New FF: New York times with Maan and Geet

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aarthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1101

OMG am i dreaming girl what have u done... ur such a perfectionist in putting senti's thro' words which is the beautiful one.. i wanted to ask u whter u did Literature in English in cllge...

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shreya satish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1102

speechless..... Awesome.....No words to express.......

Continue dear.... u r an awesome writter...

Love u

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1103

Hey Hasini,

Another beautiful update...Their relationship is really complex....I had felt that she would cave under the separation-and finally accept that she doesn't want to live away from him....While she did miss him and yearn for him during Maan's self imposed exile- she did not accept his proposal! She loves him so desperately and yet another rejection...

I can understand Maan's PoV and can understand Geet's state of mind too...

I loved the last line- they both need rescuing!

Great job Hasini, Thanks for sharing this story with us!

EDIT:

I think they automatically close threads >150 days..best if you open a new thread now itself!

Edited by shradhav - 14 years ago

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maaneet_pisces

@maaneet_pisces

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1104

this part actually made me cry....

it was too emotional...dont even know what to write...it was breath takingly beautiful....do continue soon!!!

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Shamima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1105

This part was amazing how you potrayed both of their emotions an how hurt they were I just love how you can make it so real in sorry I can't write s long comment now as I woke up Noe and it's 2:10pm (England time) so in kinda in a dead mode anyways loved it and continue soon [:){

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bobbydoll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1106

wow yaar u made to cry with ur fiction

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maaneetfan123

@maaneetfan123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1107

Loved the update it was fantastic👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 I'm speechless you deserve a big hug 🤗

thanks 4 the long update continue soon😊

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1108

awesome update...!!!!!!!!!!!

i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... the way u write the monologues.. i love it!!

i really felt bad for Maan........ i think geet will come across her feelings for Maan very soon...............

pls update ASAP...

Edited by MaanEET_FAN - 14 years ago

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1109

There u go..again.. wonderful!!!!! You have shaped up Maan and Geet so wonderfully that I keep falling in love with these characters again and again. it was as if i am seeing the situation in front of me .. seemed so realistic.. you have written Geet's POV and Maan POV where they take their own stand for themselves .

Maan's character is an absolute marvel for me. His way of giving space , taking care, planning things for Geet and yet bringing out his point . this is what makes him special. Geet whereas trying to figure out herself, her abilities and what she is made of is also right on her part.

It is you who is molding these characters so i dont want to make any assumptions related to this story and you excel at it. Gal you are really gifted , you have written their emotions so amazingly that it brought tears to my eyes . This chapter choked me up and left me with tears brimming in my eyes !!!