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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part. loved it.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry havent dun PMs.. will do all of them today.. !!! was busy as it was Eid yday x Ive actually got a few gud ideas nw from watching Eastenders lol x
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey hi maha update was awesome,
superb work by you
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 21
Geet had stopped crying by the time she had reached the car. Her eyes were red and swollen. She thanked her babaji for sending Maan to her rescue. She was hurt, angry but no at anyone but herself for trusting Rudraskh, for thinking he could change.

'GEET, tum tik ho na' Maan said breaking her thoughts.

'ji' Geet replied meekly.

'Tum paagal ho, kisi bi par yakeen kardiya. Tumhe yaad to hai na wo wohi ladka hai jisne tumne tappar mara ta'

'aap ko kaise maloom' Geet asked confused.

'maine dekha ta aus din charity show main, waise bi tum bohot acha dance karti ho' Maan said changing the topic. Geet smiled. She forgot what happened and smiled at Maan.

'I'm sorry, mujhse laga ke Rudraskh badal gaya, college ke din se mujhse pareshan karta ta, liken jab ausne maafi maga to mujhe laga ke'

'Liken Geet kisi bi vishwash itni jaldi nahi karna chahiye, acha hua ke maine Rohit ka baat sunle ti'

'Thank you Maan sir.'

Maan dropped Geet to her apartment.

'Go to sleep, aur tumhe kal office main tume par ajana warna' Maan warned being the akroo boss he was.

'dusht danav' Geet mummered. Maan smiled at Geet hearing her. Geet smiled back. Both felt a pang of emotions in their heart.

The following day at office, Geet walked in. She thought about lots of things. She walked past Maan and smiled. He smiled back. Geet was happy. She felt new emotions and it always happened when Maan was around.

-Imagine this song in the background

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hg2fvFLci3Y

bahara from I hate love stories

Geet walked into her office and smiled at Maan through the window that divided them.

Soyi soyi palkon pe chal ke
Meri sapno ki khidki pe aa gaya
Aate jaate phir mere dil ke,
Inn haathon mein woh khat pakda gaya

Pyaar ka
Lafzon mein rang hai pyaar ka
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar vee
Bahara bahara
Ki chain to hua faraar vee
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee

Geet walked into Maan's office gave him his coffee and smiled. She was about to leave when her foot got stuck in the chair and slipped right into Maan's arms. Maan and Geet stared into eachtothers eyes. They had a new feeling a new ehsaas that was joining them. He got her up and asked her if she was alright. Geet nodded. He smiled and told her to be careful.

That night Geet was at home and thinking about her moments with Maan. She knew she was having feelings for him. She walked in the park and saw couples together and started to imagine herself with Maan holding her hand. She smiled and twirled around. (next part of lyrics with Geet having flashbacks of Maan). She rememberd Maan dropping her home that evening.


Ho tora saajan
Aayo tore desh
Badli badra badla saavan
Badla jag ne bhes re
Tora saajan
Aayo tore desh

She was falling in love with Mr Akroo she thought to herself. The following afternoon she brought a rose with her to her cabin. She remembered the morning when Maan helped her when she was stuck on a file where there hands met. She picked up the rose and looked at it and spun around in her cabin when Maan walks in. Geet sees him blushes and run's away. (next part of lyrics)

Woh kabhi dikhe zameen pe
Kabhi woh chaand pe
Yeh nazar kahe use yahan
Main rakh loon baandh ke ek saans mein
Dhadkano ke paas mein
Haan paas mein ghar banaye
Haye bhoole yeh jahan

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar vee
Bahara bahara
Ki chain to hua faraar vee
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee

Geet looked at herself in the mirror in the bathroom and imagines Maan behind her. She imagines him coming close to her right to her face. Inches away from her lips.

Preet mein tori Ore sawariya
Payal jaise chanke bijuriya
Cham cham naache tan pe badariya hoo O o OoO
Baadaliya tu barse ganah
Barse ganah.
Barse ganah..
Barse ganah....

She closes her eyes and opens them to see no one was there. Geet blushes and walks out and rushes into Maan. He steadies her and Geet blushes and smiles. She walked slowly down the office corridor towards her cabin where Maan was walking towards his. There hands were almost touching. Geet was lost in staring at Maan when Maan asked her if she was okay. She broke out of her stare and nodded. Maan smiled and walked away.

Jo yeh badaliyan
Woh ched de
To chalke baarishein
Woh de aahatein
Kareeb se
To bole khwaishein ke aaj kal
Zindagi har ek pal
Har ek pal se chahe
Haye jiska dil hua

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar vee
Bahara bahara
Ki chain to hua faraar vee
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee

Geet smiled and went home with the rose in her hand. She looked at it and thought of Maan. Soyi soyi palkon pe chal ke
Meri sapno ki khidki pe aa gaya
Aate jaate phir mere dil ke,
Inn haathon mein woh khat pakda gaya

Pyaar ka
Lafzon mein rang hai pyaar ka

Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli baar vee
Bahara bahara
Ki chain to hua faraar vee
LyricsMasti.com
Bahara bahara
Hua dil pehli pehli baar vee

Ho tora saajan
Aayo tore desh
Badli badra badla saavan
Badla jag ne bhes re
Tora saajan
Aayo tore desh

She looked at the rose and picked up Maan's jacket and pretended to dance with it like she was dancing with Maan. She imagined him in the jacket. Geet smiled and came out of her dream.

'YES I LOVE MAAN' Geet said aloud.

Then realisation hit upon Geet, liken wo to nahi kartey. Geet ruk ja, please apne aap ko samballo'

However Maan was falling in Love with Geet to.

Mujhe pareshan karti hai, hark am ulta kartey hai, mujse gussa dilate hai, bar bar taqrati hai, phir bi mujhse auske hassi pasand hai. Uska udaas chehra nahi deksakta. YES I LOVE GEET. Par kya wo mujhe pyar kartey hai,

Maan and Geet both realised that they had to control there feelings.

PRECAP: Geet's father returns. (BIG STORY BEHIND this) Gia and Abhi worried come to Delhi quickly. Geet confused with everyone behaviour. Geet gets angry and leaves.

--Sorry a little while more for the confession.. ive got better ideas so i took it out x
Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally they accept their love......
waitng for next part.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates
loved them
yay theyre falling for eachother
yay maan came and saved her
hate sasha and Rudraskh
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww how sweet loved the bahara scene it was to cute and the so g matches their feelings and love blossoming and yay the confessed partially but I know you would have better ideas for the proper confession anyways can't wait for the next part wanna know geets dad and what the secret behind him is anyways loving the story and continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG...!!!
it was super duper update dear...!!
i realli enjoyed it...!!!
I totally Luv it yaar...!!!
hu they r feeling 4 each other n...!! they song was so gud...!! 1 of ma fav...!! u have describe beautifully...!!..
Finally they confess...!! great yaarr...!!!
cont soon..!!
Geet's dad cuming bk...!!!! i wonder wat story behind leaving her Di n Geet..>!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it......awesome......loved the song and imaginations of geet........plzzzzz update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update.....
Finally both of them have fallen for each other......
waiting to know why Geet's parents have come to Delhi....


Love
Namita

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