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Posted: 14 years ago
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so many characters and it has started to confuse me now itself.................he he he...................nice part..................all getting married................missed ashmit and nupur....................cont soon.......................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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.nice part,.all getting married.great going ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23

Heal my heart Part 5






Prem could never think of loving anyone other than Avni.But Prem has fallen in love with Anjali who is well mannered,down to earth,soft and calm.Akash also accepts her as his sister in law.Prem goes for a one month official tour.
Riddhima can't tolerate Prem with Anjali as Prem had broken his relation with Nupur once.To take revenge she writes rubbish about Anjali and sends it to Eshwari.

Riddhima wears a simple red saree and goes to Nupur's music class room to see Ashmit.She longed to hear a compliment from him.Though Ashmit sees her, his concentration is on music she feels.She goes away with disappointment.Actually Ashmit's concentration was on Nupur.
A:You sing so well Nupur.
N:Thank you sir.
A:I forget everything else when you sing.
She smiles.
A:By the way,Riddhima's dressing has changed a lot.
N:Yes,we are happy about that especially dadi.She always wanted Ridz to wear Indian clothes.
A:She looks good in Indian clothes.
Ashmit goes.Riddhima comes back.
R:Where is Ashmitji?
N:He just left now.
R:He left?
She is out of mood.
N:Well..he said that you look good in Indian clothes.
Riddhima is excited:Really?
N:Yes,he accepts your change.
Riddhima goes to her room and hugs the violen which she considers to be Ashmit's gift for her.

Eshwari gets the letter sent by Riddhima.She is shocked to read it.
She calls loudly:Anjaliiiiiiiiii!
Anjali goes near her:Mummiji..
Eshwari throws the letter on her face.
E:Read it.
Anjali reads it.
A:It is not true mummiji.
E:Shut up.If it is not true why should someone write like this to me?
Akash supports Anjali:Tear the letter.The problem is over.
E:The problem will be over only when Anjali leaves this house and Akash's and Jyothika's wedding gets cancelled.
They are shocked.Anjali bursts into tears.
The person who loved her like her own daughter has ditched her.She longs for Prem's come back.
A:Mom..Anjali bhabhi is innocent.
E:My decision can't be changed by you.Anjali will go back home.That's final.

Siddarth is not willing to bend before Eshwari when she insulted his daughters.
He challenges Eshwari:We are not interested to give Jyothika to your family.Anjali and Prem will get separated legally and i will find a better guy for Anjali.
Eshwari does'nt care.
Anjali cries:Dad...to be win before mummiji please don't separate me from Prem.
S:No Anjali.Let Prem come back.I will bring him to you.

Ashmit gets a job in the music academy after trying a lot.But now he is not that happy as because of this job he will have to move away from Nupur.

Ashmit goes for Nupur's music class.He does'nt tell nupur that it is going to be the last music class.Nupur has worn a beautiful white salwar kameez.Ashmit feels that she is a Goddess.Because of the separation's pain,Ashmit can't open his mouth.
N:What happened Sir?
A:Today i'm not going to teach you.You simply sing a song.
N:Me?
A:Yes.
She thinks about the songs she knows.
Then she sings:
Chaahe tum kuchh na kaho maine sun liya
Ki saathi pyaar ka mujhe chun liya
Chun liya
Maine Sun liya

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar..{Jo jeetha wohi sikandar}.
He does'nt get words to appreciate her.
A:You reminded me of Meera bhai.Meera used to love and worship Krishna.Only someone who keeps love in the mind like Meera can sing this song so beautifully.I think you sing better than Meera though i have not heard Meera sing.How did you sing so well?Do you have someone in your mind?
Nupur looks at him with shock as she never expected that question from him.She bends her face silently.
A:I'm sorry if i hurt you.I should not have asked you like that.I will not be here to ask you such stupid questions in the future.I can't come here from tomorrow onwards.
Nupur is shocked:Why?
A:I got a job in the music academy.
Nupur feels pain.She does'nt know why.
A:I feel that atleast once in a while i have to come here.Otherwise i won't get peace of mind.
N:You should defenetly come here.
A:You gave me the permission to come here.I will come.
When Ashmit goes she sits on the sofa thinking about him.Nupur's eyes get welled up with tears.

When Riddhima comes to know this she becomes upset.
N:But Ashmit sir will come here once in a while.He said he can't resist coming here.
Riddhima thinks:Yes,Ashmitji can't live peacefully without seeing me.
Riddhima wants to know whether her letter has created a rift in Prem's family,
R:Any news about Prem?
Nupur becomes dull:Yes.Prem's marriage is on the rocks.
She tells the reason.Riddhima is happy.
R:God punished them.
N:What did Prem do?I will upset about Anjali.She is such a nice girl.
R:How do you know that?
N:Anjali was my closes friend.I used to tell you about her no.
Riddhima is shocked:that was this Anjali?
N:Yes.I have not seen her after 12th std.I don't know whether she will recognise me.She never had the strength to bear any pain.She was that soft.So i wonder how she is living after getting separated from her husband.I don't know who wrote nonsense about such a nice girl.Whoever that person is..he or she is heartless.
Riddhima feels guilty.

Riddhima goes to see Eshwari.
E:How dare you come here?
R:I came here to say that Nupur knows Anjali very well.Anjali is a nice girl.
E:Don't talk about Anjali here.
Riddhima thinks:I was sad when she sent out Anjali because of me.But now i'm happy that Anjali is escaped from Eshwariji.
Riddhima goes.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh feel like screaming at ridhima..............and eashwari is a crazy woman..................she makes and breaks relations like some toy..........hope prem and anjali get together..............and nupur and ashmit confess before misunderstandings happen.................cont soon.................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi
the up is really sweet
i love ashmit nad nuppor chemistry
plz comnt soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I hope all come along with each other and nupur and ashmit confess before misunderstandings come in ti their life ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27

Ram:Akashdweep

Chanda:Dimple

Padmini:Wasna

Heal my heart part 6




Prem comes back.
P:Where is Anjali?She is not here?
Akash is silent.
P:If she was here she would have come to receieve me.
Eshwari:Don't enquire about Anjali.Just forget her.She is not good.
Prem is shocked.
Eshwari tells everything.
A:Prem bhaiyya..i'm sure that the letter is somebody's game.Anjali bhabhi is innocent.
E:Prem..do you disbelieve me?
P:No,but i won't leave Anjali.For you i sacrificed Avni also.But now i can't desert Anjali for you.
Eshwari gets upset:I did it for your good.
P:I know.If Anjali had a past i don't care.Because even i had an affair.If you don't want Anjali here we will shift to another house.
Eshwari is shocked.She feels chest pain and faints.She gets admitted to the hospital.
The weak Eshwari holds Prem's hand:I'm not against your wish.I pray for your happy married life.
Eshwari closes her eyes forever.
Anjali and her family come there hearing the sad news.
Anjali cries:Because of me only mummiji had heart attack.She is angry with me.
Prem consoles her with tears:She is not angry with yiu Anjali.She went away with prayers for us.

Nupur is surprised to see Ashmit at the verandah.
N:Sir..i doubted whether you will visit us.
A:I can't resist coming here.I told you no.
She smiles:Come inside.
A:Where are others?
N:They have gone out.
A:I showed your photo to my family members.They liked you very much.
She smiles:Why did you show my photo to them?
Ashmit has no answer.
He looks at her face.She becomes shy.She folds her hands.
A:Did you miss me?
N:What?
A:I mean did you ever think of me after i left?
Nupur thinks:hOw can i tell him that every moment reminded me of him.
He says in his mind:I know that you can never avoid thinking of me.

Chanda's husband Ram is over possessive.He closes her inside the room when guests come as he feels that no one else should see her beauty.Though he loves her like crazy he becomes violent fast.The way he stares at her gives her fear.He can't understand why she is scared of him as does'nt torture her physically.He behaves abnormally.Her only relief is Ram's sister Padmini.Padmini puts mehendi on Chanda's hands.
Once Chanda and Padmini go for a film and come back late.Ram gets angry.
He holds her hand tight:Where were you?
She is hurt.
C:We went for a movie.
R:No,you are lying.There is no difference between you and Damayanti.
He goes away.
Chanda cries.Padmini tries to console her.
P:Please don't hate my brother.
C:No.But i want to know one thing.Who is Damyanti?
She is silent.
C:Tell.
P:If i tell will you be able to tolerate it?
C:Now i'm tolerating a lot.I will tolerate in future also.There is no other option.
Padmini goes and brings a photo:This id Damyanti.
Chanda looks at the photo where Damayanti is with Ram.
P:She was a good dancer.Fate was cruel.So Ram bhaiyya became like this.
Chanda thinks:Damayanti must have been Ram's girl friend.She must have cheated him.May be because of that Ram is suspicious.
P:We were poorer than your family.Bhaiyya used to do part time job while studying to make money for his education.He has suffered a lot in his life.
Chanda can't believe it.

Ram locks Chanda inside the room as he does'nt want her to go out.
Padmini:Why are you doing this to Chanda bhabhi?If you behave like this like Damyanthi she will also go.
Ram stares at her.Padmini gets scared and goes away.

Nupur avoids all the proposals she gets.
Tilaka tells Inder:I think she is avoiding all the proposals for Ashmit.
Inder is shocked:What?
T:It's my doubt.
I:If it's true also i don't have any problem.

Inder goes to Nupur's room.
She is humming:Pehla nasha...
I:Good.Ashmit has turned you into a good singer.What is your opinion about him?
N:He is a very sincere teacher.
I:Only that much?Don't you feel more about him?
N:What?
I:i liked him very much.What about you?
N:What are you saying dad?
I:Is it for Ashmit you are avoiding proposals?
She is shocked.She has no answer.
I:Tell Nupoo.
N:I don't know dad.I can't understand anything.
Inder smiles:I will speak to Ashmit's family.I will be happy if he becomes my son in law.
Nupur is surprised.She blushes.
Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi
the up is good
prem understands anjali that"s good
ashmit came bach to nupoor
but yeh kya why ram is doing like this to chanda
he is a psyco i think
plz cont soon and pm me
Edited by ronojoy_ria - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great part prem look good with his act
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice parts.....but its sad that Ashmit will not cum to teach Nupur again....however their equation has progressed a lot....and am glad to knw Inder is thinking abt Ashmit-Nupur's marriage!!!

Eshwari is seriously crazy....needs a psychiatrist....and hope Ridhhima gets sum sense soon!!

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