Marriage 2- Writer's note on pg. 3 - Page 8

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hey Vertika.....U did sooo much.....I mean saari yaadein taaza kar diya....and I must thank you for that!! In fact main na tumhe specially iss fi9c ke liye thanks karna chahti hu....this has been such a sweet light-hearted.....romantic fic....ki jab bhi padho....face pe ek smile aa hi jati hai.....its has been a gr8 job done by you!! 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

nice post dear.
mein phir se ohi memory mein chali gayi.
thanks for posting it.

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

sab se pahle congo...for ur new thread...

thanks a lot Priya jee 😊 😊 😊

toh yeh last part tha...is beautiful fic ka...perfect gift par Suhana...!!! voh zindagi bhar yaad rakhegi...teri is gift ko...
I hope so, kyounki mere liye bhi ye ek special fic thi. 😉 😉 😉

toh 12 din baad...dono HM se wapas aa hi gaye...ha ha ha...!!! teri fic end honewali thi...sayad isiliye itni jaldi aa gaye...varna...yeh dono toh vohin rah jate...ha ha ha...
Fir vahi pe na jaane kitne honeymoon aur mana lete. 😳 😳 😳

Mansi ka teasing scene bhi baht achha tha...aur party bhi...!!! is bahane naye mehmano se bhi mulakat ho gayi...!!! beautiful names...aur raj ke bachhe bhi bade pyare hain...
bacche pyaareto honge hi mom dad pyaar ki nishaani jo hain dono.

ab naina ke naye xperiment ke bare me kya kahun...??? blushing ke alawa aur kuch nahi kah sakti...!!! naina ka magazine padhne se Raj faide me raha...ha ha ha...
ab vo har roj Naina ko ek mew magzine laa k dena start kar dega. 😆 😆 😆

morning scene bhi MAST tha...!!! abhi ne achhi khinchai ki...aur bichare raj ki halat kharab thi...
Jab itne der me so k uthenge to koi bhi khichai karega. 😆 😆 😆

HM ke pics bhi baht achhe the...!!!
thanks 😃 😃 😃

toh is fic ko akhiri salam dene ka waqt aa hi gaya...!!! par sach kahun...toh khubshurat chizain kabhi khatam nahi hoti...voh toh suruwat hoti hai...ek nayi khubshurat kahani ki...
Sahi kaha, 👏 👏 👏 but ab mai khush hoon ki jis ko start kiya tha us ko finish bhi kar saki mai. 😛 😛 😛

ab cont soon nahi kahungi...aur na hi tujhe ek aur naya fic likhne k liye kahungi...!!! ab tu yeh soch rahi hogi...ke maine aisa kyoun kaha...hai na...??? toh madam...main aisa isiliye nahi kahungi...kyoun ki tu naye fic suru kar ke...purane fics ko ud karna bhul jati hai...!!! abhi Destiny aur Chahat...unknown desire...in sab ko bhi toh tujhe ud karna hai na...!!! plz regularly ud kar...kam se kam har week ek ud toh hona chahiye na...!!!
Sahi kaha tune,👏 👏 👏 tabhi tere is request ko dhyaan me rakhte hue maine filhaal koi new fic start nahi karne ki sochi hai untill koi do in dono me se finish nahi ho jaati hain. 😍😍😍

main is fic ko baht miss karungi...!!! kyoun ke...yeh ek aam kahani thi...jise tune Suhana k liye khaash bana diya...!!! credit tujhe jata hai...jis tarah se tune is fic ke har ek uds ko likha...aur har ud ke sath justice kiya...
Thanks a lot Priya jo bhi tum ne mere liye kiya hai abhi tak, jitna trust n support diya hai mujhe thanks word kaafi chota hai us k liye.🤗🤗🤗

thank you...VERTIKA

Originally posted by: pinka28

I was about to read your writer note at end but thought its better first I read whole of your fic as if I read it I will feel I had read the whole fic.. and u didn't want to spoil my excitement to read this

This is good opinion u should first read the updates 😊 😊 😊

Part3- mulakate

Well two meeting and both are really cute.. Rn are behaving like as they have now words to say aur their dic is steeled away.. he he.. both don't even know each other name and when naina got to know his name .. she has already decided she will call him "veer".. what a future planer waoo

This is different na as all of the people call him Raj, so she has changed that. 😉 😉 😉

best was when shalu pulled naina's leg while saying "if you want we can go away to give you privacy" and mansi was like cherry on cake "its going to be your kids and you will have to spent time"

sab k sab ek bhi mauka nahi chodte hain na dono ko pareshaan karne ka. 😛 😛 😛

Of god she actually made naina brighter then red.. but whats that raj is so engrossed in her beauty that he forgot to drive and about to met an accident..

ye ladka to gaya ab kuch aur yaad rahe tab na.😆 😆 😆

Well I am curious whether what will happen next but also happy as first time she called his name.."RAJVEER bacho"

Ab dhyaan de k nahi chaleyga to kya karegi Naina, marna thode nahi hai abhi to bachna hai na bus. 😆 😆 😆

Originally posted by: pinka28

Part4- first touch with swt fight

As they are safe ' I was just wondering what will he say for his unfocused driving.. buit he is smart ' and shaku and mansi are really good.. giving full time to them to understand each other'

This is called the main work of family. They did a g8 work by bringing both of them on shopping. 😃 😃 😃

Well the best was of course their first touch.. it was sensational.. for me just a simple touch can be as romantic as kissing' and the way you portrayed it was marvelous..

This was not the touch of a stranger it was the touch of a man who soon is going to be yours. 😳 😳 😳

and yes raj have to do something otherwise haw can he full fill his name .. so he held her hand and she was too shy '

She is feeling so much shy with him na, kyounki abhi to mile hain na. 😉 😉 😉

oh cute and nupur scene with him is amazing and also their first fake anger.. well she cute feeling jealous just out of some jokes and he is really sporting to get along with nupur tease' but he have to pay what he did so.. lest see what he will do for manaofying her

This is called the jealousy yaar, he was enjoying to talk with Noopur and obviously a girl will feel jealous when his would be will give importance to that person who is her best friend. 😉 😉 😉

Originally posted by: pinka28

Part5- fake anger

Well this upd goes for fake anger.. first naina was angry with him and he was so cute he did all his effort to ptao her and also imagined himself with her at hill station.. good yaar' and then wao alekh fake anger'well that's was also very cute'

Sab ek doosre se naraj hi ho rahe the na is part me tabhi tum ne is ka title Fake anger rakha hai. 😛 😛 😛

And yes song selection was marvelous.. both songs .. first one is my fav because its on JUHI.. she was my first fav heroin... I guess because of her smile,her smile is just so vibrant that whenever I used to see her I couldn't be able to stop myself from smiling.

She is also in one of my fav. actress and next thing is this song is related to SRK and he is my fav too.😉 😉 😉 No one used this song in fic so i used it here. 😊 😊 😊

after her my fav actress name kept on move from to other.. but yes rk is always the first and most probably last male lead for me who engrossed me ever..i guess it also because of his best smile.........

yes it's a nice reason too. 😉 😉 😉

Originally posted by: pinka28

Part6- special day

Well finally the special day of their life is came.. and yes bride dress is really good..

Yes they r now paritally connected with each other. 😉 😉 😉

but somehow I don't like tux for raj.. when it come to marriage or this type occasion I would love to buy Indian style even for groom..

Ok but i don't want to choose sherwaani as i am fed up with that, all uses sherwaani.😆 😆 😆 That suits in wedding only.

but I like that's saree so much.. nupur would surely look awesome if she has ever got the chance to wear it . . .

Yeah that will be beautiful when she will wear that. 😳 😳 😳

again song is really good. And yes I like the way mansi asked naina to look at raj.. so swt ..and applaud to you for that .

thank u 😃 😃 😃

and alekh and nupur pair is looking awesome and yes theirs dance too. well hope alekh will able to say his heart to nupur

kahega to hai hi ab sharab bhi pee li hai to kehna hi hai. 😛 😛 😛

and yes I like its ending scene where naina's hair entangled with raj button and he was just smiling and enjoying her so close to him.

Originally posted by: pinka28

Part7- confusion with understanding

Again a marvelous ud ' loved it how alkeh confessed his love for nupur and also their closeness. Finally he spoke out his heart

Yes he did that finally, kab tak chupa k rakhta sab kuch andar? 😆 😆 😆

and yes raj is also so cute.. he can't even wait for 3 months.. is this the same person who use to run away from marriage' and the aman helped him .. I loved it.. and raj is so cute while talking to her '

Ab kaise karega intezaar, pehle koi nahi tha na ab to koi hai to it's not that easy to resist. 😉 😉 😉

How cleverly he asked her number wao.. and best was when she said she believe him.. well it was obvious as they are going to marry in which exchanging number is not a big deal but still the way she said it so cute.

Yes an automatic believe has been appeared here and now they can be close soon in their relationship. 😃 😃 😃

And Alekh what should I say about him .. he such a stupid that eh didn't even understand nupur feeling of last night and thought she is running away.. hope he sort out his confusion soon.

Yes this will be sorted out soon when Noopur will be back in his life. 😊 😊 😊

Originally posted by: pinka28

Part8- romantic episode

I don't think I do have to say anything more.. the title I thought for that episode is saying everything.. I loved it whole .. whether its raj reaction on naina's three special words or his way of coming directly in her house ......... his hug or his kiss.. his guilt of crossing some limits of kissing her or his care for her feelings.. her understanding for his guilt or her gesture of surrendering herself in his feelings.......

I just loved it.. but still alekh is gone case until nupur is back..he he

Originally posted by: pinka28

Part9- confession

Well finally our alekh's tension is over as his nupur is back.. and yes shalu is too supporting ' she knows this the he loves her..

Good bhabhi na, pyaar k maamle me kaafi intelligent hai 😉 😉 😉

the way you portrayed his scene when she came back and found out about alekh marriage proposal .. I loved it also his confession and her acceptance of his love......

thanks a lot jee 😉 😉 😉

apparently there was no song this time.. but I didn't felt it was not there .. as AN scene in room was so magical that I felt a soft music was playing in background.. and for that you deserve a big applaud..