Fiza'a OS gallery thread 1 - Page 29

Originally posted by: gopi06

interesting updt...so mayank is silent admirer of nupur...waiting for next updt to know nupur's reaction on this ....cont soon
thanks for the pm

hmm

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

awesome update Fiza!

Mayank is a gem

continue soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

thnks aloot glad u liked

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

mayank is the secret admirer of nupur...........sound interesting......eagerly waiting for next part...........plz cont soon

thnks aloot

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti

@Fiza

beautiful update

do continue soon...

thnks for liking

Originally posted by: -moona-

Very Nice Part Fiza...

i guess Nupur Understood her Mistake..

thnks for liking mona darling

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

verry lovely update Fiza thanks sis for the pm

thnks samo

Hey Guys

Rply to u all

Thnks for ur coments lova ya

N ya as u all where nt interested in giving a tilte expect one of my new readers….thnku so much

N ms faria ..i was abt to caal it jani dhushman

But thn my janu bach gave me I really nice one

Thts Veiled off..thnks Dr Maha

Lov ya

Veiled OFF

Chapter : 3

This time mayank was shocked to c her hear…he passed his finger is his hairs….

Benji: I think finally u bth need to talk …pls….he left the place closing the door behind..leaving to people complete silent letting there heart speak….

I saw Nupur for the first time 5 years back at benji's birthday party…I fall for her tht day but found it a mare attraction…she was a cute n innocent as she is today , as stubborn n impulse but a lillte more today ……I was doing my consultancy n she was completing her MBA….

She ws dancing with benji n was enjoyin laughing n rocky the party…me the party animal took a side as didn't want my eyes to get a distraction from the view….i was smiling at her bindus charcter …larikyan asi bhi hoti hai…I was amaze she was making the stupidest funniest face…like an elephant n doing "papu dance step"…

The best n the cutest part was when she fed benji cake n he puted it on her nose n around her upper lip…n she was with one eyes clse locating where n where the cake is on her……

Mayank: asay dekho gi tu ankhain karab hojay gi….

She gave him a " haa…as if I care ur words look"

Benji: array Nupur he is mayank my bst frnd n she is Nupur my sweetes sis..

Mayank: hey

Nupur: nt interested

Mayank: date k lyan nhi poch raha hoon

Nupur: pocho gay bhi tu tumhary sath jay ga kaun

Mayank: mjhy pochna hi nhi hai

Nupur: achi baat hai..pocho gay tu sar thor do gi tumhara

Pointing her finger on him

He smiled at her…yeah larki hai ya Hitler …..

Our meetings continued….i was never able to take her out of my mind …the more a meet her the more simpler I found her……..simpler nt like a shy sweet girl…simpler as she was out spoken , arrogant,,……but had a golden heart…

Ding dong at benji's house

Nupur: tum

Mayank: tum

Mayank: benji ghar per nhi hai

Nupur: tu …site per ho ..yeah mera ghar hai

Mayank: magar mein ghar per akela hoon ….aur tumhara koi bharosa nhi

Nupur: yuck….whoz gonna waste time on u…aur tum akleay ho…..seductivly….tu phir tu …she pushed him aside…mjhy yaha aur raha na hoga…chor bhi tu hosaktay hoo..wasy bhi sahkal se asay hi lagtay hoo

Mayank: how dare u…sab ko apny jasa samhj rekha hai kiya

Nupur: ramu kaka chai pls…..she shouted

Mayank: ramu kaka bhi nhi hain…islyan do cup chai …

Nupur: mein tumhar liyan bano gi….in ur dreams haa

Mayank: I see dreams Nupur dreming …NT NIGHT MARES…im ur guest serve me…..

Nupur: she was continusly pressing her head…..mjhy chai bana nhi ati…n pls stop irritating me…benji k bacha….us se medicine laynay aai thi..bemari se mulaqat hogai

He smiled at her n went to kitchen …he put fwd a cup of tea n medicine infrnt of her….she looked at him surprised n raise her eyebrow in questioin

Nupur: tum ny chai bani meray liyan…she fainted on the back ….

Mayank: zayada khush honay ki zaroorat nhi hai…bemar ho aur mein doctor hoon tu bus professional reposibilty ….yeah musbiat Hippocrates k oth..khud tu chaly gay..humain hitler k lyan chor gay

Nupur: Nupur bhuahan mar jay gi per ahsaan nhi lay gi samjhy…..

She went inside n made a cup for herself…he was a bit angry more than tht a lilt hurt on her behaviour..but neglected realize how she is…..but thn smiled inside as she took the medicine he gave frm the table

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nupur: whttttttttttttttttttttttttt….y evrytime I cum ur home ..he is here

mayank: watch out ur words madam…dekh benji I told u …I just cant handle this girl..no ways

Nupur: so who asked u to do so..just go away…nt pls to hell han

Mayank: oki FINE…IM leaving ..benji bye

Benji: BUS…cease fire…..itna tu Taliban bhi nhi laraty ..uff……..mayank u just pls give me 5 mins..n u Nupur..HE is the person who works in hospital n can help u making a thesis on health care expenditures….

Nupur: wht

Mayank/ benji: yes

Mayank: n I am helping UUU

Nupur: am I pleading u…I rather love to fail

Benjoi: Nupur u cant afford tht pls be relevant

Nupur:errrrr…oki fine

Mayank: he grin n soon his cell runged..emrgency ok I'll b there in 20 mins…..sorry nupur got a goo..but pakka I'll gave u all details u want..

Nupur: wht

Mayank: I kow for u its important ..but im sorry my patients are more important than even myself..he patted her cheek..got go bye

Nupur: looked at him surprised n rubed her cheek like cleaning it….y he is acting so sweet

Benji: he is sweet…per ap kisi se seedhay moo baat keray tu na

Nupur: wht evr…

She at herself was surprised never evr any1 talked to her like tht her impuse behaviour has caused people only to hate her….n thts why she enjoy her own company rather thn any1…except her scret admirie

It has been 8 mths tht evry now or thn she recive a letter a gift a note or sumthing on her name at her house frm this screat admirie ….he has confess his love for her in 1^st instance n asked her always to read her letter in her balcony….trying hard she cant figure out who he is as nobody in her neighbors had a boy….initially she thought mayb sum of her frnd is joking but soon his words starts to effect her…..

He was always there to console her to listen her…she doesn't know frm where he watch her..at time it scred her but …she always use to talk to herself in balcony deliberately …so tht he can listen nn help her…..so today even as she was angry on mayank she rushed to balcony to speak up

Nupur: idiot , monkey ullu…..mera teen din mein thesis k last date hai..aur woh hospital chala gaya….meri koi importance hi nhi hai…..errr….mein agar fail hoi tu tum mayank sharam…..dr…tu kya tum ko khud dr ke zaroorat per jay gi

The bell runged n she knew it very well who it is..she rushed n collected the letter …than was opening put step her foot in rage n rashed to balcony

Hey dear

Us shram ke tu…meri jan ko itna tang kiya ( she poroudly nodded in yes)…but don't worry …u wont fail..mein hoon na ( tu aao aur complete kero thesesi)…uff I soo wish I can cum too u but I'll jab tum mjhy per itna bahrosa kersako k khud k mjhy day sako….just relax don't frown sab thik hoga…….

Wasy this pink color suits u aloot….aur yeah sun ker jo um per smile aaiii hai…haa….itna zulim na kero mjhy bechari jan per….

Lov ya….truly

Silent admirie

Nupur: mimicking….silent admirer…kya faida had hai

Far away mayank was observing all this through a binocular …..he chuckled at her innconce..truely the way he knows her nobody at times even she doesn't knew tht….

Mayank: oki sharma maar kahni hai mjhy se….meri jan ko itna tang kiya..chalo jao aur us k thesis complete kero….wah kya pyar hai..life mein apna tu koi lecture bhi khud nhi complete kiay…….I mein teray pyar mein kya kya na bana Nupur….he laughed at himself n called her

Can I cum to ur place to complete ur thesis ..if u find it fine

Nupur: hmm…han …u can if u want

She gave him the address so honestly describing each lane n road…n he was continusly irrating her n watching her facial expression to change

Nupur: samhj agaya ya travel guide send kero ap ko…..tumhai doc banaya kis ny

Mayank: tension n lo jali degree hai

Nupur: kya

Mayank: nupurrr…mein mazak ker raha tha…open gate im at ur door step

Nupur: tu tum mjhy tang ker rahy thy

Mayank: han…lets nt fight today…kyun k tht patient is nt tht well tu mjhy abh bhi doobara hospital jana hai..so jaldi se we shud start work

Nupur: tu tum kab se wapas aay ho

Mayank: yaar hospitals se direct araha hoon

Nupur was shocked ns surprise but sum where she really love it when he cares for her soo much n never evr misunderstand her habbit of fighting ir relevant ….sum where she was a bit sad too he was too tired was pressing his neck ….she thought of sum thing

Nupur: tu upper chalo mein ati hoo

Mayank: KYA …tum ny mjhy khud khushi kerny k lyan bolaya hai

Nupur: mayank…..uper room hai waha ap arm farmay mein ati hoo

Mayank: itnay pyar se maat kaho mjhy shock se heart attack aajy ga ….

Nupur: dafa hojao

Mayank: thts better

Nupur: she looked at him surprised n thn chuckled……

Mayank was already on cloud nine…

Mayank: hmm tu ms bhushan ap mjh per itna tu trust kerti hain k mjhy akelay ghar mein invite kiya …n th he was on cloud 28 whn he loked wht Nupur had in her hands

Mayank: coffee

Nupur: haan ..tumhari baatein bardsht kerny k lyan kuch tu hona chaiy

Maynak: grining…

Nupur: why r u smiling like an stupid person

Mayank: thnks..jab hum kisi k lyan kuch keraty hain…tu woh achi baat hoti hai…..jatana acha nhi hai…but us k opposite show kerna …ap k image un k samany karab kerta hai …samjhi…..

She was shocked on listening these words….thy were the same as said my her secret admirie…

Nupur: yeah tumhain kasay pata

Mayank: kya

Nupur: yeah jo abhi kaha

Mayank: kay matlab hai…mjhy kasay pata

Nupur: choro..kam shoro keray

Mayank: pls…

They worked together sweetly n he made her understand all point..as he was working at administration n auditing commity these days….she got in hand every point she need..she was feeling dam tired as it was l;ate in night n she was an early to bed person..

He went to washroom to freshen up n when retured n found her sleeping beautifully

He cam forward n set behind her… a strand of hair was bothering her..she herself put it back n than again went to deep sleep…he with a pen made tht strand agin cum on her face..she frown again n he chuckled she put it back again …again he do tht n thiis time with a high irritating frown she spread the whole hand on her face on tug it back n put her hand on it……

His smiled widen n he shocked his head..n threw a flying kiss to her……he so knew tht he loves her for this….innoccnt as a chil she is

Mayank: mayank sharam…dr sharam rather…stop gazing aur is k thesis bana ..warna subh uthtay hi hungama macha day gii….he typed the details on her laptop as cant write ..he 'll be caught red handed…evry point she might b needing he added tht…….

He complete it n sigh in relived but looked at her …how uncomfortably she was sleeping..he cant let her sleep like this…neither cant take her in his arms……

He slight tried to wak her up

Mayank: Nupur

Nupur: hmm

Mayank: Nupur..utho

Nupur: sunay doo na

Mayank: Nupur bed per late jaoo

Nupur: kya Dad sunay do na

Mayank: he sign in disbleive…sari lovestory k e wat lagadi had hai yaar…

Mera beta uth jao plssss

She opened her eyes slightly n looke at him n frown again…she stood up n was trembling here n ther …she was about to fall just than he caught her from shoulders reluctantly …he made her walk till bed n th she thrwe herself in mid of bed…he couldn't do more….he turned around

Nupur: suno…..blanket n AC

Mayank: he looked at her in a acted anger..n cover her with blanket n switched on Ac….he wrote a letter in block letter

Hitler…..tumhary laptop mein sary point s hai tu pls ab mjhy taang maat kerna…….

Mayank

She woke to have her letter sticked on her laptop…a huge smile appear her face …..

Nupur: how swett….thnks…

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Finuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
it was beautiful update janu
Too good
the flashback par was very cute, nice and funny.............
Maynk the secret admirer of nups - loves her a lot
he is so cute re- he helped her on her thesis paper
hehehehehe loved mayur cute nok-jhok....................
it was very entertaining
wonderful update finaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

rocking yaar
now wanna c nups reaction.............
waiting for ur next part
monday update kar dena pilishhhhhhhhhhhh
take care
love ya

rese


shoooo sweet........😃

it was the cutest part.......🤗
but nupur how rude and arrogant she is.......😡
mayank is her secret frnd and lover wht a scene yar.......👏
loved it......just got to know wht would b her reaction whn he got to knw abt him.........😲