yaar - hahahahaha But I can't blame the woman - it is tooooo hard to fool the Maan Singh Khurana................hehehehe hmmmm the Ice cream part - hahaha I thought it was gonna initiate an ice cream fight😛
Lool...................and DEV urghhhhh - Ok let's not talk about him.........................because it is mutual - WE HATE HIM😡 - well in your FFs we do⭐️
Hmmmmmm soooo Dev ko dekhne Ladki wale arrahe hain....hmmmmm he shouldn't be going office then......he should stay go to a beaty parlour and get some one to do a miracle on his sada hua thobra........and saj-ing😳 and savar-ing😳 for his alliance - 😆yaar ladki wale bura na maanjaye na🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Oh my deary days.......................kya kahoon - your update made my day yaar..........I was being lazy with my updates .....but your FF brought me back to action So thank you meri jaani👏 for a wonderful update and I shall await you over the next few weeks
Shall Miss your updates😭
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....loved the way they made up...plz get rid of Dev..he bothers my peace of mind...lol...and as always gud luck for ur exams...ur FFs are my breaks when i study...lol....be back soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
pls do something about creepy Dev or else send him to timbuk2 he cant even shame of himself looking on his bhabi that way great update love how Maan knows his wife well pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very romantic update! Best of luck in ur studies.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

pls do something about creepy Dev or else send him to timbuk2 he cant even shame of himself looking on his bhabi that way great update love how Maan knows his wife well pls cont soon

Hehehe.....I'm sorry for hogging your glory Simi...........
but sharmake 11......u really do seem to like sending all the villians to Timbuk2 - init??😆
Why why...please do tell.......hehehe is that the new hell??
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update..
Very Romantic..
Awesome!!
Uff ye Dev ka main Khoon kardoon gi..lol
Hate him..GeT rid of him soon lol..
Will miss ur updates
Come soon
Update asap
Thanks for the PM!

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update..
haha geets plan failed...
hate dev..
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hahahaha what a plan geet and even u don't do the plan will buz maan know about tha plan and wooow they are sooo romantic and god this dev just whant to kill him hope maan know about him soon be for doing something bad to his geet and his family and thanks for pm

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