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Posted: 14 years ago
this is another twist here...........curious to know who is adopting geet's baby.....very nice n excited..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
both the prts r nice nd i thought tht u will mke evryone to knw tht geet is preggy nd whn u will going to do this hope we will get it soon nd loves u alot fr mkng such nice FF's nd update the nxt soonn
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one....
felt bad 4 daadi n maan too...
hope she will b well soon....
n poor baby....plz dont make it cry....😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 41

geet goes back to her room & gets restless
baby~challo na daadi ko milke aate hain😛
geet~mujhe bhi chinta ho rahi hain lekin
baby~challo na
geet locks the room from inside & takes a cab to the hospital
she reaches the ICU & peeps into the window
daadi notices her & waves at her to come in
geet goes & sits next to her... daadi was delighted to see her
geet - aap mera saath competition kar rahe ho?
daadi wondered what was she saying
geet - main do din hospital main rahi to aap bhi mera peeche peeche
aa gayee..
daadi starts laughing loud
maan hears her laugh comes out of the wash room
maan - tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?
geet - ghumne aaye hoon...obviously daadi se milne aayee hoon
maan - GEET
daadi & geet starts laughing thinking about the their doggy joke
maan rolls his eyes & sits in the couch
geet makes daadi have some juice & gives her the medicines
she slides the pillow down & makes her lie down & tucks the spread
kisses her forehead...she held her hand & sat next to her & dossed off
maan watched them sleep peacfully for some time
geet was falling off the chair...maan lifted her & settled her on the couch
she rolled into his lap & hugged him from his waist
he moved her curls and admired her... kya maangta khuda se use paane ke baad,
kiska karta intezaar uske aane ke baad, kyon koi kisi pe jaan luta dete hain
use maloom hua use paane ke baad

maan dossed off resting his head on the couch's rim
daadi got up early & felt so happy to see them togather
she just streched her hand & aahen bharthi..ki kisi ki nazar na lage
dev & meera came to visit daadi ..they hugs daadi & kiss her
dev - how are u feeling now?
daadi - I am really happy
meera - to maan maan gaye
dev - aapne bhaiya ki mangni fix kardi
daadi shows with her eyes look behind
dev & meera turns stood shocked to see maan & geet sleeping
cuddled up in the couch
geet got up hearing them giggle... she stood up at once &
straighten herself & pulled her duppta... it was stuck under maans arms
she pulled it & walked to the washroom embarrassed
maan snapped up with her dupatta pulling apart
maan - dev abhi fursat mili tumhe
dev - nahi bhaiya..woh case mumbai court main tha to
maan - divorce ka kya hua
dev - all sorted out
maan hugs dev & says that is really great . I am very happy for u
maan - tum dono jaldi se shaadi kar loo
daadi - nahi pehle aapki mangni hogi maan
geet walks out the washroom & was shocked to hear that
maan looked at her... she gave a weak smile
baby~papa ki mangni😲!!! kise ke saat???
geet - main chalti hoon daadi
daadi - rukoo
geet - ji daadi
daadi - aap aise kaise ja sakti hain? maan drop karega aapko
geet - nahi daadi I will manage
daadi gives a stirn look to both of them
they leave togather to the parking
dev - bhut pyare lagthe hain saat main
meera - daadi aapne maan ko manaya kaise?
daadi - mat poochoo

they walked silently to the car
woh kuch poch na payee yeh kuch samajha na paaya
dono hi khamosh the...kuch poachna to chaha magar kya
kuch kehna chaha magar kya dono hi bechain the..aur shayad samajhthe
bhi the ek dosre ki bechaini ko
they reached her home & he stopped the car
maan - kuch poochna nahi chahogi
geet looked at him
uske ek sawaal ne maano sau sawaal khade kar diye
bigdaa uska naseeb, ki aaj sanwar diya
jo doobne lagi toh, samandar bhi thaher ne laga,
issey pehle ke sambhalti, woh to dil mein ghar kar gaya tha
geet noded her head for a no & walked out....
went half way & came back lifted his hand & placed a kiss
ek dil.. do jaan..aaj bhi sirf aapki khushi chahtein hain
maan pulls her dupptaa & pulls her closer sitting in the car
maan - khushi chahti ho lekin yeh nahi jaanti meri khushi kisme hain
geet - shayad aapki khushi nahi jaanti lekin shayad aapki majbori samajhti hoon
pulls her dupatta & runs away
kitna samajhne lage the, lekin jo samajhna tha woh kyun nahi samajhte the
aab to maano muskan bhi bechain hone laaghi hain!!!

geet sneaked into the room & pulled her spread & slept off
maan went back to the hospital & insited on taking daadi home
he made all the arrangements & took her home
geet got ready to go to office
brij - u don't have to go to office few days take rest
geet - I am feeling much better now... i can't take off like this
more over we need to give the land papers to sir today
brij - don't stress yourself & have your food on time
geet - umm!!
geet & pinky left reached office...
every one was relaxed & eased since maan was working from home
geet mumered baby aaj kal tere papa mujhe kuch nahi kehte...
baby~aap bhi to papa se kuch nahi kehte
geet~papa ka chamcha baby~ignores her😎
babaji mujhe subha keh sakte the na ki office nahi aa raha hoon
main veerji se lad jhagad kar unke liye office aayee hoon aur aaraam se
ghar me baithe hain.... aab main kya karoongi... main bhi nahi bolti unse
maan calls her...pinky transferes the line
maan - suno
geet - umm
maan - I am working from home
she keeps quite
maan - cancel all my today's appointment
she keeps quite
maan - hate u
she keeps quite
maan - GEET
she keeps quite
maan - GEET
she still does'nt say any thing
maan gets angry & cuts the call
geet mumers call kaat diya poocha bhi nahi ki main kyun naraz hoon
baby~papa ka kaise pata ki aap naraaz hoo
geet~tu chup kar
maan gets annoyed at her being so indifferent and continues his work
dono hi naraaz hai ki kuch kaha nahi
kahan se laye lafz jab wo mile nahi
dard ki zubaan hoti to bata deti
woh zakhm kaise bataye jo dikhte nahi.

daadi calls geet
daadi - hi beta
geet - abhi kaise ho daadi
daadi - much better now
geet - aap ghar kab ja rahe ho
daadi - main ghar main hoon.... maan mujhe discharge kar ke le aayee
geet - thats why he is working from home
daadi - umm
geet felt guilty
daadi - could u come over... I want to start the engagement preparation
geet - ji main kaise
daadi - maan se main baat karloongi
geet - nahi woh baat nahi
daadi - aap jaldi se aajayee
geet - ji

geet reaches mansion... fiza ka yun zhoomna to usi ke aane se hota
phir is kadar bechain kar deta maan ko!!! kuch pal idar udhar bechaini se
uski raah tak tha phir aapne khayal pe khud hi has deta
geet went into daadi's room
daadi hands over few jewels & a sari
daadi - kal karva chauth hain
geet - umm
daadi - tum rakhoongi na
geet - ji main kaise
baby~woh kya hota hain
geet~u r starving tomorrow
baby~nahi!!!!..faints🤢
daadi - I will explain u every thing, don't worry
tum mehendi lagwa lena, I have called the person in the evening &
meera will also join u
geet - meri mehendi lagi hain
daadi - show me...wow kitna ghada rang chada hain
geet blushes
daadi - aur design banwana hain to kar loo
geet - nahi mujhe aise hi pasand hain
baby~papa ne lagayi hain...giggles🤣
geet~tu pitne wala hain
daadi - nakul maan ko bulao na
nakul - ji daadi
daadi - get me the jewellry box from the other room
this is the keys... it is a golden colour box
geet walks out murmering ..yeh mujhse kyun vrat karwana chahti hain
main veerji ko kya kaha hoon gi..doctor ne to
she walks into maan
maan - tum dehk kar nahi chal sakti
geet - ek to main itne pareshan aur aap mujhi pur chilla rahe ho
maan - tum pareshan kab nahi hoti ho?
geet - aap se milne se pehle ... jab se aap se mili hoon meri to
zindagi hi badal gayi hain... kuch bhi meri marzi nahi hota
she gives the keys , sarees & jewells to him ...mujhe nahi rakna
koi karva chuat ka vrat
maan - tum kyun rakho ghi
geet - exactly that is my point, mangani aapki hain na
phir daadi mujse yeh sab kyun karva rahi hain
maan - woh mangani actually.... main subha bhi tum se kehna chahta tha
geet - mujhe yeh sab nahi pata, mujhe yeh sab kuch samajh nahi aata
maan - chup bilkul chup keeps his finger on her lips
geet looks at him confused... mangani jhoothi hain...
tears roll down from her eyes... he cups her face tumhe mangni ki tayari nahi karni hain
to mat karo... daadi se main baat karloonga ...

she hugs him nahi main kar loonghi...he kisses her head
precap
fight!!!😡😡😡
LINK TO NEXT PART 42
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
First one!!!😛

Fab update, Muskan😊
Loved the way she said to dadi ki aap mere saath competition kar rahe ho. That was really cute!!!
And the way she answered Maan, ghumne aayi hoon🤣🤣
Liked the way you lightened the update after a series of serious updates😛

Dev-naintara divorced!!! Yipee
I like Dev-meera here.

Engagement ko lekar misunderstanding. Not fair!😒
Jaldi se clear karo iss misunderstanding ko Muskan😳

Didn't know that Geet could be so understanding and mature at times. She's generally childish but she didn't questioned Maan about the sudden engagement and simply said that she understands his problem!!!👏👏

Karwa-Chauth!!! baby starving. Nahiiiiiiiii Nahiiiii Nahiiii ( Ekta Kapoor serial type)😭 Thoda zyaada dramatic ho gaya lagta hai😉 So I should better say, NAHI😒
Geet still doesn't know that Maan's would be fiancee is she herself.

Baby-geet talk is always a delight to read😊

Love you a lot, Muskan😊
Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
daadi - kal karva chauth hain
geet - umm
daadi - tum rakhoo ghi na
geet - ji main kaise
baby~woh kya hota hain
geet~u r starving tomorrow
baby~nahi!!!!..faints🤢
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poor lil one .......even when he is happy he has to starve ........someitmes becoz of mummy dearest and now daadi !!

hey muskan
yaar i absolutely loved this update.

thank you so much !!! i am going to start reading both
truly magic and madhoshi from part one all over again.




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Posted: 14 years ago
superb....

geet shud tell maan abt baby...its high tiME!!!


continue ASAP!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Di🤗

awesome update👏
👏👏
loved it
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
loved these lines❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

daadi - kal karva chauth hain
geet - umm
daadi - tum rakhoo ghi na
geet - ji main kaise
baby~woh kya hota hain
geet~u r starving tomorrow
baby~nahi!!!!..faints🤢


engagement ko lekar misunderstanding...................NOOOOOO

Baby n Geet is soooo sweet 😊😊😊😊😊 n funny😆
😆😆😆😆😆
plsssssss cont soon

Luv u
Naina🤗
Edited by Kool_Naina - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awssuuMM!!!

karva chaut...baby is soo adorabLE!!!


update sooN!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
I love the baby bits like always...hmmm...why will they fight?
please update soon di and thanks for the update!

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