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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shining_moon

gr888888888 update

so geet do have some nice memories of her mother but wat was all that..........her father forced rano into the marriage n then she cheating on him?? don't worry, I will touch back on this later on in the story.... hopefully by then you all can solve the mystery because i will be leaving a lot of hints in the future parts.... but the whole purpose for Part 13 was to display Geet's happy memories....
so much mystery still left More will be added....😆
loved the way maan tried to ease her fear but she just became too dependent for his protective touch that she instantly got into the defense mechanism..........gosh.......that is so wierd n scary but it's very real.... people do use such a defense mechanism... it's called "Fantasy"
keep writing

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nihatri

how u rite so amazingly



Thank You, ☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna1

that is an awesome fic
i just read it and loved it completely
plz pm me too whenever u update and continue soon



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Wow that was so beautifully written and the love geet had in an early age for her mother was jus extaordinary and she has so mug potential and talent which got wasted in that trapped cage but geet is free now as she's got a caring and loving husband and family and ooh so geets mum got forced but geets dad to get married hmm and Manu her older brother is a nice guy but he behaves in two characters because of his other two brothers snd his father and I liked how you've given as an insight on abused victims and how they use survival technique and awe so that's why geet liked it when maan caressed her hand as her mum used to do it anyways loving the update and it's taking and interesting route which I want to read more 😊



yup, Geet's mother was forced to marry.... Manu was only a child then didn't really understand the right and wrong, same goes to Brij and Gurvinder but Manu was the only one who at times showed his kindness towards his sister.....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: divareena

love the way maan is holding on to geet's hand and trying to calm her down👏. Maan is too caring towards his wife, let's hope he stays that way....😕

loool NT teasing maan is so sweet. It is so upsetting on how geet is trying so hard to win her mum's love and approval. No wonder she is feeling so scared with everyone being so nice to her. She has never experienced that love. Exactly! thank you for understanding Geet's character...
I hope maan makes her feel more confident.👏

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

hey hey..awesome update..!!i love how she refers to him as pati..

so geet is a genius eh..nicee..im sure under khurana's she'll be able to develop her skills
love ur work..plz update soon



Yup, her new family will guide her in the right direction...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maan-ki-sanjana

Love your story...very deep.



Thank You, 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: puth

hey just caught up with this FF....i loved your writing skills👏👏👏............i always had a smile when ever you referred maan as "pati" and nayanthara as "nice woman"😆😆😆 from geet's pov....omg geet is so innocent...she is so much struck up the talks her brothers put up in her mind abt pati and his family...............lovely ff dear



thank you, I am glad to know that you are enjoying reading my ff.... I hope you will continue to read and comment on the future parts... there will be more of Geet's Pati and Nice woman... lolz 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Amiiish

Nice update dear, could you plz add me to the pm list




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Hi Angel🤗 awww.... huggy from me too 🤗


This update made my eyes moist. Geet has suffered a lot in her past, right from her birth! She craved for her father's and brother's affection and love. She tried winning their heart by her selfless acts of service which they hardly noticed. There was only one person who noticed and appreciated her efforts and that was her mother-a ray of hope in her dark life. Her brother, Manu, though loved her but didn't had enough courage to admit it in front of his father! Her father is so disgusting! He forced himself on Rano, he made his sons like himself and he hates his own daughter-Geet. Rano's life turned into hell because of this man😡 yup, the man not only ruined his wife's life but his children too.... making his sons like him
Geet has silently suffered all this while only in the hope that someday her father would accept her. She craved for acceptance and love... but only received hatred....
This part was really heart-wrenching😭
These lines were so deep and thought provoking!

"A world of broken dreams and shattered souls"

"A world of dreams and hopes"-Rano

"A world of tears and misery"

"A world of hate and animosity" -Geet

They perfectly portray the feelings of Rano and Geet. Rano's dreams were broken by Geet's father when he forced her into marriage with him. But still she has some hopes that her dreams might be fulfilled one day! I am glad you were able to get the depth of this little poetry....

And Geet-a little six year old girl has only seen hatred towards her from her brothers and father. She has seen her mothers in tears. So much has been inflicted on the young child's mind that she is scared to hell. All she wanted was acceptance and love which she never got! 🤗 for going so deep into my writing and understanding what I didn't exactly wrote in words....

And she had been so bright for a six year old. But her talent has gone into the waste-thanks to her father and brothers. let's hope her new family will recognize her brilliance and bring forth her talents....

No one can truly understand the pain she's been through every minute of her life! True....

Maan and his family will really have to work hard to help her gain her confidence, to trust people, to love herself and others. They need to understand her a lot. The process has started with Geet feeling safe with her husband's hold on her hands. Hope Maan understands her nature soon.

Thanks for giving an insight in her past. It helped to understand her psyche a little better. There is more to come, Part 13 was Geet's happy moment.... Part 15 will display the traumatic event of her life...

Also you enlightened me about the defence mechanism of switching one off from the present to some beautiful memory of the past.

Rano had been in love with someone else. Is Arjun the one out of this union? And where is Manu? What happened to Rano post delivery? How did it effect Geet? Hope the coming updates gives us more insight into Geet's past.

Shivangi

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