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Maneetkraze thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
The most beautiful update. You described their feelings so accurately that I was nearly crying at the end when Maan asked Geet to marry him. I did not like the part where he just left randomly but I guess that is what keeps the story moving forward. Really want to read another update so please try to post it soon but not before you get some rest:) Thanks!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow amazing update
it was soo good.. but why is it taking geet so long to accept him?
he also needs to understand that she needs time!
con't soon and thakns soo much for giving such awesome long updates!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Maneetkraze

The most beautiful update. You described their feelings so accurately that I was nearly crying at the end when Maan asked Geet to marry him. I did not like the part where he just left randomly but I guess that is what keeps the story moving forward. Really want to read another update so please try to post it soon but not before you get some rest:) Thanks!!!!!!



Thanks for wrting and commenting. I dont think Maan left randomly. If you go through the long Maan's monologue in the start, he feels he has been very accommodating given his nature But afterall he is human too and wants to have her in his life. He feels that she is blaming him for the trouble, when he actually handled it in his style, no way to know if that was the right way to do so.
Also He gives up his ego and makes an attempt to meet her when she is goign through agony.Meera might not know what Geet meant but Maan exactly knew.
He visits her to see if she is ready to acknowledge and he sets aside the tiff and asks her hand in marriage, but she is still ready to accept and there is nothing he can do about it.
He is not the Maan in soap to make her pursue him. You do not have the power to make anyone realize anything or make them do anything and so he leaves.
But that is just the way I have built maan. The last sentence is the basis of his leaving. He has no control over her decisions.
Let me know if this makes sense. I will appreciate it you write back.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

wow amazing update

it was soo good.. but why is it taking geet so long to accept him?
he also needs to understand that she needs time!
con't soon and thakns soo much for giving such awesome long updates!


Thanks for your comments. I know you are a regular.
Yes Maan definitely needs to give her time. That will come up in the mono next, but he is human afterall and he accepts that in the mono in the begining. I guess that is already been written about.

Coming to Geet. I think it is very difficult to just fall for someone and get married immediately after the divorce, unless there are strong reasons.
It is a different story if they had gottten the divorce because of another affair, but here she truly wanted to make the marriage work. It does take time to settle, which I believe you have covered when you said Maan needs to give her time. So I actually dont get when you question back why Geet is not accepting.

Let me know if this helps.
Hasini
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazuing,,,,i cudnt wait ma work to be over n come home to read ur update.....n its worth all the waiting....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Hasini67



Thanks for wrting and commenting. I dont think Maan left randomly. If you go through the long Maan's monologue in the start, he feels he has been very accommodating given his nature But afterall he is human too and wants to have her in his life. He feels that she is blaming him for the trouble, when he actually handled it in his style, no way to know if that was the right way to do so.
Also He gives up his ego and makes an attempt to meet her when she is goign through agony.Meera might not know what Geet meant but Maan exactly knew.
He visits her to see if she is ready to acknowledge and he sets aside the tiff and asks her hand in marriage, but she is still ready to accept and there is nothing he can do about it.
He is not the Maan in soap to make her pursue him. You do not have the power to make anyone realize anything or make them do anything and so he leaves.
But that is just the way I have built maan. The last sentence is the basis of his leaving. He has no control over her decisions.
Let me know if this makes sense. I will appreciate it you write back.



Yes it does actually makes sense in Maan's part. I have a question however, what kind of character is Geet in this story? It seems like she's always indecisive every time she falls prey to a situation. But other times she knows exactly what she needs to do. Every time a problem occurs, she always tries to run away from it and never make her decision until later when many lives have been hurt.
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Posted: 14 years ago


Yes it does actually makes sense in Maan's part. I have a question however, what kind of character is Geet in this story? It seems like she's always indecisive every time she falls prey to a situation. But other times she knows exactly what she needs to do. Every time a problem occurs, she always tries to run away from it and never make her decision until later when many lives have been hurt.

Geet is only sure about one thing that she doesn't know what she is made of. She wants to find out the same. For now she feels she is always dependent on people and has the block that she can truly find the answer only if she moves away from everyone.
Lets see what she realizes later. Hope this helps.

Hasini

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Posted: 14 years ago
I have liked how langurously your characters evaluate their complex feeling... but Geet, she's being too stubborn and mostly, shes being foolish.... what does she mean by dependency? It is completely impossible to be entirely independent, in the sense that, she seems to be craving isolation.

When you have friends even acquaintances, they usually respond to your distress calls. She would have too , had Meera or Yash or Pari had needed help. that does not make them dependent on her in any way. or make them a liability!
Moreover, everyone has troubles in their life, everyone. To just concentrate on your own, to strive to discover yourself in isolation and expect to wait from moving ahead until you get ALL the answers, well thats just selfish , even foolish and self-indulgent.

I might be coming a bit hard on Geet, and I am definitely not criticizing you choice of her characterization, but am merely pointing out to what I feel are the deficiencies in her , her weaknesses.

Maybe for once she actually does want/deserve to be selfish, but it isn't just about her now. The weighing of her situation is now in conjunction with Maan and his situation, his emotions. Whether she deserves it or not is not an elemental decision. She should have distanced herself long before and determinedly, but at this juncture, its almost callous and annoyingly obstinate for her to expect him to control himself and their relationship and accidental situations too , while that control is still ultimately with her.

I hope I haven't offended you, but wanted to explain what I could decipher about her. I might actually elaborate a little more later, for now I may not have been completely lucid or made enough sense.😃


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ninand

I have liked how langurously your characters evaluate their complex feeling... but Geet, she's being too stubborn and mostly, shes being foolish.... what does she mean by dependency? It is completely impossible to be entirely independent, in the sense that, she seems to be craving isolation.


When you have friends even acquaintances, they usually respond to your distress calls. She would have too , had Meera or Yash or Pari had needed help. that does not make them dependent on her in any way. or make them a liability!
Moreover, everyone has troubles in their life, everyone. To just concentrate on your own, to strive to discover yourself in isolation and expect to wait from moving ahead until you get ALL the answers, well thats just selfish , even foolish and self-indulgent.

I might be coming a bit hard on Geet, and I am definitely not criticizing you choice of her characterization, but am merely pointing out to what I feel are the deficiencies in her , her weaknesses.

Maybe for once she actually does want/deserve to be selfish, but it isn't just about her now. The weighing of her situation is now in conjunction with Maan and his situation, his emotions. Whether she deserves it or not is not an elemental decision. She should have distanced herself long before and determinedly, but at this juncture, its almost callous and annoyingly obstinate for her to expect him to control himself and their relationship and accidental situations too , while that control is still ultimately with her.

I hope I haven't offended you, but wanted to explain what I could decipher about her. I might actually elaborate a little more later, for now I may not have been completely lucid or made enough sense.😃


Sure If you see my previous post, I have mentioned that she has this "Block" that she needs to get away and that we will find out what she realizes later. I have not portrayed Geet here as the strongest as I have mentioned already. She is yet to find out. She is still, what should I say? ... hazy about what she is and what she wants.
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Posted: 14 years ago

I'm Speechless!! the emotions were beautifully potrayed! Kudos to ur dedication for this FF- it always shows, and each chapter never dissapoints.

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