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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part..don't stop FF..I really enjoy reading your FF..its feel new eShasaas.. I really Pandora bracelet..the way Maan explain her what she meant to for him..
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

are we getting another update today/ tonight?

you've got lots of comments, which proves how good this FF and how good of a writer you are!
waiting for the next part!!



People I didn't mean to stop or threaten you guys. How do I put this? Its actually embarrassing that I'm writing and I'm unable to get the point across.

I meant I was to suspend for a while until i get the comments, not stop completely. So many PM's that I'm overwhelmed.

Thanks.
I didn't know was being received well. because I still don't understand what has been happening since Oct 19th. That day has truly changed my life forever.

Anyways I haven't even starting writing today's part. I gave in for Geet's birthday yesterday and ended up writing that part from scratch. So was totally lost and got carried away, which you obviously have seen and read it.
I just started the update. Hopefully will finish before 3.00 AM. Not sure.
I have not written any of the parts starting today's till 49. But eveyrthing from 50 is ready...weird me.😭. These are so crucial I didn't want to write until having them published, else I will be obsessed with doing edits. So bear with me for the next three parts.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Omd this was just my fav chapter and yes me my friends have the pandora bracelet on our Xmas wishlist and even I take the importance of a charm bracelet (not the pandora one the olden clip on ones lool but soon will get the pandora version 😊) and buy charms which relate to me an I try make people get me charms for my birthday lool anyways the certain charms that he picked out was just amaizng it was so thoughtful and if someone gave me that for my birthday would know that they truely love me and here our geet is a lucky one I do wonder if you have expirenxed similar events and feelings that you potray on your ff or you analyse things deeply and their hidden meanings when you see it veins potrayed or you just close your eyes and let your heart take over anyways loved this chapter and can't wait for you next update 😃



Thank you for that lovely comment. Yes go for it. They are just a little expensive over $600 just to get the basic charms.
I know its always great to get such thoughtful gifts, but unfortunately guys in reality don't think much.
Apparently my friend bought his wife a TV for her birthday and the next year a Desktop. I never understood that.
No...Geet's birthday was on demand. I wrote it just yesterday and that's why its so long, cause just 3 edits.
I usually have songs playing in the background which is close to the mood of the part I'm writing. They transport me to a different place and time. That is what you get when I'm writing. So pray I'm not listening to Tujhe bula diya today.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Hasini67



Thank you for that lovely comment. Yes go for it. They are just a little expensive over $600 just to get the basic charms.
I know its always great to get such thoughtful gifts, but unfortunately guys in reality don't think much.
Apparently my friend bought his wife a TV for her birthday and the next year a Desktop. I never understood that.
No...Geet's birthday was on demand. I wrote it just yesterday and that's why its so long, cause just 3 edits.
I usually have songs playing in the background which is close to the mood of the part I'm writing. They transport me to a different place and time. That is what you get when I'm writing. So pray I'm not listening to Tujhe bula diya today.😉

Hasini,
How about you listen to ....
Tu Hi To Jannat Meri, Tu Hi Mera Junnon
Tu Hi To Mannat Meri, Tu Hi Rooh Ka Sukun
Tu Hi Ankhiyon Ki Thandak, Tu Hi Dil Ki Hai Dastak
Aur Kuch Na Janu Mein, Bas Itna Hi Jaanu..
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu...
Sajde Sae Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu......
Love
Rachana

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Posted: 14 years ago
Your FF is the one that I wait for everyday and night, like I wait for the episodes of Geet. I can't believe that this is Part 46, it feels like I just recently started reading it, actually living it. This FF is just so realistic and the way you write is something to be praised for. The creativity, diction, locations, and gifts are just so awesome and they fit in perfectly with the story line. Please do not feel down if some people do not write comments. Its probably just that they are silent readers and are not ready to get out of their shell like I was. You know before, I hardly use to comment on any topic I read but since I started reading your FF, I have to comment on every single topic I open. You are an inspiration and truly a gifted writer. Please keep writing. Now coming to this update, it is just beyond my expectations. All of it was about Maaneet and no other person, which I totally loved!!! Seriously, I can't believe that they were actually sitting like that near the window. It was just great to witness some romance with them also the comfort level they now share with each other. Geet is also starting to realize her feeling for Maan now. Hopefully, she'll start to accept her love for Maan completely before she leaves for Hoshiarpur. I can't believe Maan was actually going to call someone to get Brij some punishment in the last update. I wished that I had someone like Maan in my life. Of course there's no one like him but I can still imagine right? haha! Every time I read your FF, I fall in love with Maaneet all over again and that's why I want you to still continue writing and never stop!!! haha!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Hasini67



People I didn't mean to stop or threaten you guys. How do I put this? Its actually embarrassing that I'm writing and I'm unable to get the point across.

I meant I was to suspend for a while until i get the comments, not stop completely. So many PM's that I'm overwhelmed.

Thanks.
I didn't know was being received well. because I still don't understand what has been happening since Oct 19th. That day has truly changed my life forever.

Anyways I haven't even starting writing today's part. I gave in for Geet's birthday yesterday and ended up writing that part from scratch. So was totally lost and got carried away, which you obviously have seen and read it.
I just started the update. Hopefully will finish before 3.00 AM. Not sure.
I have not written any of the parts starting today's till 49. But eveyrthing from 50 is ready...weird me.😭. These are so crucial I didn't want to write until having them published, else I will be obsessed with doing edits. So bear with me for the next three parts.

Hasini,
Just to be clear here....Oct 19th...you started this FF....so is that the reason your life has truly changed forever?
OR
Something happened on Oct 19th which made you write this FF and that something (incident) changed your life forever?
Rachana
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hasini,
Just to be clear here....Oct 19th...you started this FF....so is that the reason your life has truly changed forever?
OR
Something happened on Oct 19th which made you write this FF and that something (incident) changed your life forever?
Rachana


Cant believe it that you people, actually you read so much inbetween the lines. No it was the day I started writing this FF...and all because it was a rainy weekend and had stayed indoors occupyign myself with Maneet videos.

I had just started watching Geet for like 3 weeks so I was catching up with the previous episodes and totally fell in love with the chemistry.

That's it.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 43 ' A Game of Roulette.

I love how Geet is able to read Maan, his behavior, etc. I guess she was expecting a different response from him besides being calm and collected. She was questioning herself by questioning him ' was he confident that I was never going to get out of here?

Geet's Mono '

He was going away from her, he would not be there when she moved from NY, he had asked her to take care of herself and 'Keep in touch'. The elevator doors were closing'and his face was disappearing behind those doors. This is how life was going to be now. She was going to be away from him. She will not be able see him every day. It was too painful, it was hurting, she did not know if she had made a right decision or a wrong one. But the decision was made and she will be going to SF.

I can just imagine Maan's pain'he left NY and flew miles and miles away just because he could not see her leave and go away from him'..he did know how to handle his pain..all he could do was leave from there because that was the easiest thing to do physically'.but mentally..she was with him all the time.

I liked it when Maan said ' I could sense clearly that she as missing me, but how was I to make her accept the same. I knew it was not my job to do. (So true ' the realization needs to come from Geet and Geet only)😳

I loved how Maan jumped in and got her tickets n stuff and Geet accepted.

'kab uteraga yeh SF ka bhoot😛😛😛

Geet ' lekin nothing can stop me'main SF kaa kar rahoungi'.( could sense an inner child here'adamant, stubborn, who just wanted to prove a point ' not thinking of consequences)

Geet getting mad at Maan after she landed from her flight'.it was unexpected and maybe a bit unnecessary on her part. (I cannot believe, I am being so critical of Geet here)😭

Geet ' why does he care for me so much? I guess it pours when it rains. (Human behavior is so unpredictable'when we do not have something we yearn and long for it, when we get something we question too much)😕

R.
Edited by aarmanshilpa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hasini,
Just to be clear here....Oct 19th...you started this FF....so is that the reason your life has truly changed forever?
OR
Something happened on Oct 19th which made you write this FF and that something (incident) changed your life forever?
Rachana


Cant believe it that you people, actually you read so much inbetween the lines. No it was the day I started writing this FF...and all because it was a rainy weekend and had stayed indoors occupyign myself with Maneet videos.

I had just started watching Geet for like 3 weeks so I was catching up with the previous episodes and totally fell in love with the chemistry.

That's it.
You r so right. I think my life only consists of doing analysis..of people, places, things...FF's, songs...lolz...and what not..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey hansini,

thanks for the pm n ya awosome update
he plz continue dear don't stop in between...
plzzzzzz and loved todays part very much....the Purity of Maaneet love was full in line...
i just loved it u r ff plsssssssssssssssssssssssss
dont do this
update yaar
plsssssssssssssss
love u😳😳😳😳😳

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