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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it very interesting twist n turns great ff......... Update soon.
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awesome start sweety plzzzzzz update soon😉
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awesome update
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Tommorow !!!!
PRECAP for 2mz..
Geet arrival in Delhi
Geet and Maan ajeeb meeting in A mandir not THE MANDIR (thats like way later)
Geet and Maan meet in office !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetysumaiya

Tommorow !!!!

PRECAP for 2mz..
Geet arrival in Delhi
Geet and Maan ajeeb meeting in A mandir not THE MANDIR (thats like way later)
Geet and Maan meet in office !!!

LOVE the precap :-D look forward to tom
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice, lovely part. loved it.
update soon.
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PART 17
Geet stepped out of the train into a new city. A beginning of a new life, a chance to be independent. A chance to prove to herself and her brother in law and sister that she don't need to be a burden on them and to give them some 'US' time.

Geet stepped out of the train to hug her friend Siya who had been waiting for her.

'finally tu agai ab chal tere flat tayyar hai.. right next door to mine'. Siya had arranged a flat in her apartmenet right next to hers as she didn't want Geet to feel too alone and also wanted to help Geet to be independent.

At Lunch at Siya house Siya broke the silenece

'Geet humhare boss hai na' wo bohot gusse waley hai aur tu hai na koi bi galti nahi karna aur tum apne zabaan mat larana.. piche hafte teen logo ko nokri se nikal diya ta'

'kafi zaalim hai .. ek choti se galti aur kisi ke pet pe lat marna.. kafi dusht lagraha ha haina'

'Geet tu yeh sab chor aur kal time se pohoch jana.. mere saat hi ajana'

'nahi Siya yaar mujhe pehle Maandir jana hoga na. nahi kaam hai to bagwan se maadat magne ke liya'

Later that evening

'Hello Jijs.. ha main tiq ho.. flat bohot acha hai acha balcony aur chand bi hai.. NAHIIIII di ko phone mat do' wo phir se ro parengi.. pata hai na kitna aassoon bahara ti station peh.. ladda hai poora atlantic ocean khatam hogaya'

'Achaa Tik hai.. tumhari di atti hogi main phone raqta ho.. kal phone karunga.. tum apna khayal rakna tik hai aur be safe'

'uffo Jijs I'm not a baby'

'Tum ho na.. abhi taq mere pyare se bachi acha tik hai goodnight.. tum so jao kal kam pe jana hai na'

'jii night sweet dreams'

Geet put the phone down unaware of the new tomorrow would bring when she enters the first stage of her independence.

Next Day

Maan and Savitri Devi entered the Mandir. Maan told his grandma he would wait outside as he had a urgent phone call. Savitri Devi

'Maan darshan to karlo'

'uff tik hai jaldi karleta ho' said Maan texting on his phone and walking up the stairs. He did a quick prayer and waited outside for his grandma to return.

Meanwhile Geet who was already at the Mandir was praying

'Bagwan ji.. please aaj job ka pehle din hai.. aaj koi galti mat ho aur sab kuch tik ho please'' Geet glanced at the clock and realised she was getting late

'hai babaji.. meh late hone wali ho tik hai bagwan ji Bye' Geet ran out of the Mandir and slipped at the bottom step where someone had dropped water.

'Hai aaj main hospital pochnewali ho' thought Geet waiting for the impending disaster but nothing came. She felt two strong arms holding her from the waist. Geet was too scared to open her eyes.

'Tum tik ho na' said the voice. Geet opened her eyes to see two pairs of eyes and the most handsome person she had ever seen looking at her. Maan saw Geet's eyes and was locked into them. He saw Geet running down the stairs and saw her about to trip and without thinking he went to save her. Geet finally came out the eyelock when Maan's phone rang.

'ha main tik ho.. thank you'. Maan pulled her up. Geet adjusted her duppata.

'Tum kya andi ho dekh ke nahi chalsakti aur toofan ke tara baghi jara hi ho. tum paagal ho kya'

'excuse me.. aap hotey kaun ho mujhe paagal kehne waley aur thank you apne mujhe bachaya'

'Sediya dekh ke chalti hai bagti nahi hai kisi ne sikaya nahi hai'

'what do you mean sikaya nahi hai.. main aachi tara janti ho mujhe kya karna chahiye aur kya nahi Mr'

'MSK'

'kya.. yeh kaise naam hai.. MSK.. jo be ho Mr Sadoo main late ho ra hi ho aur mujhe jana hai kafi waqt app ne barbad kiya hai mera'.

'tum ladkiya to kisi cheeze ki ahimiyat nahi rakti agar rakti to tum late nahi hoti'

'eh hello aap apne kaam se kaam raqna'. Geet turned to cross the road when Maan pulled her back. A truck at high speed rushed passed them.

'Tum dekh kar nahi chalsakti.. tum sachmuch paagal ho agar maine tumhe nahi bachaya hota to aaj tum ''

'wo main thank you'. Geet pulled his hands off and rushed to the taxi stand and ran off for the taxi.

Kya babaji aaj he ke din is namuna se milwana ta.

Meanwhile Maan thought to himself yeh ladki kitni paagal hai aur gussa to nak par hai.. jo maine aus raat dekha ta aur aaj .. kitna bolti hai'

Maan rang office to inform Adi to tell his new secretary to arrange a meeting for him.

Maan reached office before Geet as Geet had to rush back as she forgot her purse in the Mandir. As Geet and Maan left the Mandir, the bells started ringing and winds started blowing as the Gods knew that two lost souls are about to meet again.

'ADII secretary abhi taq nahi ayi..'

'wo wo pata nahi Sir maine phone kiya ta'

Geet walked into the office at that moment to see Siya

'Geet tum aaj margai Sir bohot gusse main hai tum late kaise hue'aaj tumhara pehla din hai shayad aakri din hoga..'

'mat poch yaar Mandir main kisi ke saath jagra hua ta aur''

'badh main batana tum jaldi se wo wali Cabin main jao Sir tumhara interzaar kar ra ha hai'.

Geet panicked and ran towards the cabin.

'May I come in Sir?'

'Come in' said Maan. Geet walked in and stood behind the desk where Maan was facing the window going through a file.

'Toh Miss Geet Shergill, Tumaha aaj pehle din hai to aap late kaise hosakti hai'.Kya tumhe yeh job nahi chahiya dismiss kardo kya..EK late ana aur phir meeting bi nahi hopana kya yeh tumhara work ettiquites hai'

'Woh Sir main jaldi aani wali ti liken wo kya hai aaj main Mandir gayi ti' AUR'

Maan turned around and Geet and Maan were shocked.

'TUM'

'AAP'

Somewhere in the middle of Shimla a Pandit sat with his disciples and said

'aaj wo dono phir se miley aur pyar ki shuruvat phir se hogi.. janam janam ka saat hai aur janam janam ka pyar hai'.

PRECAP: Maan and Geet in office. Sasha introduction.

Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yay...Im 1st...!!!!
*edit*
wow...awesum...wonderful update...!!!!👏👏👏👏
vo phir miley...!!!!😆😆😆
they meet in Temple...with fight n famous hug...!!!😳😳😳
Siya n Jijs r best ...so supportive...!!!!😉
Ufff ...MSK....jt luv him...!!!!😳😳😳
i reali like hu u r describing n relating dis new sstory wiv old one...!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
ek nayae shuwhrat office main...!!!!😃😃😃
now i cant wait 4 next update...!!!😉
Im reali touch wiv .....soul mates 4 lifetym in every life...!!!!😊😊😊
Edited by charmed ones - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnn
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next update in a bit.. i cant sleep woke up at 1pm 2dy.. so wnt be able to sleep like until 4am in the morning so mite as well write u a update for this n love fear and obsession x up in a hour both iA x

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