Fiza'a OS gallery thread 1 - Page 65

Oh it was so touching 😭 emotional...
beautifully written...
Thank you for sharing!

wow fiza...🤗

Speechless i really felt tears in eyes Fiza

i have no words to say this OS just beautifuly written thanks for the pm

after reading this i am not in a state to say anything, bt Mayank did a sin how can he say that.

had tears reading it

awesummmesssttt👏

awesome one
thanks for the pm

This An OS on bidzy 's request, she wanted to have sumhting on family,

I hope u like it dear, as yeah family se kuch zayda hi family hogaya hai..

I concept I had in my mind from very long , didn't got time to pen it down..

Thnku so much for ur lovly coments, sory for making u all cry…soor

Lov ya fiza

Gauri: I want to marry him..

Mayank; KYA….wht are u saying

Pranave: she said she wana marry me, infact me to

Maaynk: gauri have u lost it…are u sure about it, donot u know him

Pranve: wht do u mean by she is sure..

Mayank: im talking to my daughter not u…stay out of it…beta he is very different from u, tum janti ho usko,..kya tum khush rah pao gi

Gauri: u trust me na..

Mayank: ofocurce I trust u bachy…I can never doubt on u

Samrat: ahh so u donot trust my son…he said encircling his arm around hime

Mayank : I do but…

Samrat: but wht ..u n nupur are also way different

Pranve: ya ture..porab n pachin

Mayank: thts is a way dffrent thing…

Samrat: wht way different..she is alive n ur dead….n here he is alive

Gunjan: samrar kasi baatein kertay hain ap, gauri ko asay bool rahy hain

Mayank: gunjan tumhi samjho…mjhy tu kuch ajeeb hi lag raha hai

Nupur: tumhain tu hamesha shadi kuch ajeeb hi lagti hai..by god agar humari shadi asay na hoi hoti aur tumhain sochny k time hi nhi diya warna tumhain tu abhi tak " kuch ajeeb hi lagata sadu"

Samrat: ha aur nhi tu kiya…mera beta kyun kawaura rahy

Mayank: shutup Samrat…bulkily tumhary jasa banadiya hai is ko

Samrat: yup hot n happening..

Pranve: sexy n irresistible to amigos…

Samrat: true….

Rahul: dad..meri baat sunay

Pranve : chill dudue mein handle ker raha hoon na

Rahaul: gai behas pani mein

Mayank: nupur ki tarha baat mat kero….i donot expect tht from u..aur tum kiya handle kero gay..mjhy

Samrat: yeah bechara kasy handle keray ga tum ko…tumhain tu koi handle nhi kersakta…n control kersakta hai

Mayank: matlab kiya hai tumhara…mein ny asa kauns sa out of control kam kiya hai…tumahri tarah nhi hoon

Samrat: wht do u mean meri tarah

Pranve slap his head n gauri moved to corner near nupur…

Pranve: yeah baat kaha se kaha ja rahi hai

Mayank: shutup..han aur tum ny kiya kaha tha..mein sadu aur tum tu excel k flirt ho na

Pranve: wao so cool

Samrat: mein flirt nhi waha ka sab se happening student tha..larikyan meri bechy khud ati thi..mjhy zaroorat nhi thi unko bolnay gi …tum tu hamesha meri value se jealous hotay hoo…

Mayank: oh hello..meri tuj se zayada value thi samjhy.,jab hi teri girlfriend tujhy chor ker mera pass ai thi

Pranve/Rahul: kiya…really…ap bhi..

Samrat: ji nhi..us riya( remember baby track) ko tu mein ny ditch kiya tha aur islyan woh second option me tumhary pass aii thi..aur tu dosrao ki girlfrnd k sath raat bhar …woh bhi colloge mein

Rahul: yeah aj hum kya sun rahy hain u cheated on my mom

Mayank: asa kcuh nhi hoa tah samjhy…

Samrat: ach tu nupur ko bolata hoo

Mayank: us ko yaad dilny ki zaroorat nhi hai…

Smart: kyun kyun ..us ko bhi tu pata chaly aur han woh tumhari student bhi thi na ek…woh I tell You

Mayank: acha ..aur tu colooge k trusty, Ash yaad hai…tu tu uska ghar se mila tha n raat bahr k baad subha woh bhi drunk

Gauri: kyaaa…yeah kiya kiya sunay ko mil raha hai

Praanve: mom apt u kahti thi dad sadu thy ..phir yeah kiya hai

Nupur: yeah for a change jab sadu ko masti kerni hoti thi na..tu dosro k pass hi jata tha…aur sara sadu pan tu meray liyan hai…mjhy hi tu ankein dekhta hai

Mayank: mein ny tumharay sath asa kam kiya han…mein tu Samrat ko bol raha hoon..tum hi tu kahti thi k woh Casanova hai

Samrat: tu is se kiya prrof hota hai

Pranve: yani proof kerny ko tha kuch…by God..

Samrat: chup ker besharm.. guari as kuch nhi hai

Mayank: us bechair ko kya bool rahy hoo…jab baab hi papi ho tu

Pranve: common dad hot n happening dude k asi 20 25 stories hoti hain..ignore kero

Gauri: kiya matlab hai tumhara…ignore kero..aur tumhari kitni stories hain

Mayank: see thts wht I am saying…

Samrat: oye…asa kuch nhi hai gauri..woh tu bus asay hi..comon..woh serious thori tha..tum se tu woh pyar kerta hai warna shadi kerny ko kahta

Pranve: han dear..tum kyun strees lyti hoo..stres layny se tumhary beautiful chehray per yeah lines bulkily achi nhi lagti…

Mayank: kaha tha tumahri maa se tumhin Samrat se door rekhain…magr nhi..pora k pora samart ban diya hai tum ko…

Pranve: ap logo k chekar mein lagata hai humain bahg ker shadi kerni paray gi…wasy how cool nhi….

Rahul: pls pranve uncle….dad pls be serious

Nupur: tum dad aur tumhari masi kafi hain us department k lyan aur tumahri bhabi ki new entrance..

For those who r nt getting relations . pranve and Rahul are mayank n nupurs son, and gauri is gujans daughter, though she is samrats daughter yet she is utelry close to mayank due to her height in academics and her sensitive and mature nature form childhood, and pranve is zerox of Samrat…

Mayank:I donot know but yeah sab thik nhi hai bus..mein socho ga…saying so he left

Pranve: dad…

Nupur: rukho mein dekhti hoon

Nupur: kiya hua…tumahin tu khush hona chaiy..pata hai pranve was so scared but gauri was so sure k tum us k lyan kahbi mana nhi kero gay…as u always find her perfect

Mayank: pata nhi..but I m just not sure..

Nupur: sure of Gauri..she ask in uter surprise

Mayank: nupurr…I m just not sure of…

Nupur: PRANVE…u doubt on his loyalty

Mayank: nhi bhi

Nupur: phir kiya hai…saaf saaf bolona, yeah jalabo ki traha gool gool bateing kyun ker rahy hoo…

Mayank: nupur gauri ek simple, sweet aur sensitive larki hai

Nupur: tum mera beta, ek insenetive, complicated aur arrogant larka hai kya…lakho mein ek hai woh

Mayank: yeah hi tu problem hai…woh lakho mein ek, unique pieces..aur uper se tumhara beta hai

Nupur: mayank tum kaha kiya chaty hoo…she glared him

Mayank: pranve ek buhat carefree, non responsible boy hai…aru kahin na kahin young aur immature…

Nupur: mayank jab humari shadi hoi thi tu tum 22 k thay

Mayank: mein immature tha…

Nupur: nhi…

Mayank: but pranve hai…I doubt woh apni zeemdari nhi utha sakta…aur mjhy bulkily bardasht nhi hoga agr gauri will sufer because of him…Gauri buhat fragile hai…he said smilingly..she need sum1 who handles her like a princess…

Sirf islayn k Pranve humara beta hai, Samrat kuch pooch nhi raha tu kiya yeah thik hai…

Nupur: mayank..asa kuch nhi hoga..mein bhi tu asay hi thi..phir…Gauri sambhal lay gi usko..i am sure..she is the most perfecr ..

Mayank: I know she is perfect….

samrat who has a smile of proud n contentment on his face to have mayank in his life, and pranave whos jaw was droped his jaw hearing there talks..

if ur asking wht are they doing here….

Flash back

Pranve: ab yeah dono kiya baat kerain gay…woh bhi akela

Samrat: wasy akealy yeah loog baat ker sakty hain kiya….he said mischevively

Pranve: I doubt..they bth laugh..pls yaar amigo be serious..mera baap meray payr k dhushman ban raha hai…pata nhi kiya khichari ban rahi hogi…

Gauri: uncle mjhy pasand nhi kertay..she said a bit sniffing…woh mjhy se naraz kyun hogay..

Pranve: yaar pls tum nhi….tum kyun rooh rahi hoo..pls gauri…stop it na….woh mjhy pasand nhi kertay.tum tu ladli ho un ki

Rahul: pranve u very well know k dad loves u a lot, unhony khabi tumhari kisi baat k lyan man nhi kiya

Pranve: tu aj kiya hoa…aura b kiya ho raha hai…mom n dad alone, whn dad is not in mood to agree..tu kuch dair mein mahabarht k awaz any wali hai

Samrat: ek kam kertay hain…unhony yeah tu nhi kaha, hum unki baat nhi sun sakty..

Pranve: ur genious..amigos….lets go

Gauri: yeah galat baat hai..

Pranve: evrythng is fair in love and war sweet heart..catch u later…he threw a flying kiss to her..

N smart look at him .i-an-here…he he return..

Pranve: grow up amigo…..

Falsh back end

Pranve: kya baap hai he doubts on me…

Samrat: agr tu waqi us se payr kerta hai tu us k doubt clear ker..ja…

Pranve: amigo ap bhi…u doubt on me

Samrat: no…like a father I trust u, mayank doubt u for his daughters future…so proof it

Pranve: wasy u know wht we are so lucky na, 4 , 4 parents hain humaray…. ok mein bhi nupur bhushan Sharma k beta hoon, ab dekho mera kamal…

Dad u doubt on me…

Mayank: pranve,,,tu yaha kiya ker raha hai..

Pranve: apki baatein sun raha hoon, per yeah suny se pehly meray kaun karab kyun na hogay, zameen path kyun na gai…mera baap..mera baap…jska mein paap..i mean beta..aur ap mjhy per sahq kera rahy hain….maa dekho tumharay beta ki mohabbat per shaq kiya…dehkho raj aur simran k beech amirsh puri agay

Nupur: hay mera beta…dekho mayank

Mayank: nupur ek min…tum nautanki baz, kya soch ker yeah fasla liya hai tum ny…tumharay pass hai kiya

Pranve: mera pyar…

Mayank: pranve im dam serious, yeah koi mazak nhi hai..samjhy tu. Ek insane ki zindagi hai..

Pranve: aur woh meri zindagi hai…dad..he sigh n went near him…dad I love her..i really love her..mjhy pata hai woh buhat fragile hai, but I will take care of her, I know mein buhat distracted hoon, carefree hon, but one think I know tht only she can handle me..jasay apko mom..he said misheviouly…

Nhi on serious note, mom handles u so well, at time we judge ur anger, n sadu pan wrongly but she never, so as Gauri knew me well, n handle my carefree, n immature attitude so well..

Mayank: I know it she will handle u very well, but can u handle her..thts wht I doubt…salary kiya hai tumhari

Pranve: don't worry meri pocket money kafi achi hai..n about to handle her, ask her , kya I don't takecare of her, do my gesture lack sumthing, dad common apka beta hoon, romantic hoon aur apki tarah gesture oriented he hoon…donot u trust me..

Pls dad man jao na..

Samrat: common mayank..he will take care of her I trust him..jab gunjan aur tum ny mjhy seedha kerdiay tu pranve kiya cheez hai

Mayank: I hope Guari pranve ko seedha kerday

Samrat: khuda na keray..ek aur sadu no way

Nupur: sadu …mera dad wali herkat nhi kero…

Gauri: baray papa pls…I am sure about it…she said shyly scaringly looking at him..

He smile at her…,

Yupi….

Rahul: congrats bro..teri tu shadi hai…

Mayank: ek min..

Pranve: nhiii

Mayank: shadi tab tak nhi hogi jab tak tum achi job per nhi lag jatay..manzoor..

Pranve: oki…kal Rahul resign ker raha hai..aur mein uski company join ker lo ga

Samrat: aray tum mera business kaun handle keray ga

Pranve: aray amigos tusi gr8 ho, ras golay ki plate ho…aoo..chapi pao…

Mayank: do taphr lagao ga na tu bata chaly ga…no cheating..proff u can handle ur responsibility by urself…

Nupur: pranve ur dad is right

Pranev: mom ap bhi…..oki

Nupur: acha hai jab tak mein Rahul k liyan bhi koi dhond lo gi

Rahul: no ways mom..pls..mein koi shadi wadi nhi ker raha

Nupur; dekhti hoon beta…bulil apny baap per gaya hai tu..

Rahul: han tu thik hai,na pranve ki shadi mein, mein us ki dulhan se kerlo ga…kasa dad…gauri thik hai

He blushed n pranve

Pranve: sharm ker, bari bhabi hai teri ….

Nupur: aur han gujna pls ab tu rooh kyun rahi hai…teri beti mera pas hi tu arhi hai..aur han pls yeah koi white weding nhi ..mein ny tu yash chopra wali shadi kerni hai

Mayank; hogay mein ganagal….

Pranve I have high hopes from u …n I know u will nt let me down..

Pranve: I wont dad..he hugged him..

Mayank: beta I don't doubt on u its just

Pranve: I know dad common..hum sab ko pata hai gauri sab se uper ati hai…

Nupur kissed gauri n hugged her..

Nupur: thnku to u both

Parnave: for wht

Samrat: humara rishta aur strong kerny k lyan..

He too join nupur pramve gauri n gunjan…

Mayank: hello hum bhi hain…

Rahul: ji mjhy tu dood mein se mahki ki tarha nikal diya

Mayank: yaar tu apni maa ki tarha itin weird examples kyun dayta hai

Nupur: kyun k woh mere beta hai…she frwrd her hand n Rahul happily joined the group hug

Mayank: han meri tu sirf beti hi hai…

He joined Guari n Samrat …

haaayyy...😍