~Madhoshi Maaneet thread 3~ - Page 28

geet-daadi bonding looks good....😊

muski... sweetheart.. sorry for commenting ealier... for next coming 2-3 weeks.. i am really busy.. so there won't be any long comments.. my in laws are comng down so I won't be able to spend more time in front of my system.

So dear.. still maan and Geet don't know that they are going to be engaged.. I want Brij to tell maan the truth coz I think in future there are high chances that Maan can misunderstand Geet.. He still doesn't want to accept his feelings for her..

I am feeling very much bad for Geet.. she is coooo innocent.. and rthe Bro-sis relationship.. so special :)

Come on before the engagement Maan should know about the baby so they can start their relationship not based on lie but truth....

updates

in part 40
baby~mujhe aapne mama papa pas rahna hain starts crying😭
geet~baby roo mat na please...jo to chata hain woh nahi ho sakta
baby~crying louder hey baby ab pata chala mama ko tang karte ho aur apni bari pe rona shuru kar diya
geet gets worried feeling him cry
maan - hellow
brij - hi
maan - woh!!! can speak to geet ?
brij gives the phone to geet - maan ka phone hain
baby~papa ka phone hain & smiles😃
maan - aapne aansoon pochoo phele
geet - ji ..she smiled & wiped her tears
maan - kyun mujhe itna pareshan karti hoo
geet - lekin
maan - chup bilkul chup... agar ek bhi aansoon aur nikla na
mujhe se bura koi nahi hoga
geet - aap se bura koi ho bhi nahi sakta
maan - aacha kidhar ho
geet - hospital main
maan - sab teehk hain na

maan - hate u
geet - bye
maan - bye??? u r supposed to say hate u 2,3, 4, ..10 but baby ko ab abc sekhni he na

part 41 is

baby~challo na daadi ko milke aate hain😛
geet~mujhe bhi chinta ho rahi hain lekin
baby~challo na

daadi notices her & waves at her to come in
geet goes & sits next to her... daadi was delighted to see her
geet - aap mera saat competition kar rahe ho?
daadi wondered what was she saying
geet - main do din hospital main rahi to aap bhi mera peeche peeche
aagayee.. daadi starts laughing loud

maan - tum yanha kya kar rahe ho?
geet - ghumne aaye hoon...obviously daadi se milne aayee hoon

dev & meera turns stood shocked to see maan & geet sleeping
cuddled up in the couch

geet mumered baby aaj kal tere papa mujhe kuch nahi kahte...
baby~aap bhi to papa se kuch nahi kahte
geet~papa ka chamcha baby~ignores her😎 loved this convo

daadi - kal karva chauth hain
geet - umm
daadi - tum rakhoo ghi na
geet - ji main kaise
baby~woh kya hota hain
geet~u r starving tomorrow
baby~nahi!!!!..faints🤢

maan - tum pareshan kab nahi hoti ho?
geet - aap se milne se pehle ... jab se aap se milli hoon meri to
zindaghi hi badal gayee hain... kuch bhi meri marzi nahi hota
she gives the keys , sarees & jewells to him ...mujhe nahi rakna
koi karva chuat ka vrat
maan - tum kyun rakho ghi
geet - exactly that is my point, mangani aapki hain na
phir daadi mujse yeh sab kyun karva rahi hain
maan - woh mangani actually.... main subha bhi tum se khana chata tha
geet - mujhe yeh sab nahi pata, mujhe yeh sab kuch samjh nahi aata
maan - chup bilkul chup keeps his finger on her lips
geet looks at him confused... mangani jooti hain...

nice updated nd woow karwa chauth ka vrat jst waiting fr it update the nxt soonn

~madhoshi~
part 42

maan goes to meet daadi
daadi - aap betahien mera pass
geet gets the golden jewellry box
daadi - thanxs beta
daadi opens the box & pulls out the ring
daadi - geet ko pehna do
maan & geet look at each other shocked
daadi - mangani ki date to 2 din baad ki hain
maan - woh Sukhdev ji ki
daadi interupts - geet ki darji se meri baat hogayee hain
unhe 2 din ke baad ke date se koi problem nahi hain
baby~mama papa ki mangni & starts dancing
maan rubs his head realizing Sukhdev ji is geets darji
geet still not clear of anything cluctches her duppatta & looked down
daadi - challoo pehnavo do itna kya soch rahe ho
maan kept looking at her few mins... she looked reluctant
shayad jaante tha woh nahi manegi
shayad samjhne jo laga tha use
daadi - yah ring humare ghar ki bedi bahu ke liya hain
maan lifts her hand she was cold ..geet pulls out..mujhe nahi karni koi jooti mangani
and runs away from there
daadi - jooti??? sharama rahi hogi, javoo deehkoo use
geet runs out of the mansion
maan - geet meri baat suno
geet - mujhe aapki koi baat nahi sunni, mujhe aap se koi wasta nahi rakna
maan pulls her hand... she snaps & runs away
maan - meri baat suno
geet turns & runs madly into a car on in road....maan pulls her away
maan -yeh kya kar rahi ho
geet - chodo mujhe
maan lifts her & puts her on his shoulder & takes her to the outhouse
geet - chodo mujhe, humesha aapke man marzi nahi chaleghe
she is struggling..hitting his back & kicking her legs
maan - geet meri baat suno
geet - nahi sunni mujhe aap ki koi baat
maan - geet meri baat suno sets her on the floor
she struggles to pull out maan pinns her on the wall
she snaps out maan holds harder pushing on to the wall...she gets hurt
maan closes his eyes & eases her wrist...geet please meri baat suno
geet - chodo mujhe...aap mujhe samjhe the kya hain aap ke nazron mein meri
to koi izaat nahi
maan - GEET !!presses her wrist... kicks the wall
geet - lekin meri pariwar ko in sab main kyun
maan - GEET
geet - jaanti hoon yeh sab meri hi galti hain...i have been letting meself
low infront of you. iska matlab aap mere pariwar waloon ko
maan - GEET
he holds her into his embrace & closes her lips with his
she struggles to pull out...starts hitting on his back
he still does'nt let go...he holds her tighter...she cries
he kisses her tears..chodo mujhe...nahi...tumhe pehle meri baat sunni hogi
mujhe nahi sunni aap ki koi baat..aap bhut bure hoo
bhikul aache nahi ho dhust ho dhanav bhi I hate u
maan always wanted her to say that...but it did'nt sound the way it used to
aaj un lavzoon main woh ehsaas nahi tha...
aaj un main woh kashish nahi thi
maan - aise mat kaho na please meri baat ek bar to sunloo
I hate u hate u hate u...maan gets annoyed & turns her violently
no u don't...u don't hate me
geet snaps out of his arms...sits down crying...kyun kia aapne aisa
maine pehle hi unhe kuch kam duhk diya hain jo aap ne yeh sab
maan tries to come close to her...she snaps & crawls back
don't touch me...mat chova mujhe maan hugs her
maan lifts her & make her sit on the couch goes in to get her some water
geet leaves without saying anything, maan comes back & was shocked not to see her...
he smashed the glass in his hand & closes his eyes mujhe kehne do diya hota
mujhe nahi pata tha ki Sukhdevji tumhare darji hain
tum aapne aagee kab kis ki challne deti hoo???...
kis baat pe khafa the, shikwai the
kareeb rah kar bhi woh samjh na pain the
kaise kah de befawa..the
wafa ka bhi to zikra kiya nahi kabhi!!!
geet cried & went back home...wiped her tears & walked in
brij - geet itni jaldi aagayee
geet - nahi main tired hogayee thi
baby~nai papa se fight karke aayee hain

geet wakes up latter at light & comes down for dinner...
darji gives a big plate with the same jewels, saree & sargi
she gave a confused look to darji
brij explains the whole incident daadi's propsal & how they rejected
then daadi's health & maan's request for maintaining the lie
geet takes the sargi & gets even more confused
brij - u don't have to fast, just pretend when u meet them tomorrow
geet noded & went to her room
unho ne mujhe kaha bhi nahi ki woh mujhe se shaadhi karna chathe hain
lekin kyun...main to unki pasand bhi nahi hoon
kanhi daadi ne aapne marzi se to nahi yeh rista
yeh sab kya ho raha hain...woh kuch bolte kyun nahi?
baby~aap sunti kanha hain?
yeh sab galat ho raha hain...
jaane uski talaash me, woh kyun nahi mili
yah usne jaan boojhker payaa nahi unko
aab roote hain woh, jab ek duje ko kho diya
jab the dono paas the, apne dil ke kareeb nahi aane diya

geet did'nt understand what was happening
maan was restless about the whole missunderstanding
bechain the kuch is qadar ke soya nahi raat bher
ke pulkhon se likh diya ek dusera ka naam chand per
aab mano ek dosre ke adatatse thi
yaad yun jalane lagi thi, dil bechain hone laga, sham dhalne lagi thi
tanhai yun dasne lagi thi, khud ki parchai bhi daarane lagi thi

it was 4.00am...geet took the ferni in a bowl and had a bite...
she heard a click sound on the back door she hide the bowl behind
maan came in quitly did'nt say any thing
geet looked down... baby~papa aagayee👏...ummah
maan sat next to her on the bed... she kept quite and looked away
he came close to her... her heart was beating wild with the feel of his
warmth..he slipped his hand around her & took the bowl from her
she struggled...he looked at her...she looked angry... maan came even closer
she left it once. he took the bowl & fed her..she turned her face
he held the spoon for few mins next to her lips...she gave in & took the bite
he fed her the whole bowl & then some fruits & milk
he turned to leave. geet pulled him back. he turned to meet her eyes
it was wet not complaining but hurt.
mano uske choot ka ek ek dard uske ankoo main uttar aagaya ho
geet looked at his hand & caressed it...
she pulled out the cotton & cleaned the wound & applied the medicine
and then tied the bandage
maan - tumhe kyun lagtha hain ki main tumhari izaat nahi karta
jis din tumhari izaad nahi karoonga usdin khud ki nazroon se girjavoon gha
slips in the ring & kisses her hand...
agar tum galat ho...to main bhi utna hi galat hoon ki main tumse juda to nahi
she kept quite. he kissed her forehead & left.

OMGG! MAAN ANDD ANGRYY! AHH! super hot! love how he pins her to the wall. and geet not listening to him.. and he runs after her..

oh oh ...karwachaut ..i always wanted geet 2 fast fr maan ..hope she faints nd maan comes to knw the truth ...lol .....

Awwww, loved it Muski, read a part of it, thanks 4 taking my vm😆