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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1031

pls do something poor Maan i cant see them split kike this let them get married now great update pls cont soonnnnnnn thanks pm

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1032

wow sooo much confusion in MG s life.....
this much twist in one shot....

then... when will they be back normal?????

over all its a real tensed one

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#1033

❤️Hasini, ❤️

I loved Leaf in the Wind!!!!!

I will comment more on it later but in the meantime.....just wanted to say that......it was a really really really long update...so thanks so much and I wanted to .....

Bow to you!

Bow to you! (OK, NOW I THINK MY BACK IS HURTING FROM BOWING ....SO I AM GOING TO DANCE A BIT...IN HAPPINESS...)

HEHEHE....HAHHA......SILLY ME 🤪🤪🤪

I THINK NOW IS THE TIME FOR A NEW THREAD....CUS YOU HAVE ALREADY REACHED 143 PAGES.....WHAT DO YOU SAY???

PEOPLE ARE YOU GOING TO HELP HER FINISH 150 PAGES....SO SHE CAN DO THE NEXT UPDATE ON HER NEW THREAD......

LOVE

RACHANA

Edited by aarmanshilpa - 14 years ago

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#1034

Hey,

I took a small break....thought would write up some more still stuff...until you reached page 150.....lets c.....

I can clap!!!

👏

👏 (OK, NOW MY HANDS R TIRED OF CLAPPNG....HEHE........)

I THINK I WILL JUST DAY DREAM....

😍

😍.........HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

LOVE

RACHANA

Edited by aarmanshilpa - 14 years ago

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1035

Two updates to read!

Yay!😊

Off to read part 46.

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Hello, I am back again. Part 46-Awesome!!!

Pandora-The title of this part made me really curious.

Before I begin, a big Thank you for posting this special birthday part!🤗

You hadn't planned writing this but still you wrote it😊

Maan was adamant for not letting Geet go back to Hoshiarpur. Well, Geet's apprehensions are justified in one way and so are Maan's reasons!

Geet's consultante appointment wasn't successful. Seems like this is gonna play a vital role in the story ahead.

The way she came all the way back to Delhi after having covered 3/4th of the journey to Hoshiarpur, travelling constantly for almost 10 hours shows her love and concern for Maan.

BTW what was he doing in the pool when he wasn't well? Was he taking out the frustation, the anger by swimming like the Maan in the show does by practicing Martial arts?

The tea-making session was sweet and funny at the same time, specially the ginger part.

And the best part was the Gift-Pandora Bracelet!

Read it twice.

The way he explained each charm, symbolizing her significance, her importance in his life! I absolutely loved this part. Could feel the emotions! Such a symbolic gift!!!

I wonder how many people in real world actually gift such thoughtful gifts!

Thank you for enlightening me about the different charms😊

And Thank you, once again, for writing this special post on birthday🤗

BTW I am really liking Daadi for her detective spree. She's pretty cool! And Maan also has an idea about what her sweet Daadi is upto😆

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1036

great update

OMG why oh why is this happening?

i really hope they just stop and understand each other

con't soon!

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Antares

@Antares

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#1037

Great update! Thrilling! Lolz at the way the press was reporting.....kinda true.....they always make me laugh with their words and the tone they use and all.....lolz. Sounds weird, I know. Hehe. Oherwise, it was intense...everything happened in a jiffy....the press gathered there and Geet was mad at Maan for getting so angry. According to me, none of them is to be blamed.....Maan just wanted to protect her and a hot-headed person like him cannot be expected to act rationally in such a situation. Geet, on the other hand, was angry cause of Maan's anger......they are both right in their own place.....well....that's what I think. Alas, it led to their separation.....let's see how the track proceeds from here.....me is very excited! Ah, Dadi is really good.....I like her! The first bit, it was awesome.....loved their moments and their convo with Yash and Meera! It was a damn interesting update! Do continue soon.

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Doracake

@Doracake

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1038

HASINI I READ THE LAST FEW PARTS ...... BUT COULD NOT REPLY........ALL OF THEM R SUBERB.......MIND BLOWING LOVED IT..... AND SERIOUSLY U SHOULD WRITE SERIOUSLY I MEAN AS A PROFESSION......

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1039

Finished reading Part 47😊

If this was the original track you had planned, I am glad that you gave the birthday update before turning the story in this direction. The last two updates had a lot of Maaneet moments for me to sustain the upcoming updates😳

I am madly in love with the song-Mar Jaawan. Its been my ring tone since March 2009. My friends tease me a lot since I haven't changed it till now😛

The beginning of this update from Geet's monologue to her wearing his kurta, Maan sneaking into the room leading to the song and finally the phonecall was really well-wriiten. Loved reading it.

This was really romantic! And the lyrics were like adding fuel to their already burning hearts, burning in passion!!!

I did play the song while reading this part😳

The phone conversation was pretty good. Meera never leaves an opportunity to tease Geet😛

I really loved these lines:

Knowingly or unknowingly I had walked too far way with him, perhaps even beyond the point of return.

Did I regret giving away all that I felt for him? But he seemed happy; he no longer closed down on me.

His blind turst in me moved me. He was walking wherever I led him.

And then the mall visit which paved the way for the upheaval in their lives-turning everything upside down!

This was all of a sudden, but then life is unpredictable. Their reactions, Daadi's reactions are quite justified. Both Maan and Geet have different perspectives on this issue. None is to be blamed because both are right in their own way, Maan has handled these things in the past, he knows how to shut their mouths while Geet on the other hand, oblivious of these situations thinks that it would have been better if they had confronted the media there and then.

Its rightly said one shouldn't take decisions in anger, since one's thought-process is blinded by anger and this is what happened here.

Geet's monologues were really powerful here! Her fear, her reluctance, her apprehensions for not accepting her feelings now seem fully justified! She's never had secured relations in her life and now this one too has taken a turn!!!

This turn in the story has made this story really interesting 😊

BTW I'd like to Thank you for the brilliant posts you write. I have never been into serious reading and analzying, but this story of yours has made my cells active to actively read and analzye. I have started analzying things with different perspectives before jumping off to conclusions in my daily life too, which I didn't used to do too often.

Also, its helping me in improving my vocabulary and written english.

Today's 19th November(its almost 1.30 am IST, so 19th) , and tomorrow-20th November- that is completion of a month for this amazing story of yours😊 Congratulations😊

I am not sure if I'd be coming online soon, I guess will be coming on Saturday afternoon now, so wishing you in advance😛

Off to sleep now😊

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568124

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#1040

Thank you people. Until Shivangi mentioned I had not noticed that it was going to be a month since the first post.
Interesting because I knew since Oct 19 my spare time has been this FF and I coudn't even notice that I nearing a month.
Actually that is not true, today I was driving and my mind was rehearsing the key dialogue between Maan and Geet.😊
No I wasn't careless when the accident happened. I wasn't thinking about the dialogues, just so you know it was not my fault at all and the other party is fully responsible. 😊
Maan and Geet are part of my life too. There hasnt been a day that I have not written anything for this FF. If not a update atleast one scene or some dialogue back and forth.

What can I say about your comments? They are my energy shots. So I do have the slump once the number of comments go down.
The song dedication and the masti people have on the thread is great and makes me feel happy that I can entertain so many people.
I track individual click from post to post. Sorry I work with analytics. I guess I cant help it.
I started with average 200 clicks per post and all of a sudden there was a spike starting post 10. Some of the spikes after that have even gone up to 3000 clicks per post. Ofcourse this is not Google web analytics, and it is very flawed because it doesn't dedup the clicks from same IP over a session. Sorry technical.
But overall I'm very happy when I see the spikes which are very good.

I actually get sad when I'm coming to end of a long comment. When I write and it entertains you, but your comments and analysis is what keeps me entertained.
The viewpoints are great, but for some reason, I have not been able to change some of the characteristics of the leads even when I felt you guys had a point, because I just wanted to write what I have visualized. So no offense.

As I already said I give preference to actually writing and completing a post for you people so sorry if I have not clicked LIKE or commented or PM back. Usually my posts are longer and adhoc ones like this are also long but not my comments. So please that's once again because I'm juggling time.
Please keep reading. We will definitely go through Maan and Geet's journey with fun, friendship and above all good bonding.
Thanks again for all your patience and comments.

Edited by Hasini67 - 14 years ago

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