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Posted: 14 years ago
Can't wait for the full part :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey..i read ur FF but didn't have a chance to comment until now
first off i love the concept..it is truly unique
i like how geet is wary of her new family but at the same time accepting them and learning that her family lied to her
please continue soon and add me to your PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ok firstly to your AN I can assure you I understand that the family haven't realised yet that geet is not speaking much and her behaviour towards everything as it's true it's only been a day an they're all happy that maan got married and they got such a nice bahu but it will take time for them to realise and ooh I don't mind maaneet not being there much as it's a slow and steady pace considering the torture and abuse geet went through for her to register such feelings and I'm also intrigued to know about her past and her mother death and now to the the preview ooh that seems interesting wonder why geet did break a rule or did she? Anyways thanks for the AN and preview now can't wait to read it 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved how descrpitive and real the story is
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelskiss


Update will be on Monday... for now enjoy the Preview....

here today is monday evening
where are you?
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Posted: 14 years ago
i m eagerly waiting fr ur updae,,,,i m super duper xcited 2 know wat happens....u ra gr8 writr.....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56

So whom she telling her past meera, naintara or maan..... But its her muhdekhai toh past all of a sudden....... Anyways i m eager abt her past.....



Part 13 will answer your question.... 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bono_jostna

oh! It is geet's past! But why it is coming front? Is she reminding it? Or something else? Everytime u gave preview i think it was better without one! Without this i can wait a week more cz i have no idea whats coming up..bt nw i becm more restless to know what is gonna happen next!!!



So you don't want me to post previews from now on?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-

That looks interesting...but where will the confession/flashback fit in vis-a-vis the mooh dikhayee ki rasam...I am very curious? Also what triggers this confession/flashback?


Cant wait...any idea when you will be updating?? Drop a hint atleast😆



I will be updating in few minutes... just have to proofread and then will post it......
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Hi Angel🤗


First of all my apologies for not commenting since the last 2 updates😒 apology accepted.... 😛
But I have been regularly reading the updates😛
The way you're weaving the whole story is just awesome!
Geet's character and its portrayal is the most challenging task, I feel, while writing this story. And you do it so perfectly. You understand her psychology so well-the fear, the apprehensions of being happy, of being accepted after being abused by her father and brothers for years! Her so called father and father treated her like ashes making her do all the household chores, keeping her away from the word instead of educating her. They have filled her mind with bad images of life after marriage. All these years that she has lived has affected her psyche badly. She remembers being loved and cared only by her late mother and now when Maan and his family are showering love and care she's confused of their behaviour. She's not able to decide if they really care and love her or she is gonna be reprimanded the next moment.
The way you are portraying this is just amazing! thank you for appreciating the story and understanding Geet's character... I am a psychology student who has read many non-fiction books on child abuse hence have a deeper understanding of it....

I am really enjoying reading this story.
Naintara is nice. She cares about her family. And I like the Love-Hate relationship she shares with Meera. She may not voice her warm feelings towards her but she surely does love her. Yup, NT is strict but she does love Myra...
I like the humour element you introduced, two updates back I guess, when Naintara was asking Maan if he's consummated his marriage or not. I will try to keep the humor in the future parts....
I am looking forward to the future updates-the family realizing Geet's quiet nature, her hesistations, discovery of her past by Maan, Maan and his family helping Geet to overcome her fears and embrace life happily.

Also, I wanted to ask if Geet's father and her brothers will be there in the future updates as in they visiting her at Delhi or something of this sort? Yes, they will re-enter into the ff but not for a long time though for now you can enjoy them in the flashback scenes....

Hope you give the next part soon.😳
Love
Shivangi

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