We're the Perfect Two-MJHT FF- Part14- pg140 19/5

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ginny munjal

@ginny09

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#711

go on manso just move the way u want to move ur story

u r giving imp to all the bonds which is nessc

great !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

really , waiting for the next part ...........

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itzMYattitude

@itzMYattitude

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#712

amazing update dear

just loved it to the coreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

really u have written it brilliantly

sanu scene was really sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet

m in love with it

the way shammy was laughing remebering the incidence

just amazingggggg

n scene of the trio was really superbbbbbbbb

u r increasing the curiosity so plz

do continue sooooooooon

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InactiveMember

@InactiveMember

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#713

Hey Mansi! Lovely FF! Well I havent read the whole thing yet but I read the Prologue!
Im Loveing it already! you write very well..!

Will surely catch up sooon!

Thanks Alot For the PM!

Sanjana

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#714

Wow wow wOw

wht a chapter

it had everyThing

simply amazing

loved it

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#715

brilliant update mansi............

firstly.....luved sanu scene.they r sooooooo cute yaar n luved their FB..

n den gunur scene...the way nupur cared fr gunjan was so sweet...they talked abt their likes dislikes..ah!!!!!awesome

third n last one mayur scene was beautiful....he entwined their hands n put under his head....choooo cheet

n want to know abt gunjan past

cont soon n tnx fr pm dear

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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#716

Love the flashback scene most.i was laughing badly.
I also liked mayur part
waiting 4 next part

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#717

superb update Mansi!

loved it to the core

waiting for the next update

continue soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

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Rabia

@.Rabia.

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#718

awesome update

totally loved it

sayank scene was nice and i loved mayank's thoughts about samrat

sanu scene was awesome totally loved it..it was so funny nupur was so innocent loved samrat's teasing

most adorable scene was gunjan-mayank-nupur scene

gunur bonding is beautiful

and than mayur scene loved how he didn't want nupur to feel uncomfortable and than holding their hands was just aww...mayank's sadness and nupur's shock was beautifully described

gunjan seeing her bhai and bhabi and being happy for them was cute part

loved last part where samrat said buhut zyada pyaar

it was fabulous update

do cont soon