MAANEET - GENTLE WHISPERS! THREAD 1 - Page 7

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OMG hot update.. plz add me to ur Pm list
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wow!!!!
if this was a trailer, how wil the movie be???😉
the precap sounds so interesting...
plz continue soon...😊
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wowwwwwwwwwwww but so short😔send next part soon
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OH GOD kawaii
great update
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hi dear,
nice FF
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lovely romantic update.. liking the bold geet.. do continue soon
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❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️loved it.....👍🏼❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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GUYS SRY 4 BEING LATE......sum net prob.....k here u go!!!
p.s. in my ff, geet is nt pregnant!!!


GENTLE WHISPERS PART 7




Before they could proceed any further, a loud call distracted them!

"Geet……………!"

It was this loud call that made them realize what they were doing! Again, " Geet beta………are you there???"

Geet immediately withdrew her hands from his face and tried to move but Maan pulled her back and pinned her to the wall!

"Mujhe jaane dijiye na…..woh Dadima bula rahi hain!!!"

"Aaj nahi Geet…", Maan's voice had a strange determination!!!

"Please ….Dadima upar aa jayengi….aur agar unhone hum eek saath dekh liya to bahut naaraz ho jayengi!!!"

Yes dear readers, in Indian culture, bride and groom are not allowed to meet alone before their marriage!!!

"Jaane dijiye na….",Maan was so close to her that she had to whisper! As soon as he moved a step back, she ran away……..again running down the stairs! Dadima was waiting for her downstairs!

"Geet….. aap itini subah subah Maan ke kamre ki oor kyun bhag ke gayi thi???", questioned dadi. It was then that geet realized that the servants must have told her!

"woh….mein…..Maan sir….. ", stammered geet, unable to find any excuses!

"Bataiye na Geet…..aisa kaun sa zaroori kaam aa gaya tha ke aap aise paagalon ki tarah Maan ke kamre ki oor bhaagi???"

"Woh Dadima mein……" before she could say anymore she was interrupted!!!

"Isse meine bulaya tha Dadima!" Maan said coming down the stairs, ready to leave for office!

"Aapne?" Dadima was surprised!

"Ji Dadima", Maan reached near them, " Mujhe kuch office ke files aur documents chahiye the to meine isse urgently yahan bula liya!" Maan stared at geet with a naughty look and said, " kyun hain na Geet?"

"b…..b…..woh…ji haan..dadima! Unhe kuch files chahiye the aur uske liye mujhe aise bulaya jaise agar mein na jaaoon toh unki company mein tala lag jayega………kyun hai na M-A-A-N S-I-R!" played Geet stressing on the word SIR!

Maan really got angry…how dare anyone play with him…….with Maan SINGH KHURANA!!!!

"Geet……" roared Maan.

Geet jumped in fright and hid behind Dadima. She slowly bent over Dadima's shoulder and Maan could clearly see her beautiful brown eyes!

Dadi smled!!! "Maan bte…Geet par gussa karne ki koi zaroorat nahi! Aapko office jane mein der ho rahi hogi na??"

Maan : oh…ji Dadima!

Dadi teased, " to jaiye na…..yahan khade khade kiska intezaar kar rahe hain??"

Maan : who Dadima…..Geet ko bhi…."

Dadi : Geet ko office se aapki shaadi tak chutti dijiye….aaj se Geet office nahi jayengi. Bahut taiyyariyan karni hain aur geet ka yahan rehna bahut zaroori hai!!!

Maan : par Dadima……

Dadi ( teasing) : par war kuch nahi Maan. Aapse jo kaha hai wahi kijiye! Aur waise bhi kitna kaam baaki pada hai….aur Maan Singh Khurana to apni hone wali dulhan ko shopping karane to leke jayenge nahi! Ab saara kaam to hume hi karna padega na!!!

Maan didn't like it!, " Dadima aisa nahi hai ke mujhe aapki koi fikar nahi hai……bas pichle jitne din mein office mein nahi tha utne din office ka kya haal hua hogabhagwaan jaane! Bas wahi kaam poora karke mein saara din aapke saath kaam mein haath bataoonga!! Promise!!!!"

Dadi : ab bas bas…..jaiye warna der ho jayegi!!!

"Haan haan jaiye…..wahan sasha ma'am apne MK ka intezaar kar rahi hongi……..aur saath saath meri burai bhi!" said geet coming out!

Maan could now notice the change in geet……….she was now playing with him a lot….no one dares play with MSK….nevertheless……..he must do something!!!! Kudi was getting courageous and bolder!!!!!😆




NXT : OMG.............MAANEET ENGAGED????😲😉

guys jst to remind u....drs sum prob in validating my acc. so am nt able to send buddy req....(really sry for dis😭😕)

so plz plz plz if u want my pms add me to ur list...i'll accept!!!

Edited by kawaii_geet - 15 years ago

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