New FF: New York times with Maan and Geet - Page 79

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heyyy..........

hey hassini i m waiting for the new part cant wait pls pls

Part 38: Poor Geet going through a roller coaster of feelings…I totally feel her though!!! And Maan total senses something is off…well of course he would….she doesn't even give him eye contact!!! Both are so tormented and in agony as of now!!

Poor Meera….Yash brought Pari…ab kya hoga!!! And top of that she's GF material…everything is so ulta putla!!! And now Yash is tormented Meer w/Pari…."line mein aana hi padega"…love this guy!!! Maan smiles at the reverse situation…so funny!!!

Meer's newspaper line gave me a good laugh!! Genius!!!

OH my…Geet a little jealous..Nice touch!!!...why did Pari have to be ALL over Maan?!...well it's good b/c at least Geet will react towards Maan in same way, right?!

The most symbolic moment: both of hands touching on the glass partition…they'll even be together despite even barriers…such poetic symbolic!!!

YAY!! Anger Maan approaches her…so damn HOT!!! Geet just needs to talk to him…she's obvious very jealous and confused…I wish she would go all out with her feelings…but she doesn't know his feelings, so why go through w/it face rejection! But she doesn't seem someone who would be afraid of rejection…but she's afraid to change the dynamic of their relationship b/c she doesn't want lose him forever!! I get her, but it's driving me crazy!!!

Maan calling her a child, and Geet in all jealousy thinking..hell no she ain't no child…she was all over you..that little tramp!!! Ok she hasn't as abusive about as I just describe…but I'm reading between the lines! LOL!!

I felt like Meer-Yash's confrontation is like the mirror to Maneet's future confrontation…am I wrong??!! I can't wait to read the rest!!! But I'm on a time schedule…stupid school ruins everything Maneet related!!!!!!!

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YASH LOVES MEER!!!!! I'm so happy for them!!!!! The highlight of the part…thank god!! Finally they confess…I've been waiting for like ever!!!

Another funny part: when Maan goes on his knees and geet freaks out, but then she sees him tieing his lace…so funny!! I can so imagine her shock and his playful smile!!!

The ending was so beautiful!! I had a tear fest!! And a little chuckle when she asks God…when will it be my turn to have my love one!!! My God…where do you come up with stuff like that!!! I'm telling you…you're a genius and if you were to publish this..you'll be a LEGEND!!!

Hey Hasini,
everyday morning i open the forum to read ur ff...when i get ur pm, i have a smile on ma face😊.. but today i didn't get one😔... so i was like hmmm 🤔what happen to her??😕 then i saw ur reply to someone saying that u r sick.... 😔

Hope u feel better... as much we all want to read ur ff's, as we want u to get better first...

Even though u told me that ur not psychology major... i still doubt that.. coz of ur ff!!! u always comes with some related to human psychology....

Again hope u feel better sooon... take rest... less ice cream.. (too much sugar)... more fluid...healthy foods...(sorry i m in medical field😉, always into nursing interventions 😆)

w/ lotsa luvs n 🤗s
smiliey

Hey people,
Thank you for all your PM's. My god...all of a sudden I have so many friends who worry about me. Guess its needed here in the US.

I'm doing well. Its just lack of sleep. I came from office at 8.00 PM and just slept the whole night. No office calls or IF.

Just so you guys know. I normally start writing only after office and work, so I start around 7.00 PM Pacific time. There is no way I can get to it before that.

So please please understand if I keep you guys waiting. I dont mean to 😭.
Yesterday was a break and today around 8.00 PM I will start writing again.

The post should be in by 12.00 AM at the most, coz today's post already is in draft.
Don't expect too much Maneet for some time.

Once again thanks so much for all your get well soon wishes. It felt great to have all of you care.

Part 39: I love how you made geet say that she's broken and trying to define herself!! She is broken and she needs to be mended and accept everything that is happening to her!

Her self-doubts are so real, but kind of irritating just b/c she doesn't know when she's be fully recovered….and I guess she thinks Maan might not wait that long!! I'm sure he would, but I guess she's right!!! She's lost so much already! I def don't want an incomplete Geet and don't want her to settle w/an incomplete self b/c it's not fair to her or Maan! She deserves perfection and a complete happy in every way!

Love Maan's determination to figure out what's wrong with her….he's so sweet!!! Awwww…he just wanted to look at her and be lost in her…kitna cute hai hamara mr. perfect!!!

I loved how you described the whole kiss on whole head..totally underplayed it by calling it a "slight brush", but their reactions afterwards…awkward and effing brilliant!!! She closes her eyes and he's shocked by her reaction!

Meer-Yash making out…Maan is as cool as a cucumber and Geet gets jittery….totally expected that!! LOL!! And Geet saying she isn't uncomfortable…even though everyone knows she is, especially with Maan being right by her side!!

YES!!! Maan is determined to figure out what her problem w/him is!! His monologue was perfection…he's in such agony and pain and torment…he needs her and can't stand her indifference!!

And then his anger vanishes when he sees her and he's so gone…completely fida over her and comparing her to the radiant sun!!! And love how he couldn't concentrate on the road!!!! If only I can find a guy like that!!

OMG! You built up so much tension when Geet vanished and Maan couldn't find her…thanks for the spoilers!!! Oh man, his reactions were dead on…you def have a way with words!! Kudos Babe!

When you wrote about the female in the alley who had physical injuries…my heart sunk…I'm praying here that Geet is ok!! Thank god there's a whole another part still left to read or I would have died!

OMGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!

I hope everything ends well…poor Maan! Please don't blame yourself!! So glad he's going with her in the ambulance!

The ending sentences are brilliant…he held her hand, he was never gonna let her out of his sight…never….never..never….wait for it …wait for it….NEVER AGAIN!!!! Such a beautiful way to end!!!

Part 40…I'm coming!!

BTW: Can I get some more spoilers for the future parts…I know it's totally unfair to ask but I really need to know b/c it's getting so effing interesting and exciting!! Hasini…you keep outdoing yourself…love all the drama!!! This is actually making my life more fun!!! Love ya!

I have been meaning to comment for so long but something or the other just keeps getting in the way...

take ur time,n dont stress urself too much dear...