MAANEET - GENTLE WHISPERS! THREAD 1 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
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GENTLE WHISPERS PART 8

"Theek hai…abhi toh mein jaa raha hoon…tummhe to baad mein dekh loonga!" Maan grinned as he left!!!


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It was the engagement day! Maan really did keep his promise…after all he is our very own MSK!


Media and press hovered the Khurana Mansion! Maan stood at the centre of the hall, all ready…looked even more handsome in a gold studded black sherwani waiting for his fianc! He was lost in her thoughts…..a sudden round of applause startled him! He looked towards the stairs….she walked down slowly, looking down….blushing……..surrounded by other girls!


Her gold studded red saree, heavy with all the gorgeous artwork done …looked even beautiful in the embrace of her smooth skin….her blouse was full-sleeved with beautiful golden zari-work while the back of her blouse was nothing but strings!


As she reached the ceremonial stage, Maan quickly got hold of her hands and kissed it gently. Geet blushed as everybody clapped! Soon the ring exchange ceremony was over! Geet and Maan were officially announced fianc! It was now the time for dance. Dadi announced the event and everybody crowded the dance floor!



Sasha was sobbing over her MK's engagement. As Maan and geet weren't dancing, she thought it to be a perfect chance to ask MK for a dance! She was sure he'd definitely never say no as he was very happy that day! And to her luck, it was a couple dance! But poor poor Sasha…….before she could ask MK for a dance, he held Geet's hands and led her to the dance floor! Poor girl did not get even noticed!!!



Maan held Geet's one hand whereas the other one held her waist! As Maan slid his hand down her back covered with nothing but strings, a chill ran down her spinal cord…..it tickled…..she couldn't stop smiling!!! As the song started, both gradually got lost in each other's eyes. Poor Sasha finally got Adi to dance with…..having his trademark laughter coming free!!!


Sajde mein yunhi jhukta hoon

Tumpe hi aake rukta hoon

Kya yeh sabko hota hai…………


Maan was gentler this time….not like the KURBAAN HUA dance….he was smooth with his every move…..soft and gentle!


Humko kya lena hai sabse

Tumse hi sab baatein abse….

Ban gaye ho tum mere khuda…..


Geet's eyes looked down…..as she felt his warm hands round her bare waist!!!!


Khuda jaane ke mein fida hoon…..

Khuda jaane mein mit gaya……

Khuda jaane yeh kyun hua hai……

Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda!!!!!!



As the song continued, their dance became more of a romance in the middle of the crowd. He turned her round and gently slid his fingers from her back to her waist…..sending chills down her spinal cord! She slid her hands down his chest and then his back feeling his curves even in the thick sherwani! Slowly she squeezed herself into his arms and he held her tightly round her waist!!


As the dance finished, they found everyone staring at them! They blushed and parted!


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Soon the party came to an end and everybody left!!! Dadima had announced their marriage within two days!!! Everyone was happy……..especially our MAANEET!!!


next : some revelations!!!!😉

Edited by kawaii_geet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
lovely update....can u make them abit long.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
relevations ;-)
Good news na? UPDATE
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
loved da update
but could u plzzz make it a little longer
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

loved da update

but could u plzzz make it a little longer


thnx for lyking it....but sry guys....for da short updates...........actually i hardly get n e tym for writing updates....so thts y it gets short..........n e ways i'll try to update a li'l longer!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
nice update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
thats tooooo coool. n romantic
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
wao!!so cute engangement n quick marriage unlike our maaneet in ghsp!!:(
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
nice update.. do continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice yaar plz add me to ur pm list...

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