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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
everything going well now .
Ashmit & Nupur married now good
Ridhhima realizing her feelings thank god warna pata nahi aur kya kartii.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
ashmit and nupur are married without any problem................nice part.........cont soon...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ranveer & Jyothika:Kinshuk & Parul

Heal my heart Part 9








Chanda:You are not the old Ridz.
Riddhima simply smiles.
C:Tell me..who is that guy?
R:Akash who was supposed to get married to Jyothika.
C:Did you meet him?
R:Yes.I told him openly that i don't like him.
C:Then why did you accept his gifts.
Riddhima is silent for a moment.
R:I thought it's someone else.
C:Did you dump his gifts?
R:No.
C:Usually if you get a gift from the people you hate you destroy it no.Why do you keep those gifts with you now also?
R:I love playing violen.When i play it..that music..it gives me so much of happiness.I can't express it.
C:If the gift given by your enemy gives you happiness that means you love him.
R:No.
R:When you got gifts from him itself i knew that your heart has started dancing with love.You used to love your secret admirer.Now also you love him.You are backing out only because you know that he is Akash.
R:I hated that family once.
C:So what?Do you know one thing.Once my sister Avni di dreamt about marrying Prem.But it did'nt happen because of his mother.That is fate.
Riddhima is shocked.
C:We can't blame Prem.He is an obedient son.In Nupur bhabhi's case also that is what happened.Even if Prem and his mother have done wtong what is Akash's fault?Will all the sons of a family be same?
R:I must have hated Akash due to some misunderstandings.Now i don't hate him.But i can't love him.
C:You don't see your own mind.That's why you are not getting peace of mind.
Riddhima's eyes get filled up with tears.

Riddhima expresses her desire to do higher studies.
Tilaka:Why should you study again?Inder...Krishnraj's son Akhil is a nice guy.Shall we proceed with that proposal?He liked her eyes very much,they said.
R:No.Drop that proposal.I'm not interested.He liked only my eyes,not me.What if he take my eyes?
Inder smiles.
T:Inder..are you hearing the way she talks.

Riddhima thinks:I'm not bothered about Ashmitji.That was my infatuation.I take it as a joke now.But why i'm not peaceful now?Why i'm upset about Akash?
She can't understand herself.

Anjali goes to a mall.There Nupur and Riddhima do shopping.Nupur goes near her.
N:Anjali..Prem's wife..my friend.
Riddhima looks at Anjali carefully.They both go near her.
N:Anjali..do you remember me?
Anjali observes her face carefully.She is excited:Nupur!We are meeting after a long time.
N:Exactly.Meet my sister Riddhima.
A:Hi Riddhima.
R:Hi.

Anjali comes back from shopping.
Prem notices her happiness.
P:You look very happy today.
A:Yes,i'm very happy.Today i met my friend Nupur after a long time.Met her sister Riddhima also.
Prem is shocked.
P:Nupur is your friend?
A:Yes.You know her?
P:Yes.
He tells her everything.
Anjali's face becomes dull.
P:Good thing that Nupur got a good husband now.
Anjali smiles.
P:One more thing.Akash loves Riddhima.
Anjali is in shock again.
A:What?
P:Yes.Once Akash had told me that he loves Riddhima.
A:Riddhima is a nice girl.Her eyes are very attractive.
P:But i doubt whether Riddhima loves Akash sincerely.She hates our family that much.
A:She must have hatred towards this family.But don't think that her love for Akash is fake.I know Nupur very well.She is very sweet.Nupur's sister can't be that different from her.
P:Riddhima is exactly opposite to Nupur.She is very smart and clever.
A:May be.Nupur used to tell me a lot about Riddhima.She used to tell that however naughty Riddhima is she is good at heart.She can't fool Akash.I'm sure.
P:I want Akash to have a happy married life with Riddhima.Shall we speak to her father about Akash?
A:Sure.
P:Are you not upset?
A:Why?
P:Akash was supposed to marry your sister Jyothika no.
A:But that wedding got cancelled long ago.
P:Will Jyothika be upset?
A:No.
Suddenly they hear the calling bell ringing.They open the door.
There they see Jyothika and a guy.
Anjali and Prem are shocked:Jyothika!What a surprise!
They hug each other.
P:We were talking about you.Come inside.
They enter inside.
Anjali looks at that guy:Is this Ranveer?
He smiles:Yes.
A:Jyothika has told a lot about you.But i could recognise you.
J:There is a happy news.Dad agreed to conduct our wedding.
Anjali is surprised:Really?
J:Dad has changed a lot.
Prem thinks:Jyothika and Ranveer are getting married?
J:Prem jeeju...please forgive me.Please tell Akash to forgive me.
P:But why?
A:I hid something from you Prem.Jyothika was in love with Ranveer when her marriage got fixed with Akash.Our dad forced her to agree to marry Akash.She did'nt have the courage to go against dad's wish.But now dad is not against her wish.So Jyothika and Ranveer got reunited.Jyothika is tensed whether you and Akash will be angry with her for this.
P:Hey...even i have undergone the same sutuation.So i understand Jyothika.Jyothika was always cheerful.So i can't believe that she had hidden pain in her mind when her marriage got fixed with Akash.
A:Jyothika is like this.She always smiles.Even worries cannot wipe her smile.
R:Actually we are thankful to Prem jeeju's mom for cancelling Jyothika's marriage with Akash.Otherwise we would not have been able to reunite.
Ranveer holds Jyothika closer to him.
They smile.

Ashmit closes Nupur's eyes with his arms and takes her to a room.
N:Where are you taking me to?
A:Surprise..
He removes his arms from her eyes.
She is surprised to see candle light on the table.Dinner is also kept on the table.
N:Wow!
Ashmit holds her hands and makes her sit on the chair.He also sits.
They both look at each other.
A:In this dim light also you are so beautiful.
She blushes.
A:I can't believe that you are mine now.I feel it's a dream.
N:Even i feel it's a dream.But it's not a dream.
Suddenly his face becomes dull.
A:I'm scared whether i will lose you.
N:No,never.I will never leave you.I can't live without you.
She holds his hand.They both hold hands together with a smile.
N:Ashmit..look at my eyes.My eyes speak my love for you.My eyes sing how much i love you.
He smiles looking into her eyes.
N:You surprised me with a lovely candle light dinner.I will surprise you with a romantic song specially dedicated to you.
He smiles.
She stands up and sings:
Chupke Se Sun, Is Pal Ki Dhun
Is Pal Mein Jeevan Saara
Sapnon Ki Hai Duniya Yehi
Meri Aankhon Se Dekho Zara
Chupke Se Sun, Is Pal Ki Dhun
Is Pal Mein Jeevan Saara
Sapnon Ki Hai Duniya Yehi..{Mission Kashmir}.
Ashmit forgets everything listening to her lovely song.He goes close to her and carries her in his arms.

Prem and Anjali go to Inder's house.Inder is surprised to see them.Prem finds it difficult to face him.He is tense about his reaction.But Inder is friendly with them.
I:Come inside.
Prem and Anjali are relieved.
They go inside.
A:Where is Riddhima?
I:she has gone out.
A:Her marriage..?
I:Her marriage is not fixed.She is not interested in it.She is rejecting all the proposals.
P:Uncle..why we came here is...we know why Riddhima is rejecting all the proposals.She loves my brother Akash.
Inder is shocked.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
hi the up is nice
ashmit aur nupoor candle light dinner karte haai
wow romantic but yeh kya there pasrt is really very small
plz yaar ashmit aur nupoor ke romance ke baare likhna
so plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh wow....nice part. Ashmit n Nupur's romantic date....here Prem & Anjali talk abt Ridhhima n Akash and finally it seems everything is gonna be okay!! Even Jyothika is happy wid her Ranveer.....very very cool.....loving it. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
nice part.....................hope ridhima doesnt get angry..................she hasnt realised nor sorted her feelings yet......................cont soon..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47

Heal your heart Part 10



Inder:Riddhima loves Akash?
Prem:Yes.Everyone is shocked as Riddhima hates our family that much.I hope uncle will be pk with this alliance.
Prem and Anjali are tense.
I:If Ridz loves Akash i have no objection.
They are relieved.They smile.

Prem and Anjali go to Akash's room.
P:Akash..there is a surprise for you.
A:Surprise?
Anj:Yes,there is sweet surprise for you.Before hearing the sweet news you have some sweets.I made kheer for you.
A:Thank you bhabhi.
He tastes kheer.
A:Very tasty.
Anj:Thank you.
A:Now tell the sweet news.
P:We talked to Inder uncle about you and Riddhima.He is happy to conduct your wedding.
Akash is shocked:What?Was Riddhima there?
P:No.
A:Inder uncle gave a positive reply before asking Riddhima?
P:Why should he ask her?We told him that you both love each other.
A:You all ahould have talked to Riddhima.Why did you both go there without informing me?
They are stunned by his reaction.
P:Akash!Why are you reacting like this?
Anj:You told Prem that you love Riddhima.Right?
A:Yes,i love her.But i did'nt tell that Riddhima loves me.
They don't know how to react.
P:Means?You both broke up?
A:I have always loved her.But she never loved me.She hates me because of the past incidents.Once she had rang me.

Flashback:

Akash attends the call.
R:Hi Akash..i'm Riddhima.
He is excited:Riddhima..I'm so happy that you called me.
R:Akash..please don't be happy.My attitude is not changed.I called you to tell something else.
Akash's face becomes dull.
A:You hate me and my family.What else to say?
R:Not only that.I had decided to break Prem's married life as he wounded Nupoo's heart.So i only wrote rubbish about Anjali and sent it to your mother.
Akash is shocked.
A:Riddhima!I never knew that you are that cruel.How could you try to do that to an innocent lady?
Riddhima becomes upset.
R:I realized my mistake.Later only i came to know that Anjali is Nupoo's close friend.Nupoo told me how nice Anjali is.I felt guilty.So i went and told your mom to bring Anjali back as she is innocent.But your mom insulted me.It made me angry again.
Akash did'nt want to hear anything more.He cuts the phone.

Present:
Prem is shocked.Anjali and Prem feel upset.
A:But i'm not angry with Riddhima.She did'nt do it purposefully.She can be justified.Because..how can she tolerate when her sister's wedding gets cancelled and the bride groom marries some one else?You know onething..?I had met Nupur and Riddhima in the mall.That day...

Flashback:
Nupur,Anjali and Riddhima eat together in the restaurant.
A:Today onwards not only Nupur you are also my friend Riddhima.
Nupur and Anjali smile at Riddhima.Unexpectedly Riddhima bursts into tears.
They are shocked.
N:What happened Ridz?
A:Riddhima..why are you crying?
R:I don't deserve a friend like you.You are too sweet Anjali.
Anjali smiles:What are you saying?
R:I was angry with you for taking over Nupoo's position.
A:I took over Nupur's position?How?
She can't understand it.Nupur is silent.
R:Prem's marriage was fixed with Nupur before.But it got cancelled when somebody told something bad about her to Eshwari aunty.
Anjali is shocked.
R:So i decided that Prem should not live happily dumping Nupoo.So i only wrote that letter related to you and sent it to Eshwari aunty.
Anjali and Nupur are shocked.Nupur raises her voice.
N:Till now i took your mischievous activities as a joke.But this is...too much.How could you do this to Anjali?
R:I'm sorry.
She weeps.
A:Don't worry Riddhima.That is past.You confessed it to us.That shows how pure your mind.I have no problem with you.You are my friend.
R:You are too good Anjali.

Present:

Anjali:Riddhima regrets a lot.She is not bad.
Prem:I'm the real culprit.In one way i and mom cheated her family.That wound can't be healed easily.That's why she took revenge.But she regrets now.So don't be angry with her.
Anj:Don't hate her.
A:I don't hate her.Hating Riddhima is something which i can never do in this life.But if she can go to this extent..that shows how much she hates us.She can never love me.I know that very well.After knowing this if she comes to know that you both went there with a proposal on my behalf she will hate more.She will misunderstand me again.
P:Now what will we do?
Anjali tries to console them.

Prem rings up Inder.
P:Uncle..did you speak to Riddhima?
I:No,she has'nt come yet.Her friend Chanda's sister in law Padmini is getting engaged.She has gone there.So she will be late.
Prem is relieved.
P:Then please don't tell her about the proposal.
Inder can't understand anything.
I:Why?
P:Actually Akash and Riddhima are not seeing each other.It was our misunderstanding.
Inder is shocked.
I:Riddhima has troubled your family a lot.Because of that Akash may be hating her.Right?
P:No,Akash is very mature.He has'nt taken all those things seriously.He considers it as a joke.He loves her.But Riddhima does'nt like her.Then what's the point in going ahead with this proposal?
Inder is relieved.
I:So Akash loves Riddhima.I like Akash very much.He is a nice guy.So i was happy about proceeding with this proposal.But..I think we should not drop this proposal.
Prem can't believe it.
I:Let me ask Riddhima once.
P:But Riddhima may get angry.She hates us that much.
I:Anyways let me ask Riddhima.
After putting the phone down Prem looks tense.
Anjali:What did Inder uncle tell?
P:He has'nt spoken to Riddhima yet.But he will speak to her about the proposal.So i'm tense.
A:Let him speak to Riddhima.
P:What's the need of speaking to her about it as we all know that she hates Akash.
A:What if she does'nt hate Akash?
P:What are you saying Anjali?Did'nt you hear what Akash said?
A:Yes,but what if Akash is misunderstanding her?
Prem is confused.
A:I met Riddhima.Right?She regrets a lot.She was calm and quiet.So i don't think she still keeps hatred in her mind.
P:Let us keep our fingers cross.


Inder thinks:Now a days Riddhima seems to be very different.She is quite calm and serious.Who knows whether the reason is Akash?I have to find out what's happening in her mind.



Ashmit enters the house.He is surprised to see the house decorated with flowers and heart shaped balloons.
Nupur comes singing:Happy birthday to you Ashmit..
Ashmit is surprised.
A:I can't believe it Nupur.You made my birthday the most special day of my life.
Nupur smiles.
Nupur brings a cake:Your favourite chocolate cake.
A:Wow!
He cuts the cake.He shows the cake piece to Nupur and winks his eyes.She is shy.
Slowly she goes near him.They both bite the cake piece together.
They sway their bodies slowly to the romantic music.
'Ab se koi khushi nahi
Jiski tum wajah nahi
Ab se koi din nahi
Jiski tum subah nahi
Ab se koi baat nahi
Jo tumse na hogi shuru
Ab se koi raah nahi
Jo tum sang main mudhoon
Abh ke abhi yeh ho gaya yakeen
Yeh zindagi meri ho gayi teri
Abh ke abhi yeh ho gaya yakeen
Yeh zindagi meri ho gayi teri
Tumse hi tumse har baat
Har baat hai
Jab tum ho saath..'{Anjaana Anjaani}.
They forget the whole world and become really romantic.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
hi
the up is really good
prem aur ajnali kitne khush hoke akash ke pass jaate haai usse yeh baatane ke un logo ne inder jee se akash aur ridz ke shaadi ke baat ke the aur inder jee ko bhi is shaadi se koi problem nahin haai
but akash toh yeh sunte he upset ho jaata haai kunki usse pata haai ke ridz usse pasand nahin karte
yeh baat sunke prem aur anjali bhi upset ho jaate haai
idher ashmit ke liye nupoor birthday party organize karte haai to surprise him
ashmit is really happy to see this
i loved it
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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both parts were tooo good........................ i hope akash n ridz unite soon
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very nice part...................so all the misunderstandings and clarifications are done only ridhima has to realise her feelings for akash................and then alls well................liked ashmit and nupur scene..............cont soon.................

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