Doubtful motherhood.
Fiza
what was that??? so heart wrenching yaar.
u made me cry ... so painful os ... mujhe Mahafiz ki yaad aagayi
first of all after reading i was lil confused k should i press Like button or not π... but finally i pressed that button, only for ur awesome work.π
because i dont like this story ... it was so painful.
when i started reading this os ... i felt like awww how sweet they are ... mayur n their kids ... a small heaven.π
their sweet talk ... mischief ... sweet nice gesture ... everything was so perfect ... i loved that.π
then accident.
it was so horrible ... poor little kids.
but u really surprised me when u revel theri past.π
but their present was most horrible than their past.
nupur saved rahul, but mayank was accused her like anything. even he called her murderer of a little kid
i so hate this mayankπ‘
how could he thot so lowπ‘
but mayank said the right thing ... soutela akhir soutela hi hota hai ... thats why he never ever loved pranav.π‘
it was no matter, how much pranav loved him ... even in his last breath he called his dadπ ... but mayank all cared about his blood rahul ... he not even bother to asked about pranav once.
thats the reality.
this was the 2nd most painful os i ever read...
last part was very painful yet very well written when nupur leaving the house ... whehn she met rahul and mother-son convo was very painful ... poor rahul ... he was so small even to realized the situation, but he become a victim of his father's did ... not only he lost his brother, even his mother too, when he has no fault ...
when nupur was leaving the house and recalling all memories ... it was so painful.
i dont know, how to express my feelings properly ... but i felt like change the time and bring the old time back.
but one thing is always there...n that is ur writing skill.π
hats off to ur writing skill.π
u r one of the greatest writer ... u r a born writer.π
i dont like this os ... but really loved ur writing skill in this os.π
awesome ... brilliant ... fantabolous writing.π
u know very well how to stabbed our heart with ur wordsπ ... hats off to u.π
love uπ€
Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago
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