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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi80

oh i can imagine what she went through poor Geet & her mother so helpless even she can tell her daughter that she loves her & the father pure evil treat his own daughter like jack ass sis ur really excellent how ur explaining what happen to Geet mindblowing pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn




there is a lot more to come.... Part 15 will display the abuse Geet went through.... 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kellz

is it too much to ask for a maha update

u have me hanging on a cliff
loved ur style of writing



lolz.... hanging on a cliff? I wonder what you will be hanging on after reading part 14.....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk_1

loved it yaar...awsome one ... but there s more of geets past i think... she says she is bad....do update soon yaar..



yes, there is a lot more of Geet's past.... Part 13 was one of the pleasant moments of Geet's life....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nice update

Love how Maan was over portective towards Geet
NT loves teasing him😉
Maans trted to understand Geet's eyes language very well
He shuldnt hav lef her hand though yaar
Flasback was sweet
Toh Rano was forced to Marry n she betrayed him
Thats why they hate Geet more i thk
Geet was really shweet
Jus loved her care n love for her



If Maan hadn't let go of his hold on Geet's hand then I wouldn't have been able to present the flashback....😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sakadafi

Great update! Good to see how Maan's touch really helps her to clam her down and douse her fears.


A nice peak into her past. Really feel for Rano being so helpless. Being the quick child Geet is, I'm excited to see that once her fears start to recede, how she changes and comes up to her potential. Long way though I guess....after all, rite now we are just at the day after marriage.

Eagerly waiting for the next update 😊



It will be a slow progress but Geet will come out of her shell and will bloom under the love and care of her new family.....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: creddy

wonderful update....loved how maan was trying to comfort her....will rano be punished for her betrayal...please post the next part soon....so geet has 3 brothers?



yes, Rano will be punished for her betrayal in a very cruel and violent way.... I recently wrote down that particular scene but it won't be posted for a long time...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gangesegb

really very nice part.....loved it.....update soon nd add me too da list



Added 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bluedreamz953

I think he died! he was never there to begin with, Arjun was a typo 😳

Hey Sarah!
This was really sweet...loved her flashback and also the present where Maan was there with her,assuring her not to be scared and all! I really like that!
I enjoyed the update a lot...okay I know what I'm saying is in pathetic language but I'm in abit of a rush right now!
Thanks a lot for the update
Love you!🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: johnangad

Wat kind of evil was geet's father- my god, he even forced his wife to marry him and treated botyh like hell! poor poor geet! great writing. just wonder how maan will deal with all this



believe it or not but people like Geet's father do exist....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bono_jostna

wow!!!! she was such a brilliant child!!!! really curious about rano.......whom she was in love with?? i wish geet's supressed brilliance again comes front.......
very very nice update.......👏



still trying to work out on how I can present Geet's intelligence..... 😕

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