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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
nice part
the way nupur handels all this matter is grt.she bring the smile on her face jus b'coz of her family..she is such a sweet n nice daughter.like the way ridzi confronts in front of akash...so prem is sensible person but do not wish to go against her mother.akash really wants nupur to be his bhabhi is nice. its a tough phase for all of them but the way family tackle wit the situation is grt.
oh so akash is in love wit riddhima only in first meeting..its interesting to see this now...
well nupur wish to learn music n riddhima arrange a music teacher for her is grt..so wit this only ashmit made entry in her house. i have a feeling that ashmit is the person who is made for nupur n they both fall in love only grt concept dear
pls cont so soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heal my heart Part 3






Music cannot be detached from Nupur.Music and Nupur are one,Ashmit understands it from the music class.Nupur is also pleased with Ashmit's teaching style.
After the music class..
A:Ok..then i'm going Nupoooo.
Nupur is surprised and Tilaka is shocked.Because only the closed ones call her like that.
Tilaka gets irritated:What did you call her?Nupoo?Only the family members call her like that.You are trying to flirt with her.We don't need you anymore.
Nupur and Ashmit are shocked.
A:I'm sorry.I never had any bad intention.When you heard her calling Nupoo i thought it's her real name.Chanda just told me to teach her friend's sister.She had'nt mentioned her name.
T:Her real name is Nupur.
He asks softly:Shall i come tomorrow for the class?
T:Ok,but only to teach her music.
Nupur and Ashmit are relieved.

Gradually Tilaka starts liking Ashmit because of his decent behaviour.

Riddhima comes home.
R:Nupoo,how is your music sir?
N:Very nice.
R:I want to meet him.
Tilaka comes:First you change your tight dress and wear something very Indian.
N:Ridz..listen to dadi.
R:Oh!Ok..
Riddhima wears a simple salwar kameez.
When Ashmit comes,Nupur introduces her to him.
A:Chanda told me that Riddhima is very tom boyish kind of a girl.
T:No..no..she is a very traditional girl.
R:Dadi is lying.I don't like Indian clothes.I was forced to wear this today.
Ashmit smiles.Tilaka is embarassed.
A:It's good to have an individual personality.If Riddhima likes modern dresses,what's the point in going against her wish?
Riddhima is impressed by Ashmit as he accepted her personality.

Ashmit is completely engrossed in Nupur's music.
Nupur sees him looking deeply into her eyes.She becomes insecure.
N:Sir..
He does'nt move.
She waves her hand before his eyes.He does'nt move.
He says in his mind:Nupur...whatever you do..nothing can stop me from looking at you.I'm addicted to you now.I can't even spend a day without seeing you.
N:Sir..
A:Yes.
N:What happened?
A:Nothing.
He looks deeply into her eyes.She blinks her eyes with a smile.
She thinks:Something is there in Ashmit sir which pulls me closer to him.
He thinks:What's happening to me?I feel different when i'm with Nupur.
After the music class the rose flower which Nupur has worn falls down.Ashmit takes it without anyone's knowledge.He admires it's beauty.He loves it's fragrance.He keeps it inside the music book.

Riddhima wears a modern dress next day.
Ashmit:I think salwar kameez suits you more than western clothes.
R:But last day you said...
A:What i meant is we can wear what we like.But sometimes the dress which suits us may not be the one we like.
Riddhima feels that he is right.

Akash sees Riddhima in the Cd shop.
A:Hi.
Riddhima does'nt mind him.
A:You did'nt recognise me?
R:Yes,that's why i did'nt speak to you.If i speak to you that won't be a pleasant conversation.
He feels bad.She moves away.
She sees Ashmit there:Hi Ashmitji.
Ash:Hi.
Akash feels insecure when she talks to Ashmit avoiding him.
R:Do you know western music?
Ash:Yes.But no one else in our family likes it.So i could'nt learn it.
They both giggle while talking.
Akash thinks:So Riddhima prefers westen music.
Akash buys a violen and sends it to Riddhima.
She is surprised to get it.
She reads the paper which was attached to it:
To the modern nightingale who loves western music....a music lover's small gift.
She thinks:Ashmitji must have sent it to me.I had told him that i love western music.
She has learnt to play violen in the school.It's her favourite music instrument.She is happy that Ashmit understood it.She plays Violen.
Chanda comes:You played Violen now?
R:Yes.
C:How did you get this violen?
R:Somebody sent it to me?
C:Who?
R:I don't know.
C:Who has the guts to do that?Since you are a bold girl guys of our college dare to flirt with you.May be because of your glamour look somebody must have decided to woo you indirectly.

When Ashmit comes Nupur comes downstairs smiling at him.Her leg slips and she is about to fall down.Ashmit runs to her and holds her.They both look into each other's eyes.

Riddhima gets a gift again.Faded flowers.
She reads the paper attached to the cover:When these flowers reach you they must have faded already.But my heart is fresh and is open for you.
C:You have changed a lot Ridz.Usually you burst out when such a sutuation comes.But now...
R:Stop it yaar.

Eshwari calls Prem and Akash.
E:I could'nt conduct Prem's wedding like i wished.But now i have decided to conduct Prem's and Akash's weddings together.I have made the arrangements.I have found sisters for you both.Their father;the rich business man only brought the proposal to us.
Akash is shocked.
A:But what if we don't like them?
E:What are you saying?I'm sure that you both will like them.
A:But i don't want to marry now.My studies are not over.I have no job.
E:You are smart.You will get campus selection soon.The girl's family are confident about that.That's why they fixed the wedding.
Akash is helpless.He is too weak to oppose his mom.His eyes become wet.
Akash goes to his room.He loses peace of mind.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
Thats a nice part....a progress from Ashmit n Nupur....and glad to see Tilaka eventually liking Ashmit....but ye Riddhima is liking Ashmit instead of Akash....hope she gets to knw the truth soon....and also Akash manages to stop his own wedding....I want Ashmit's way to be perfectly clear...hehe. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
Ashmit should clear all things soon...thx for this part and pm greatpart
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part....................ashmit and nupur like each other but ridhima also is beginning to like ashmit......................cont soon....................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh its a very compicated situation here.
nupur n ashmit like each other-ridzi like ashmit-akash likes ridzi
hope ridzi soon find out that her secret admirer is aksh n not ashmit.i have a feeling that wen ridzi speak her heart in front of nupur den like a nice sister she will back out will not open her heart in front of anyone..hope ashmit n nupur admit their love soon before ridzi speaks....so ashmit n nupur get attracted in first meeting only..well ridzi like ashmit so much that she will ready to do anythg for him.she's going crazy for himm i'm scared if this sitution will get open in front of each other then wat will happen b/w the sisters n to their relationship hope they will bonded like this forever.
so akash is getting married.wonder how will he able to get his love n confess in front of riddhima...
well pls cont so soo dear..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
hi 😊
the up is really good😊😊😊😊
toh ashmit and nupur both started likng each other😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
but yeh ridz ko bhiaasa laage haai that ashmit is sending her gifts
aur ridz aur asmit ko ek saath dekh kar akash got jealous hmmmm😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
par yeh kya ab eswari prem aur akash ke shaadi karwana chahate haai 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
becchara akash
i hope he gets his love ridz 😊
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18

Jyothika:Parul

Avni:Pallavi

Anjali:Anita

Prem:Ejaz

Akash:Iqbal

Chanda:Dimple

Ram:Akashdweep






Prem caresses Akash.
P:I'm sure that you are expressing dislike in this proposal because of something else.
Akash sweats.
P:Tell me the real reason.
A:I love Nupur's sister Riddhima.
Prem is shocked:Don't you know that mom has lost faith in that family.Still you...
A:But that's mom's misunderstanding.
P:Yes.But if mom does'nt like this relationship..
A:No,i can't forget Riddhima.
P;Can you go against mom?
A:No,i can't go against mom.But i can't forget Riddhima also.
P:When we have to forget our beloved we will be depressed.But we have to forget.
Prem's eyes get filled up with tears.
A:Bro...did you have any affair?
P:Yes.
Akash is shocked.
P:I wanted to marry Avni whom i met in Arts school when i went there to visit my friend.I fell in love with her voice.Mom came to know about it.Since mom wanted a rich daughter in law she opposed our relation.But i was adamant about marrying Avni.Mom said she will commit suicide if i marry Avni.So i had to break up with Avni though she requested me not to desert her.Later i heard that Avni tried to commit suicide.I decided that i will bring her back to my life.But mom's condition depressed me.
A:You are so cruel bro.You should not have dumped Avni.
P:Now it's too late.It's been four years since Avni got married to someone else.
If you also become stubborn we will lose mom.

Siddarth's daughter Jyothika is in Riddhima's hostel.She is a smart dusky beauty who is very attractive.She distributes sweets to everyone.
Chanda:Why are you giving us sweets?Today is your birthday?
J:No.My marriage got fixed.
Riddhima:Congrats:Who is the guy?Is he handsome?
J:I have seen only his photo.His name is Akash.His eldest brother Prem will marry my sister.
Riddhima and Chanda are shocked.
Jyothika goes.
R:Jyothika is so foolish.That's why she is marrying Akash.
C:Do you know them?
R:Yes.Akash's brother Prem is the person who got engaged to Nupoo first.He dumped her because of his mom.He is a weak man.I will break this wedding.Eshwariji should'nt be happy.
C:Ridz..no never.How happy is Jyothika.You should not make her upset.Akash may be innocent.We don't know.
Riddhima is confused.
Chanda thinks:The same Eshwariji only broke my sister Avni di's dreams.She was madly in love with Prem.But because of Eshwariji Prem broke up with her.Later when Prem came to our house to marry Avni,dadaji insulted him.Avni di got married to a nice man and they have having a happy married life.She has forgotten Prem.Fate is the real culprit.What is the use of blaming human beings?

Akash is really upset about going to visit the girls along with Prem on the next day.He undergoes migraine because of tension.So he can't concentrate on driving properly.So a car hits his car.He gets admitted to the hospital.His condition is not serious.Only his hand is fractured.
Eshwari:So how can we go to the girls' house?
A:You and Prem bhaiyya can go.
E:But you have to see the girl.
A:First let bro see the girl.Let him get married first.I will marry later.
E:But my plan is to get you both married on the same day.
A:I promise you that i will marry soon.But it's better to conduct the weddings on different days.

Eshwari talks to Siddarth on the phone about this.
S:An astrologer had told us not to conduct both the weddings on the same day.We did'nt know how to tell this to you.But before we could discuss about it to you,you put this suggestion.

Eshwari and Prem go to see Anjali who is meant for Prem.Prem has gone there just for his mom's sake.But when he sees Anjali,he just falls for her.He can't take his eyes off her as she reminds him of Avni.Anjali has worn a shining yellow saree with red blouse.He remembers that Avni also loved wearing yellow sarees.Like Avni Anjali has worn a lot of bangles.He feels that Anjali's face expressions are like Avni's.

Prem and Anjali get married in a grand way.Akash does'nt bother to look at Jyothika.

Avni sees Chanda's sad face.
A:Why do you look dull?
C:My colleague Jyothika is getting married to Prem's brother Akash.Prem got married to Jyothika's sister Anjali.Di..did you forget Prem?
Avni's tears fall down:Don't talk about Prem. Please don't remind me of anything.

Chanda's marriage gets fixed with Ram without her consent.He fell in love with her in the temple and brought the proposal.Ram is not interested in her continuing studies after marriage.She is upset that her college life,studies and friendships are getting to an end with marriage.Riddhima consoles Chanda.
R:Our friendship will not break after marriage.I will visit you after marriage also.
Chanda is happy:Really?
R:Yes.I will gift you a diamond ornament on your wedding.Chanda..will you give me a salwar kameez for a trial?I feel like wearing it now.
Chanda is surprised:You will like wearing salwar kameez?Surprise!
Chanda gives her a salwar kameez.
Riddhima wears it.
C:Wow!You are looking so beautiful.If my family sees you now they will even think of getting married to my brother.
Riddhima blushes.
Her hostel mates laugh at her when they see her in salwar kameez.She feels bad.

Chanda's wedding..
Riddhima attends the wedding.She has worn a western dress.So others are staring at her.Ashmit goes near her:Hi..
R:Hi.All my college mates teased me when i wore salwar kameez as they can't imagine me in Indian clothes.So i wear modern dresses now.But here all are staring at me because of my modern costume.
A:If you want to wear Indian clothes just go ahead.Don't mind other's comments.
She smiles.
His eyes search for Nupur.
A:Where is Nupur?
R:They all have gone for our relative's wedding.I came here as i can't avoid my best friend Chanda's wedding.
A:Let me go and make arrangements.Bye.
R:Ok.
He goes.

Riddhima's eyes fall on Avni.She remembers Chanda telling that Avni is more beatiful than her.Though Avni is pretty she finds Chanda better.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
hi 😊
the up is really good😊😊😊😊
is up is decidated to marriage 😆😆😆😆😆😆
are sab log shaadi karne mein busy😆😆😆😆
prem is getting married to anjali 😛😛😛😛
while chanda is getting marriewd to ram 😛😛😛
yeh prem kitna mamas boy haai😡😡😡😡😡
main mante hue ke maa ko pyyar karn aunke aadar karne thik haai par is ke hum aapne khushi ko mitta de sahe nahin haai naa😊😊😊
aksah aur ridz ko kareeb laao
plz cont soon and do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey thats a nice part....but missed Ashmit-Nupur scene....however many new characters hav been introduced as well....nice progress to the story....pls continue soon!!

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