FF Pyaar ,dosti aur Duriyan update,notepage134,141 - Page 4

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

hey interesting concept! plz con't soon

AND maan as an army captain? thats gonnaa be hott😉

Thanks for loving the concept.
I'll update soon dear.

Originally posted by: nehara

hey...

it sounds really interesting...

pls continue soon... 😃

Thanks for loving the concept.
I'll update soon.

Originally posted by: shah10

like it..amazing..

plz..continue soon..add me to r pm list plz..thx

Thansk for loving the update.
I'll update soon and added u dear.

Originally posted by: moonlight44

amazing di loved it!!!!

thanks for loving the concept dear.

i love your concept dear...

Originally posted by: naddiya26

i love your concept dear...

the introduction was so catchy ... please do add me in your Pm list.. i would love to read it...

Maan as an army forces guy ,it suit to his personalty ...

waiting for more

thanks for loving the concept.
added u dear.
yes maan as army officer suit to his personality.
I'll update within 5 min dear.

Part1:-

Maan in his office doing some office work.

Maan:-oh no, I forgot to call dadi. today her birthday. Me and my work.

Maan called his home and dadi picked up the phone and said yes maan beta.

Maan:-I'm sorry dadi.Happy Birthday .I'm really stuck at work and'..

Dadi:-I can understand beta , work come first.

Maan:-Dadi,

Dadi smiles and said don't feel sad dear.anyway, when u'll come back ?

Maan:-I'll be back tomorrow . dadi miss u lots.

Dadi:-Miss u too beta.

Maan:-Aapne lunch kya?

Dadi:-oh actually.

Maan:-Dadi .pls take care ur health, take lunch now.

Dadi:- are my little child scold me .

Maan :- dadi .I'm not kid any more. I'm old now.

Dadi:-yes par mere liye toh aap aabhi mere chota sa baccha ho.

Maan:- dadi mein phone rakh raha hoon but pls eat ur lunch now.nehi toh meine kal ghar wapas nehi aaunga.

Dadi :-pls maan beta don't say like this. Ok,I'll eat my lunch now. Fine now. And come back tomorrow .I"ll be wait for u dear.

Maan smiles and said yea sure. Bye dadi.

Dadi: bye dear.

Here some where, a village called, hoshiyarpur , a girl running on the road and said to herself.oh god baba je I'm too late today . sirf aur sirf preeti ke liye oh aur uska problem kabhi bhi khatam nehi hoga. Aur upar se mere scooter ko bhi aaj bigarna tha.

At last she reached the hospital.

She saw long line in front of her room.Again start her self talking to her babajee'..oh no itna late ho gaya , too many people are waiting for me. Shame on me .

After some time , she settle herself in her cabin and told her assistance to call all patient one by one''..she skipped her lunch and dinner and almost after 9.30 she ready for returning back to her home'.

Here at delhi, Khurana mansion, dadi ma means Savitri Khurana sit in her room and thinking about maan ''She missed maan. She told to herself no savitri , u'll not weak in front of maan. U have to strong. Mein toh jaanti thi , army mein job usse humse dur rakhega, meine toh hi bachpan se usse smajhaya discipline, duty responsibility . hume strong hona hoga, par iss dil ka kya kare kabhi kabhi maan ke liye bahut daar lagta hain''''.she weeps her tears and then switched off the lights and try to sleep.

Here in the office, maan is still working .After half and hour he complete his work. He is going back to mess.

Next day morning, in hoshiyarpur, a girl waking up and said to her babjee pls pls aaj ka din aacha jana chaiye. Pls.

Then going to washroom.

At the same day after noon, maan wapas aagaye delhi and direct going to his head quarter for reporting.

Here at the Khurana mansion, savitri devi told all servants to clean maan's room .

One of the servant asked maa jee par, but where is maan baba.

Savitri dev smiled and told her that he will be back at evening then savitri devi to to herself I know maan is not going to report to his head quarter. He is truly responsible person not like his father.

Savitri devi weep her tears.

At the evening, maan is back his home,

Savitri devi greeted him and hugged him and said welcome back beta. Miss u lots.

Maan:-miss u too dadi.

Dadi:-app jaldi se fresh ho jao then we will talk.

Maan:-Sure.

After some time, maan and savitri devi sit in the living room.Both are chatting for some time.

Savitri devi told maan that he have to go hoshiyarpur for some property work.

Maan:-par property ke work toh mushi jee dekhte hain aur meine abhi kaise ja sakta hoon.

Savitri devi:-hmm,I know beta, but it's really urgent and if mushi jee not told me that there '.

Maan:- there, aab aap chup kyuon ho gaye.

Savitri devi:-nehi kuch nehi beta, aap choro hum munshi jee ko kehe denge ke oh kuch bhi karke manage kar le.

Maan:-ok, as u wish, like ,aap ke baat se hi pata chal raha hain jada important baat nehi hain so munshi jee samal sakte hain , toh mere uha jane ke koi matlab nehi hain.

Savitri devi to her mind, uff this boy . na aab meine isse kaise samjahu ,jana toh isse parege , uha ek toh property ka kaam hain and aur doosra''.

Savitri devi:- good night maan. And straight goes to her room.

Maan sit in the couch and shook his head and said uff again that drama.

He called munshi jee and told He 'll be there after 2days and then asked how is geet now?

Munshi jee:- she is fine beta and doing her work very well.

Maan:-ok, good. Then he cut the call.

After some time maan enter the savitri devi's room and saw dadi is sleeping.

Maan:-dadi wake up and eat ur dinner with me.

Savitri devi:-Hume pareshan mat kijiye, aur jaiye aapna work kijiye.

Maan sit besides her and said dadi pls get up now,.I'll go there after 2 days.

Savitri devi sat on her bed now and happily said sacchi maan. Oh my son u r really great. Thanks a lot beta and bring geet here also and then I'll arrange ur marriage with geet here.

Maan:-dadi, pls, I'll go there but for the property work , no marriage and specially to ur darling geet. Now get up and eat ur dinner,

Savitri Devi:-ok fine u'll go and eat ur dinner .I'm not coming.

Maan:- pls dadi ma.meien aapse kaha na jaunga uha but no marriage.

Savitri devi:-par kyuon beta, she good girl, educated, traditional, beautiful. Then what's the problem.

Maan:-I know all those facts but still,I cannot and now u get up other wise I'll carry u .

Savitri devi think to her mind ok at least u r ready to go there , rest I"ll see later .

Both are eating their dinner silently. Then savitri devi :- good night maan .

Maan:-good night dadi and kissed her fore head.

At the night,maan soch raha hain, akhir kya baat hain jo aaj dadi ma aur ek baar jor nehi kya geet se shaadi ke liye, jarur kuch aur baat hain,job hi ho , mein geet se shaadi nehi karungi.par agar dadi ma phir se reason puche ,kya kahunga ke mein usski not stop baat se irritate ho jata hoon, aur kya bolu, with reason or with out reason smiling, baat suru , nehi toh giving advice every time uff, this lists are going on, are maan what is this yaar, meine geet pe itna time kyuon de raha hoon, chal so ja. Don't think about geet, no good night maan .

Here in the hoshiyarpur, that girl said to her baba jee:-baba jee , sab ko aache se rakhna, shanty se rakhna, mere aajke din ke tarah kal ka din bhi acche se jaye.

Then she lay on her bed and said to her self geet beti so jate hain, waise hi aagle do din tere aacha jana hain kyuon uske baad ek bahut bara dusht danav aaraha hain, mujhe pareshan karne. Jo hasta nehi, baat nehi karta, are dsuhat danav hain toh smile kyuon karega, baat kyuon karega. Chal chor uss dusht danav ke baarein mein maat soch aur so ja, waise hi kal phir tujhe preeti se bhi milna hain , hope ke uska pareshani khatam hua hain'''..mujhe peerti se bolna hoga do din mujhe shanty se jeene de kyuon ki uske baad mere zindegi mein Maan singh Khurana oh oh no no Captain Maan singh Khurana naam ka ek dusht danav aayenge, mujhe pareshan karne, uff baba jee kyuon mujhe chacha ne uss dusht danav ko iha aane ko bola. Kyuon baba jee kyuon, are mein phir baat karne lagi, chalo so jati hoon.good night geet so jaa aab. Bahut baat ho gayi.

Precap:-Maan:- geeeeeeeeeetttttttttttttttttttttt.

Geet:-mujhe pata hain mere naam geet hain , don't shout it's not ur office, neither ur battle field.

Maan:- u . tumahari wajay se mein iha . uff this mud.

Geet:- if some one walking like this then what is my fault.

Maan:-geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt.

Geet close her ears and said shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, don't shout agar tum samajhte ho tum jor se shout kar sakte ho then mein bhi kar sakti hoon.Samjhe'''..

Maan:-geeeet, u'll pay for this soon.

Geet:- all the best Maan singh Khurana.

Maan glared at her then geet said uff I forgot. Captain Maan Singh Khurana.

wow .... superb .. geet must be a nice dr for sure