New FF: New York times with Maan and Geet - Page 74

Originally posted by: pushpi

Haha yes I can tell how much you're into numbers right now.

Here what I have to say: don't spend too much time editing. The more the merrier ;-)

It's the writer's priviledge of course 😉

I just emailed you and our other special friend. Did you read it yet?

I hope work isn't too bad for you today.

BTW, if you want, I'll be happy to do editing for you anytime you need me to. It will be a priviledge and an honor 👍🏼

Pushpi

Ladies,

Part 35: First of all…you're gonna hate me b/c I read this part during human evolution!! We were watching a movie and it was making me sleepy so I printed this part out and read during the film!! Trust me this was so much better than homo floresiensis…a zillion times better!! LOL!!!

Ok so I love the National Geographic reference b/c I'm a huge fan!! The observation/inference part: SUPERB! And then Maan calls himself a tubelight…this one is gonna be a classic!

And she wears a suit b/c he couldn't stop staring at her the last time they went shopping…"main bahek rahi thi"…ayye hayye!!!! So cute!!! I love this monologues…the back and forth between maneet!! Nicely written!!

Ok..the chopstick scene was so original and beautiful…actually it was more on the sexy side!! Well it was for me…the whole I can't look at him..I can't look at her…the hand touching, him feeding her, and all the nervousness!!!

OMG!!! Thank god we found about his past…wow! Def wasn't expecting that, but I'm so content with it! I love their chemistry…even in writing! I love how he's so calm and she's so apologetic for bringing the whole thing up even though she really really really wants to know!!! Classic geet moment!!!

I loved this heart-to-heart both had..it was nice to see them share their pain, but it's like in a way they find closure and comfort in each other!! Both are each other's support system and it's nice to see that! There's so much maturity and understanding between the true…in this day of age all the TV shows show are this fake-ish romance w/no understanding…but here you show the characters more caring and understanding towards each other! Obviously, the romance will come later (right?!), but it's good to know that they have a strong foundation!!!!

Poor geet sobbing(nicely written, especially maan's observations)! And I love how he sat on the floor next to her…he's her healing process….awww…I need a tissue!!! And the best part is when he dried her tears…oh my effing god….i'm bawling here…forget the tissue..I need a box!!!

The morning after….lovely!! She sleeping on his shoulder and his urge to capture her on picture!!

WHAT?!! His dream….all this was going so well and then you make it a dream!! But still I loved it!! I'm just gonna pretend it was all real…ok I'm not b/c that's not part of the story…but I still loved it!! It was so deep..and just so perfect!

"it was only him that I wanted to observe and be a part of": By far my fav line in the whole part!! It sounds so Jane Austen-ish!!!

And the end…Maan's monologue on the L word…you made me so happy!!! And when he said: "True, she made change the only constant thing in my life" once again I felt I was reading something from Jane Austen…and I love Austen to death…so I'm on cloud nine!!!

Alleyway by the dock.

Hasini,

It was like spring in Meer's life - such a wonderful line'..and I can totally understand how Geet feels because of this'.her own life flashes in front of her eyes every day and reminds her what she is missing'.and that longing and yearning for that special someone in her life'.intensifies'..

Geet is in the midst of finding herself, her identify, her purpose, her strengths and weaknesses on her OWN, and BAAM'.here she is having profound feelings for Maan. What is a person suppose to do in this scenario? How can Geet be self-reliant and self-dependent when she has yet to find her place? And what is she suppose to do with her feelings for Maan and Maan himself in the meantime. How will the relationship work? If a person is dependent on themselves and then get into a relationship then they know where and how to contribute to the other person.

If a person is incomplete then how will the relationship proceed? Will you always look for the emptiness, the sense of incompleteness from the other person? Is the other person supposed to complete you? How do you know when you will be complete? Is it going to be months, years? Will the other person be around when you feel that you are complete and have found yourself?

Life' and the dilemmas it comes along with!!!. They say life happens when you busy making other plans. Hmmmmmmmmmm'even I personally do not have answer to the questions above. I wish I did.

In regards to Geet walking out'from that party

This was totally unpredictable and out of the blue. It was like Chand se gira aur kahjuri me aatka'lolz'.I was like''..Hailaaaaaaaaa..eh ki''.kudi nu ki hogaya si??😲😲😲

Why did she leave yaar'she already had an eerie feeling na'.and his heart told him it was a bad omen. '

And yaar'.those cops came real quick'.and organized a search party. Is that because he used his MK influence? Because otherwise'it is not usually 24 hours'.before they start to look for the missing person?...O...I just read the next line....it says...MK was nobody in front of the cops....

I was wrong. My intuition had failed me. Or was my intuition right about finding her but just not in the way I had hoped for? -- dis line was pretty sad'..

Also Maan is blaming himself''he is being very hard on himself'.

I loved the last line ' She was never going out of my sight again'Never again.

Love

Congratulations for hitting a century😊😊

hasini u r doing a great job
the last part was tooo good
i m waiting for the next part
now i m speechless i hope the next one leaves me breathless

luv
nisha

lovely updates hasini....loved dem soooo much...

congrats on 100 pages (:

Hey!!

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! part 39 was amazing dear...................where is geet???????????? geet bhi na always make maan to search for her😆..................... very interesting yaar............. update ASAP.......................

hi hansini