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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it😊
And the way you added the song sequence was amazing!!!
Both falling for each other😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
really loved plz continue
hope there is no major twist as they have not yet confessed their feelings to each other
plzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow wat a beautiful update, bahara sequence is really very cute.........
hope dat they confess their love soon............
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey hi
awesome update
finally both realizes there feelings
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yippie...they are falling for each other and accepted that..now cannot wait till they confess.
loved the song sequence one of my favorite...loved it thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
they are falling for each other
maan always saving her
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 22
Geet walked into the office the following morning knowing she had to control her feelings otherwise she would totally lose herself. She quickly went to her cabin and thought to herself she would keep away from Maan all day. It was her lucky day as Maan was out of the office for most of the day and didn't call her at all.

Maan had decided to keep away from Geet otherwise he would go mad. He tried to do his work without being distracted by Geet. He looked at her through the blind window a few times seeing her working or talking to Siya and Adi or otherwise praying Babaji. Maan stared at her and thought how innocent she is of the world. He loved her innocent style.

That evening when Geet went home she had a massive surprise waiting for her. The doorbell rang. Geet wondered who it could be at this time. She opened the door and was shocked.

'Geetu'.

'papa' There was a middle aged man standing there with flowers and a box. Tears came out of Geet's eyes. She hugged her father tight. She allowed him to come in and gave him tea.

'papa itne salon baadh apko apni beti ki yaad nahi ayi, mere ya di ki'

'bete tumhe pata hai na tumhari ma ke death ke badh main reh nahi paya'

'koi baat nahi papa aaj aap waapas ayi hai na'

'ha mere Geetu, aur yeh lo tumhara present'

'present liken aaj to kuch nahi hai'

'ha par tumhe aat saal ke badh deka hai na Geet'

'jee'

'tik hai main chalta ho mere ghar'

'liken papa aap yaha reh sakte ho na'

'nahi Geet filhaal ke liye nahi main waapas ounga tum chinta mat karna'

'tik hai bye'

Geet bid her father farewell. The following day Geet went with Siya to office and told her that her father returned. Siya tried to smile and act happy for Geet. When Geet went away Adi realised that something was wrong with Siya.

'Siya kya hua'

'wo Geet ne kaha ke auska papa waapas aya hai'

'ha to isme bure baat kya hai'

'Adi tum nahi janti ke iske papa kaise admi hai, Geet ko bi nahi pata. Isliye itne saalon se Geet aur Gia di se door the'

'Siya mujhe batao kya baat hai' Siya told Adi everything about Geet, Gia and Geet's father in secrecy. Adi was shocked.

'mujhe itna pata hai ke agar wo waapas aya hai to Geet bilkul safe nahi hai, mujhe Gia di ko batana hoga' Maan walked past Siya and heard the last sentence and thought to himself who has returned who is Geet not safe with. He wanted to ask Siya but he didn't want to be interfering. He went to Geet's cabin and saw her smiling.

'Good morning Maan Sir'

'Good morning Geet, tum itne khush kyun ho'

'Ab app ko mere khushi se be aitraaz hai akroo kahi ke'

'nahi aisa hi pocha Geet'

'oh wo to mere papa waapas ayi hai aat saal ke badh jab main 11 aur Gia di 15 ti ti na mere mum ke death hogayi ti aur papa aus sadme se bohot dukhi te aur hum dono ko chor kar chalegayi ti. Liken ab sab kuch tik hai'

'tik hai tik hai Geet tum apna kaam karo main badh meh milta ho'

Maan went to his office and wondered why would Geet not be safe with her father what was Siya talking about.

Geet went home that evening and had another surprise her sister and brother in law had arrived.

'Diiiiiiiii jijsss.. ' She hugged them tight. 'kya baat hai aaj to pura family reunion horaha hai, apko pata hai na papa waapas ayi hai'

Gia looked at Abhi with a dejected look. Abhi looked at her telling her to relax. The door bell rang.

'Abhi papa waapas ayi hai agar papa ne Geet ke saat'

'isliye to hum yaha ayi hai na Geet ka khayal rakne ke liye, tum chinta mat karna, Tumne hamesha Geet ko bachaya hai aur hamesha apne bari behen ka farz nibaya hai'

'ha tum tik ka ra he ho'

'Dii dekho kaun aya hai papa' Geet said walking into the living room with her father. Gia and there there father looked at eachother. Gia looked at him with anger in her eyes. She wanted to push him out the door out from there lives.

'Geet tu andar ja mujhe papa se kuch kaam hai'

'liken Di'

'GEET' Geet pounted and went into her room

'App waapas kyun ayi ho Mr Shergill'

'Gia betey'

'Bete mat kahiya aap mujhe aap ne ausi din wo haq kodiya jab apne 'auske bare me meh baat bi nahi karna chati'

'Gia mana ke mujse galti hogayi ti'

'Galti galti, apne guna kiya, kya koi bi pita apne bachi ke saat aisa karta hai'

'Gia please main maafi magta ho'

'maafi, apke waja se mere sara bachpan barbad hogaya apke waja se Ma humne chor ke chaligayi main apko Geet ke saat kuch nahi karni dongi'

'Gia manta hu maine gunna kiya ta aur is gunna ke liye maafi nahi mag sakta liken please sirf tum dono to ho mere saat'

'Jo aap ne mere saat kiya ta main kabhi bi apko Geet ke saat kahi karne dongi chali jao yaha se abhi isi waqt aur waapas hamara zindagi main mat ana'

'BAS Gia, main jo chata ho main karke hi jaounga' There father shouted and left.

Gia walked to Abhi and said 'Abhi mujhe bohot dar lagraha hai agar Papa ne Geet ke saat aisa harqat ki to'

'Gia tum chinta mat karo, main ho tum ho aur yaha tak Siya bi hai'

'main aune kabhie bi maaf nahi karsakti, jo aune mere saat kiya'

'calm down Geet dusre room main hai agar ausne kuch sunliya humne ek acha joot banaya ta ke tumhara ma da death normal ti aur papa chaligayi te kyun ke wo tumhara ma ka death ka sadma se nahi bahar aapaya agar Geet ko assliyat pata chal gayi to Geet tot jayenge tumne ek behen hone ka farz nibaya hai, acha hua tumne Geet ko protect kiya aur tum dono ghar chorke tumhere masi ke saat rehne chaligayi teh'

'He was a monster Abhi, Geet ke liye mujhe bohot daar lag raha hai agar Geet ke saat aunnone'

'Gia main tumse waada karta hu ke main ek bare bhai ke tara Geet ko protect karonga your dad will never touch her'

Gia hugged Abhi tight and started crying. Abhi consoled her. Geet heard everything and saw everything and was shocked. As soon as Abhi and Gia went to bed she ran out of the house and was in tears she was unsure of what to do who to trust.

Next Day

Abhi and Gia went to wake Geet up when they realised she was not in her room. Her bed had not been slept in. They called Siya straight away. Siya had not heard from Geet either. Siya went to the office worried about Geet. Adi saw her worried and asked her.

'Geet pata nahi kaha chali gayi hai, Adi agar Geet ke papa ne kuch'

Maan walked in to the office.

'Siya badh main, Maan sir ane wali hai' Adi Rushed to his seat. Maan went straight to Geet's cabin and saw she was not there. Phir se late huh Miss Shergill, aaj tumne sunane ka dil bohot kar raha hai

2 hours had passed still there was no news of Geet. Abhi was worried, he called the police but they said they had to wait 24 hours. Maan in office, was waiting for Geet he called her landline and Gia picked up

'Hello'

'Hello kya main Geet se baat karsakta hu'

'jee aap kaun'

'Main Geet ka boss'

'I'm Sorry Geet yaha nahi hai'

'tik hai jab wo ajaye phir kaho ke office main ajana'

Yeh kya hai Geet ghar main nahi hai na office main na mobile pe. He walked to Siya and overheard Adi and Siya talking

'Kal raat se Geet lapata hai, Gia di aur Abhi jiju bohot tensed hai, daar hai mujhe agar Geet ko kuch hua to, aur Geet ke papa ne Geet ko kuch kiya to'

'Siya Geet kaha hai' Maan said overhearing them.

'Siya maine kuch pocha'

'Sir Geet kal raat se lapata hai'

'kya aur tum muje ab batarahi ho mujhse sab kuch batao aur maine suna ke Geet ke father kya hai'

'Sir agar main apko bata do please app kisi se mat batana please'

'tik hai bolo..'

Siya told Maan the truth about Geet's father. What Geet's father did to Gia and what he could have done to Geet. Maan was disgusted.

'aise baap be hote hai, disgusting, ok Adi tum ek kaam karo tum police walo ko phone karo aur mere lawyer se baat karao Geet ke father ka kuch karna parega aur Siya tum mere saat chalo hum Geet ko dondh ne chaltey hai'

Meanwhile Geet was sitting in the temple where Geet and Maan first met. She looked tired weak and exhausted. She wondered to herself what did her father do so bad that Gia hated him. What did her father do that Geet needed to be protected from her father. She wanted answers.

PRECAP: Truth about Geet's father. Maan finds Geet. A beginning of a little trip to Simla.

Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago
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Hey awesome update.....Loved it..
Really wanna know what happened!! cant wait pls continue soon and thanks for the pm!:)
Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
terrific update.....want to know the truth what happened actually plzzzzzz update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update. loved it.
update soon.

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