MAYUR FF...Unexpected Magic.

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Rumki

@rumki34

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Posted: 14 years ago

#361

res
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awesome update
but I am afraid what reality waiting 4 them

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#362

Awwwww Nupur's nervousness was sooooo cuteeee😃

Mayank was enjoying teasing her...and I love the close comfort they have gotten into.....😃😃

You wrote the part so well😃😃

Okay i hope reality does not mean that this closeness will fade away....i hope it increases and they become DO DIL EK JAAN😳😳

Waiting for some very mayurlicious moments soon...😃

Loved it😃😃

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@DhanakZ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#363

oH ITS SO LOVELY.BEAUTIFUL AND CUTE UPDATE .i LOVED IT SO MUCH.

u REALY CREAT A MAGIC DEAR.

tHANKS FOR pM AND UPDATE SOON.

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459718

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Posted: 14 years ago

#364

Hey Mehak

Congrats on the 50 pages.

Coming to the part, Nupurs nervousness was the cutest for me, she was shy and then M kept on teasing her. How adorable.

I'm loving their comfort with each other, its superb.

And whats with the last line...."reality waiting for them?"now which reality is that? Mehak not fair, they just confessed and now something is going to happen. Please whatever it is, i hope they can come across it together holding each others hands.

Loved it. Waiting for another one.

Sajjal

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sriravali

@lovely.ravs

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Posted: 14 years ago

#365

hey loved u r update......
cute
lovely......... 😊

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umaima

@cutiepie12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#366

👏oh gr8 so dis wd da final unexpected magic loved each n every description of urs....u truely r no1 in writing os n ffs👏

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Rabiah Samiullah

@Rabiah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#367

AWESOME!!!
Loved Nupur's sudden nervousness.... so cute..😛

n Mayank teasing her.. n unable to stop looking at her ..
awww double cute..😃

I loved These lines esp...👍🏼
M..good morning princess..
.....M..ok before i get lost into ur beauty...
M...ku k ab tum cutee nahi rahi...meri princess ban gayi ho...
He gently gave her a peck on her cheek..and she blushed... 😳....SO SWEET...

That last part.. about reality awaiting... uh oh ... sounds a bit scary.. i hope nothing too drastic happens...
Cannot wait for part 14....

update soon... 😍 WAITING DESPERATELY...
and thanks soooooooooooo 🤗much for the PM....

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CONGRATS ON 50+ PAGES!!!!!
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Auroni

@Auroni.92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#368

I just read the last two parts...Its a big WOW from me...Beautiful, mesmerizing, enchanting aur captivating tow tumhari story hai...Its so pure and serene...
I wz so lost in their confession...feeling the love...Seems all the emotions surrounded by me...The magic has begun...
Now im waiting for the reality...
cont soon...