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Posted: 14 years ago
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The Final Cruise, Part 1

Karan and Shilpa had boarded the ship an hour ago, and opened their bottle of complimentary champagne as they cruised under the Golden Gate Bridge. Pedestrians leaned over the bridge to wave them off, the ship sounded its horn, and Shilpa let out a sigh of relief just as Karan noticed a group of dolphins alongside. Karan felt as if the dolphins were Shilpa's and his own personal escorts into the open seas, and unknowingly smiled at the thought of spending the next 7 days with Shilpa.

His thoughts are disturbed by the vibration of his phone, he looks at the blinking screen and says to himself in a low whisper, "Is ko bhi abi hi aana tha," he reads the message...

...and nods agreeingly to himself. His thoughts once again escort him away into "the world of love" as he thinks of it, and he gets lost once again in the thoughts of the upcoming journey he wants to take with Shilpa, the most romantic journey of their lives...

But will Shilpa join him in this journey?...
Is Karan's 'journey' the same as what Shilpa expects?...

Find out in the next update of "The Final Cruise"
Edited by DMGlover91 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Ah this looks amazing. Can't wait to read the first part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
nice...........

and better you update the next part soon...😊

luv ya..
keep writing........😛🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Amna, the first part...I think you read it already, it was the one I posted in Heaven, its on page 3 if you want to read it.

@Srishti, Thank you, next part will come sometime tomorrow...love you too.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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When will you update again? I can't wait to read it...I'm curious as to what Karan's 'journey' is now? Is Karan supposed to be in love with Shilpa or is he just there?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
heyy dear
nice concept
n 1st part
cont soon
n plzz pm me if possible
thx
dhruvika
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sana, did you really take that pic from your phone or is it edited? for the message.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Anita, I will update again either tonight or tomorrow, and you'll have to wait and find out what Karan's journey is, also yes the picture I used is from my own phone. =]

@Dhruvika, glad you like it, I'll add you to the list. =]
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ohh shytt...interestingg conceptt ! andd oo i cantt wait till the nextt partt =D can you pleasee PM me when you update? andd updatee soon =]
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyyy dear,
nice part
do write longer part
continue soon



love
Riddss

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