FF*Despair*(maaneet)pt20at pg 133(17 nov)

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swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#351

wow lovely update.. enjoyed it..Tanu n Ved are really cute... do continue soon

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charlie1950

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Posted: 14 years ago

#352

pls stop writin saying if the update is boring and second why 2 b sorry for writn big updates

we love eeeeeeeeeeeeeee big updates

and girl u need 2 stop selling ureslf short

u knw ur r good a wht u do

wont mind another big update

update was very lovely

the built up of story between maneet

is sooooooooooo sweet

a big🤗 for ya for this update

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Pickachu

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Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#353

Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

Loveeeeeeeeeee it.

Continue soonnnn.

Thanxxx for the pm.

Fatima

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#354

great update! loved his room!

con't soon

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Shamima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#355

Aww really cute and loved how maan called and when he said hmm dadi understood that he meant geet lool and ved what s nice name to whoever gave that anyways ergh the 3 chudails I wonder what they will be up to and lied the airport scene it was really cute and Aww maan making geet apply balm on his neck and I think that they payal will hold significance in the future and ergh brij he so needs to get beaten up anyways loved it and continue soon 😊

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Neha

@cherieLover

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#356

OMG wat a beautiful updateeeeeeee

plzzzzzzzzzzzz P.m. me!

i loved itttttttttttttttttttttttt

plz update soooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnn

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Sara

@charmed ones

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#357

Thats is awesum n wonderful update...!!!! ⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏

Thanks u so much Nadii...!!!!😃😃😃😃

I reali njoyed😉 n luv it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️....!!!!!

I always like long ones...!!!! hehehe😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

Get Well Soon....Dear...!!!!😊

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#358

superb!...

i m truly loving this!...

glad to see that maan and geet are getting along ith each other really well!...

love the kids!...

i hope u are ine now!...

continue soon!

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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 14 years ago

#359

hiii naddy.........

take care of urself dear,

if u r not keeping well...plzz dont stress urself..............

i completely loved this update...its so magical dear

a beautifully written update...........

plzz continue after u r perfectly ok

take care

god bless u

reva

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Aleena

@cute-aly

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#360

update

best part of this update is

Maan: didi... shouted

Meera: waved her

Tanu : mamoo.. both kids ran to him

Maan: kneel down & hug them

Tanu : in Maan ears "who is she?"

Maan: your didi

VED: will she get lost in airport ?

Maan: smiled looked at his hand Whisper "yes she is small like you "

VED: but she does not look like

Geet: try to remove his hand

Meera: :hi mera bhai

Maan: hi didi.. he hug her (left geet hand)

Meera: who is she?

Maan: dadi ki bachi ..choti se 13 years wali

Geet: looked at Maan

Meera: she is beautiful , introduce karwa ao

Maan i know... Geet . my didi

Geet: hi

Meera: hug Geet...

Geet: hug her back

Maan: please lets go ... took trolley from her. made Ved sit in the basket

VED: mamoo hold her hand if she get lost...

Maan: whisper "you hold it"

VED: ok didi called Geet... stretched his hand out

Geet: hold it she could not help it .. she has to walk just next to Maan.. her shoulder touch his..

Maan: smiled... come on bacho get in he open back door for them ..closed it as they got in...

Geet: looked at him ...he open front door for Meera... Geet confused.. what to do?

A car passed them at full speed .. Maan just pull her to him.

VED: kept his head in Geet lap

Geet: kya

VED: hold her hand ..call her down whisper" mamoo was right she will get lost if i leave her hand"

Geet: looked at him "what"

VED: see i left your hand ..that car...

Geet: you apply this it will relief your pain.

Maan: hmmm turn her neck to her

Geet: me

Maan: yes...

Geet: aap khud kar la please

Maan: i will not eat you

Geet: i know ...

Maan: i have closed my eyes , not looking at you

Geet: felt helpless she just took out little just gentle rub at his vein...

Maan: just felt relief...

Geet: looked at his closed eyes... she just walk out

Maan: where are you i called home? nakul said you are not at home.

Dadi: i came for shopping.

Maan: hmmm....(how to ask how is she?)

Dadi: why you called?

Maan:bas

Dadi: everyone is fine, & with me .. patted Geet cheek

Maan: hmmm .. i didn't asked.

Dadi: you hmmmm said everything

Adi: sir should i give add for your sectary ?

Maan: no i think i had found one.smiled

for this update

waiting for next

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