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Posted: 14 years ago
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Raghu & Padmini:Mridul & Wasna

Heal my heart Part 11







Padmini is getting engaged to Raghu;who is Akash's friend.
The engagement function...
Padmini has worn a silk Indian dress.
Riddhima goes near them:All the best.
Raghu:All the best has to be told by me to you and Akash.Don't disappoint Akash.
Riddhima's face becomes upset.
R:Where is Akash?
Ra:I don't know why he is late.
Suddenly Akash comes.he has worn shervani.
Ra:Akash has landed.
Riddhima looks at Akash.Akash is finding it difficult to face her.
He thinks:Does she know about the proposal?
Ra:Akash!
A:I'm sorry buddy.I became late.
Ra:It's ok.
Akash and Riddhima look at each other.
Raghu and Padmini exchange rings with a smile.

Riddhima has worn a typical Indian yellow dress which has red designs on it with metal ornaments.She dances to the song
'Maye ni maye mundher pe teri, bol raha hain kaaga
Jogan ho gayi teri dulari, man jogi sang laaga..'{Hum aapke hain kaun}.

All are having food.Riddhima is standing simply as she does'nt feel like having food.Akash's mental stage is also not so good.Because of the proposal incident he is very upset and that's why he did'nt get the mood to dress up on time for the function.
He thinks:I myself will tell it to Riddhima.
He goes near Riddhima.She feels uncomfortable.
A:Riddhima!
She is silent.
A:I know that you hate me.But Prem bhaiyya and Anjali bhabhi misunderstood us and talked to your father about our wedding.
Riddhima is shocked.She looks at his face.
A:Believe me Riddhima..it was without my knowledge.Please..
R:I know that it is without your knowledge.Because after knowing what i did to your Anjali bhabhi you hate me.
Akash does'nt know what to say.He cools himself.Riddhima turns back to walk away.He holds her hand.She looks at him with wonder.
A:I can never hate you Riddhima.I still love you.
She can't believe it.Her eyes become wet.
R:One more thing i have to reveal to you.
Akash looks at her carefully as he is eager to know that.
R:I used to think that i love a man.But i realized later that it was only an infatuation.He is none other than my brother in law Ashmit.
Akash is shocked.
R:He has loved only Nupoo.Now he is like my own brother.
Santha overhears it.She goes away.
She looks at his face to know his reaction.
A:Everyone feels infatuation towards someone.I'm not bothered about that.
He removes her hand slowly.
Her hair strands fall on her face.Slowly he moves his fingers towards her forehead and cheek and moves it to a side.They both are lost in each other's eyes.
Akash goes away.She keeps looking at him.He turns back.
A:Your dance was good.
Her seriousness turns into a smile.He smiles and goes away.

Riddhima reaches home.
Inder:How was the function?
R:It was grand.
I:How was your dance performance?
R:It was ok.
I:Prem and Anjali had come here.
R:I know.
Inder is surprised.
R:I met Akash at the Party.
Inder is surprised.
I:What should i tell Prem?
Riddhima is silent.
I:They doubt whether you will reject the proposal with hatred.But i have no doubt about that as i have noticed changes in you.
Riddhima looks at him as she wants to know what he thinks about her reply.
I:I feel you don't hate Akash.
R:You are right dad.I don't hate Akash.
I:You love him?
Riddhima did'nt expect that question from him.
Riddhima is silent.
I:You were so bold and smart before.You never hesitated to express your feelings.But now...
R:Now i realize that sometimes no girl can be a boy.
I:I'm your father.I can understand your feelings.But i want to hear reply from your mouth.Are you happy with this proposal?
Riddhima smiles:Yes.Today only i realized that i also have feelings for Akash.Akash is waiting for my reply.
Inder smiles:Then you yourself give the reply to Akash.
She is shy.
She goes to her room.She thinks about her moments with Akash and sings:
Dil Ne Kaha Chupke Se
Yeh Kya Hua Chupke Se
Kyon Naye Lag Rahe Hein
Yeh Dharti Gagan Meine
Pichcha To Boli Yeh Pagli Pawan
Pyar Hua Chupke Se...{1947 a love story}.


Santha tells Ashmit and Nupur about Riddhima's crush on Ashmit.
They are shocked.
N:No,you are lying.
S:I swear..it's not a lie.If you have any doubt you ask Riddhima.
Santha goes.
Nupur cries:Ridz used to share everything with me,but why did she hide it from me?I always tried to make her happy.But i snatched her love from her and wounded her heart.
She curses herself.
Ashmit does'nt know how to comfort Nupur.
Slowly he keeps his arm on her shoulder:Nupoo!
She looks at him with tears:Ashmit..you were not meant for me?You were meant for Ridz?Then why did we become one?I did a big mistake.We should not have gotten married.
Her words wound Ashmit's heart.
A:What are you saying Nupoo?We love each other and so our marriage is our sacred union.
She removes his arm from her shoulder.
A:Nupoo,you promised me that you will always be with me.Right?
She weeps:That was my mistake.I don't want you tearing Ridz's heart.
He is shocked.
A:Then what about tearing my heart?
She goes away crying.
He is depressed.
He walks outside in the rain and thinks about his romantic moments with Nupur.Though he is thinking about his sweet moments it pains him and so his tears flow down.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
hi
the up is really good
akash is upset ke ridz usse pasand nahin karta
aur idher nupor aur ashmit ko pata chalta haai ke ridz ashmit se pyaar karte the
yeh jaan kar nupoor ko bohot dukh hote haai ke uske aapne bahen ke pyaar chin le haai
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
nice part...................ridhima finally accepted her feelings...................oh i hate that lady......................she always creates problems in eveyones life.................wanna see ashmit and nupur get together and that lady be taught a good lesson..................cont soon.....................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
awesome part sorry for late reply
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome , great going please contii soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56

Heal my heart Part 12






Riddhima rings up Nupur:Hi Nupoo..how are you?
N:How are you?
R:I'm cool.Hey..i'm coming there.i want to tell you something.A surprise!
N:Even i want to tell you something.

Riddhima goes there.The door is kept open.She goes inside.In the front room only Ashmit is seen.
He is surprised to see her.
R:Hi jeeju..
A:Hi.
R:Where is Nupoo?
A:She is in her room.
R:I will go there.
She is about to go to Nupur's room.He holds her hand tightly.Riddhima is shocked.She stares at him.
A:Do you love me?
She is shocked.
R:What are you asking jeeju?
A:Tell me.
R:Why are you asking like this?
A:We heard that you love me.So Nupur is shattered.She thinks that she snatched me from you.So she is keeping a distance from me.I lost Nupur because of you.
She is shocked.
R:Nonsense!Who told you that i love you?
A:Shantha mausi.
R:Santha bhabhi did this purposefull to create a rift between us.It's true that i used to like you a lot.But that was because i really admire you as a person.You are such a well mannered guy.May be i had a crush on you.But defenetly not love.Now you are my brother.I love someone else.
Ashmit is surprised:You are in love?
R:Yes,i love Akash.
A:Akash?
Nupur was overhearing their conversation.
N:Ridz!
Riddhima runs to her.
R:What is this Nupoo?You are such a big fool.You believed someone's lies and you hurt Ashmit jeeju.Too bad.Tell sorry to Ashmit jeeju.He loves you very much.You also love him.I know that.Still there came a gap between you both because of me.I want to solve this problem which is caused because of me.Only then i will get peace of mind.
Nupur goes near Ashmit.Ashmit bends his face.
N:I know that you are angry with me.I hurt you a lot.Sorry.
Ashmit's eyes become wet.
A:You did'nt think once about my mental agony i will have when you move away from me.That's my worry.
Nupur's tears flow down:I'm sorry Ashmit.
He wipes her tears.
A:I love you Nupoo.I don't want to see your tears.
He smiles making her also smile.
Riddhima smiles.
R:I'm so happy to see you both madly in love with each other.
Nupur looks at her.
N:What did you say?You love Akash?Were you joking?
R:No.I'm serious.I love Akash.I got his proposal through Prem and Anjali.Dad is happy.
Nupur is surprised:What?Really?
R:Yes.But Akash does'nt know that i love him.I want to confess my love to him.
Nupur and Ashmit smile.
A:Don't delay to confess your love to him.
Riddhima smiles.

Akash gets a parcel.The violen and the faded flowers he sent to Riddhima.Though the flowers are faded they are not fully damaged as Akash's love for Riddhima is hidden in them.
He feels upset.
A:Riddhima does'nt like me.So she returned me my gifts for her.
He sees a letter inside the cover.He reads it:
I'm sorry.I want the gifts you sent me.But i'm returning them to you.You keep them in your room.Because my life is in your room.So i will come there.So am i supposed to keep them there?
Akash is over excited.
He jumps with joy:Riddhima loves me.
He laughs like hell:Riddhima is mine.
He hugs the violen and flowers.

Akash dances in rain.Surprisingly he sees Riddhima also dancing.They both see each other.They smile at each other.They come closer to each other.
A:I love you RIddhima.
R:i love you too Akash.
He holds her hand and they have a passionate sizzling rain dance singing:
Dhak dhak karne laga,
ho mora jiyara darne laga
saiya baiya chhodna,
kachchi kaliya tod na
dil se dil mil gaya,
mujhase kaisi ye haya
tu hai meri dilaruba
kya lagti hai, va re va
dhak dhak karne laga,
ho mora jiyara darne laga..{Beta}.
It was not Valentine's day.But for Akash and Riddhima that was the real lovers' day.

Ashmit takes Nupur to their compound.
A:I bought a new car.
N:Wow!Nice.
A:Come Nupoo.Let's have a long drive.
N:Now at night?
A:Ya..that's the thrill.
She smiles and gets inside the car with him.They have a long drive and enjoy a lot.

The end
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
hi
the up is really good
toh sab kuch thik ho gaya
nupoor aur ashmit beech mein rift bhi dur ho gaye
aur ridz aur akash bhi ab aapne pyaar mein jur gaye haai
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
nice ending.....................liked the story...............many characters but alls well........................liked ashmit and nupur scenes.................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
awesome ending i love it everything come to place wow so sweet thanks a lot for great FF
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ending...enjoyed the fanfic completely. thanks for sharing this beautiful story

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