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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 8

Geet: woke up with some sound.. who is it

Meera: came in it is me Geet
Geet: kya huwa .. at his hour
Meera: sorry ..
Geet: koi baat nai
Meera: actually i was talking to dev
Geet: oh
Meera: yes he called
Geet: why is everything fine there
Meera: yes.. actually i have to fast
Geet: but he is far
Meera: but he is close to my heart
Geet: right...
Meera: sorry again..
Geet: let me make something for you
Meera: you sleep
Geet:didi...
Meera: acha chalo
Geet: made breakfast for her...
Meera; why you are taking
Geet: didi blushed i always keep

Meera: became sad.. "she has someone"

Geet: please don't make fun of me but i keep for him who i had not seen yet..
Meera: i didn't get you
Geet: didi God has written his name with me since i am born right
Meera: right
Geet: then why not to fast for him
Meera: where is he?
Geet: how i know ?must be sleeping..."maan closed eyes appear in front of her"
Meera: you have strange thinking Geet
Geet: smiled..didi.. please don't tell anyone
Meera: ok...
they both walk to their respective room
Geet: try to sleep but could not why his face came in front of my eyes.... uff babji..she roll on bed for sometime... let me paint she walk to washroom freshen up gather her things walk out
sit just out side Maan room

started her work

Maan: woke up on his time ..rub his neck... he didnt had any pain" i wish i see you first this morning"
he open his room curtains saw her sitting next to pillar .painting
She was just again & again looking up & painting on her canvas..."oh lord you listen wish.. he just stared at her while lying on bed ..she was again & again removing her curl from her face.. their was orange paint on her cheek...
Maan: sorry geet i can't stop my self now ...he took out his camera and capturer her few pictures..
he was just keeping his head on his hand looking at her ...
Geet: just check time "oh i have to go with him for job let me finish it quickly"
Maan: try to read her lips... ..he saw VED for back crawling towards her..he kneel down & closed her eyes
Ved: didi guess who i am
Maan: capture pictures...
Geet: Meera didi
Ved; smiled no

Geet: Tanu

VED: no
Geet: phir kon..grab his hand
Ved: haar gai haar gai
Geet: hug her had a laughter...
Maan: click ....smiled
VED: kissed her
Geet: thank you
VED: what are you doing: ..he took from her
Geet: it is wet wait
VED: wow i will show to mamooo..
Geet:Ved it is wet ..
Ved :ok when it will dry i will show to him..
Geet: ok he hug her she kissed his forehead
Maan:Ved i am jealous of you buddy.. walk to washroom smiled at his own thought..."i have started liking her...smiled ..MSK is liking a girl... wow.. miss GEET Jee
Geet: walk in with VED
Ved: we will play cricket after breakfast ok
Geet: beta i have to go to office
Ved: do you work?

Geet: yes

Tanu: why you have so many dolls in your room
Geet: that is for you
Tanu: you knew i was coming
Geet: yes....
VED: what is for me
Maan: open that cupboard...
VED: open there was alot of toys
Maan: liked it
VED: loved it... hug him kissed his cheek
Geet: walk to her room
VED: didi where are you going geet catch her hand
Geet: i told you i have to go for work
VED: go late lets open all this..pull her with him sat close to Maan
Tanu: what is there on your Cheek didi
Geet: where? rub her cheek
Maan:busying reading newspaper ..looking at Geet face
Tanu:wait.. she rub it & apply one Maan cheek...ha ha ha .. mamoo ko laga diya
Geet: looked Maan face with orange paint"i am sorry" hide her smile..

Geet:wait let me bring tissue

Ved: wait i will clean...he grab Geet duppata and clean his face
both just looked at each other...
Tanu; came in with her painting "didi you made this?"
Ved: it is mine.. try to pull it from her...
Geet: tanu beta it is wet.. leave it let it dry..
Ved: didi dekho it is mine
Geet:trying to stop them
Maan: just got up... took it from them .. Geet lost her bal as he took it from her hand too.. grab her from one hand... "bas"
Both made long face
Geet just hold his shirt... he made her stand properly... looked in her eyes.... she left his shirt..
Maan: walk to his library
VED: dekha ....how i will get from there?
Tanu: sorry
VED; take it back from mamoo
Geet: he will give you..when it will dry..or you take it yourself
VED: we are not allowed to enter it...
Geet: oh.. i will get for you or make more ..woh tou gandi see thi

Geet: walked to her room "who will take from him i will make more"

Maan : looked at the painting

,...beautiful like you.. walk out
VED: you keep it wrap his arm around his chest
Maan: what?
Tanu: painting
Maan: ok
VED:didi will make more for us..
Maan: smiled i will take that too from you .. walked to his room as his shirt has all paint mark

to be cont ..hope you guys liked it .....dont forget to comment or press like button ..if you want pm add me as buddy
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update...loved it...
awesome....nice scenes
do keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
cute update.........but want a long long long longgggggg one next time..............i love this ff very much..........its so quite romantic ff....plzzzzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vinithaa

cute update.........but want a long long long longgggggg one next time..............i love this ff very much..........its so quite romantic ff....plzzzzzzzzzz update soon

dear i updated all 3 ff's that why bit small part.. i know this FF is mostly liked by my readers
i never thought you guys will like it that much
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww!!! you included a KC scene...so happy! thanks nadi!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet coco

awww!!! you included a KC scene...so happy! thanks nadi!

KC for ?????? my meter is out after 3 updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww so sweet just loving the relationship between geet and ved it's sweet and the paintings lovely just continue soon as this ff is really cute 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
soooo unknwly Geet is fasting for Maan tat sounds great
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Posted: 14 years ago
truthfully ur ff is one of my fav
i jst love this ff
there is somtething that tugs
at my heart strings
i have not found out yet
but i will tell the moment
i will determine wht it is
hopefully ur r doin well and
the fever have gone away
still take rest and when ever
u get time pls update this
ff first
naddiya26 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dreaminvincible

truthfully ur ff is one of my fav

i jst love this ff
there is somtething that tugs
at my heart strings
i have not found out yet
but i will tell the moment
i will determine wht it is
hopefully ur r doin well and
the fever have gone away
still take rest and when ever
u get time pls update this
ff first

this ff is very close to my heart. i liked all my ff's but this has a special place.i am very happy that my readers are liking it .its story is very different from serial... their love is innocent...or their feeling for each other attracting readers..
3 updates means i am fit😆

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