The Final Cruise-A KaSh FF

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aisha_ranbir8

@aisha_ranbir8

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#31

hey......... ur concept iz really good .............. n wid my favorite couple its all the more interesting ......so pls continue soon looking forward to da story .......... n pls add me to ur pm list ......... anywaz take care............ love aish

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#32

i just came across your fan fic! i love the concept you have going!

but the first part is wayy to short :(

i hope to get a better feel of your fan fic soon with longer parts heheh :)

could you pm me when you continue again? thanks (:

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fidmfshnbeauty

@fidmfshnbeauty

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

@angullgrl91, Glad you like the concept...part 1 was short in my opinion as well but thats because I'm still trying to get the concept fully going in my head. The next part should be slightly longer, will definitely pm it to you.

@ aisha_ranbir8, glad you like the concept, have added you to the list. 😊

Edited by DMGlover91 - 14 years ago

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

hiiiii

awesome first part

cant wait 4 the cruise

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Kasufan4eva

@Kasufan4eva

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

wowww great add me to ur pm list pleash

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naureen

@Norz

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

nice concpe
small but nice part
do pm me

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fidmfshnbeauty

@fidmfshnbeauty

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

The Final Cruise, Part 2 (To be Continued...)

It's going to be the cruise to end all cruises, thought Karan as he slightly skimmed through his checklist, this was the only time he had to do a run-through again before Shilpa got out of the shower and he wanted to make sure everything was perfect, not perfect but in fact beyond perfect. Just as he began to check it for the last time, ~flowers-check, dinner and wine-check, dancing in the ballroom-check~ Shilpa walked out of the bathroom in a silky red satin robe leaving Karan completely mesmerized. His gaze slowly followed every step she took, the way the robe lingered against her skin, the way she held herself and walked in such poise, as if she were an angel gliding through the clouds.

He felt as if he had lost control over himself, every nerve in his body twitched just at the sight of her, she was beautiful...he slowly walked towards the deck-where Shilpa now stood looking out at the cerulean blue ocean, they had one of the best views on the ship from their stateroom suite on Deck 9, but at this time even the view couldn't distract Karan from the trance he had gone into, he edged towards her until he was at a foot's distance, he was close enough to feel the light breeze blow strands of her hair in his direction, he closed his eyes as the wet strands swept the side of his face, he could feel his heartbeat racing, his pulse rising, and the shivers going down his spine when he thought, Shilpa is most definitely the girl I want to spend the rest of my life with. As he left his thoughts and turned to reality, he was still standing closely behind Shilpa and she was not at all aware of it. He watched a small drop of water trickle down from her hair down the nape of her neck...he couldn't take it anymore, he could no longer hide his true feelings for Shilpa...

What true feelings is Karan hiding?...
Will Shilpa get scared and tell Karan to move away or will she let him express his love?...

To Be Continued in next post...