MayUr FF: I Thee Wed (Ch. 13 - Pg. 105) 12/06/2013

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-sam-

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Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Oye meri Behena 🤗

Lo main aagayi... Pata bhi hain, kitne paapad belne pade 🤓

I was busy in my *other stuffs* 🤣

so couldnt comment earlier..

Sorry...... ( If my comments matter 🤔)

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I love this, I love this, I love this!!!!! 😳

The relationship is amazing! Tere jaisa yaar kaha....

Wow, its all so exciting na! I am so excited now.... 😍 🤪

Sense of humour, sarcasm, is brilliant!

Abhi detail me comment nahi kar sakti! 😳😊

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P.S.- Ab jaakar, kuch padle.. kabhi kabhi aa jaana!

Baadme, me April me aa jaana...

only 7 months.....

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya
Akki.. I wonder if the introduction is so nice.. what about the chapters ahead..Awee!!😳

Gosh.. why didn't u meet me earlier? Kismat! *sighs dramatically* even I would have made such a list.. LOL.. but srsly.. Nupz calling him a geek and skirt chaser, cracked me up... and understanding that thing with eyes... she had to remind herself of being a girl.. 😆 Ah! yes. Sometimes she just loses herself too much into this friend of hers that she forgets about these things. Nupur is rough and speaks her mind..

You have a superb sense of humor... Great update Thanks di..Goood to know you enjoyed! 😊

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Originally posted by: mangalorian

neat update...loved their conversations...keep up d gud work

Thanks hun!!

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Originally posted by: phoenixgirl
loved it!!

Thank you so much!!

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Originally posted by: samiralovemayur
Aki it was simply amazing update hun loved it to core thanks 4 d pm

Thanks a lot samira!
I am glad you like dit..

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Originally posted by: TheLioness
AK!! 🤗
I loved it. No other words to say it. I simply loved it.

You write amazingly well.

Ah! Nidz!😳
So very glad that you are enjoying this story!! 😊

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: -sam-
Oye meri Behena 🤗

Lo main aagayi... Pata bhi hain, kitne paapad belne pade 🤓

I was busy in my *other stuffs* 🤣 And whats this other stuff? I am confused??

so couldnt comment earlier..

Sorry...... ( If my comments matter 🤔) HEY WHATS WITH ALL THE PEOPLE IN THE WORLD SAYING THIS? ofcourse comments matter. If not for them, why would i be writing here. id rather just write for myself...

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I love this, I love this, I love this!!!!! 😳
The relationship is amazing! Tere jaisa yaar kaha....

Wow, its all so exciting na! I am so excited now.... 😍 🤪
Sense of humour, sarcasm, is brilliant!
Abhi detail me comment nahi kar sakti! 😳😊
________________

P.S.- Ab jaakar, kuch padle.. kabhi kabhi aa jaana!
Baadme, me April me aa jaana...
only 7 months.....

Good to know you enjoyed it..

Its not seven months. Only 5.5 months. daraya mat kar..

Aur abhi mera break time hai...!!😊

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: Auroni.92
It wz the best chapter of dis FF...👏
Thnx for the pro-cons list part...Now i can use it for my marriage...😆😆
The blend of seriousness and humor wz just perfect...
Also the cracky adjectives u used for mayank wz damn funny...
Loved this update...
Cont soon...and plz also update AYNIL... 👍🏼

Thank you so much hun!!
Pro con list, yea! i would suggest you rather go for sensibility than this craziness. 🤣
Glad you enjoyed!!
AYNIl..erm lets see.. I am not promising on that front. I just dont seem to be able to write..😊

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Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi
hey!!!

awesome part....especially this part is awesome...their comfort level is really amazing...n such frndships are really wonderful...

their pro-cons list was nice😊...its nice to see such an close frndship..that they r u serious a sec n in the next sec they are laughing over a joke cracked....😊

u r an awesome writer...u write everything in perfect mixture...readers like me dont feel offended anywhere,...it feels amazing to read

do continue soon...waiting eagerly to read the next part...😊

divya

Hey!
Thanks a lot hun! I am glad you enjoyed it..
will continue soon!!

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Originally posted by: priya_27_23
awesome part dear.....................

Thank you hun!! 😉
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Originally posted by: anjus_kp
awesome, amazing part ak
u have an amazing writing style.
just outstanding.
continue sooooooooooon.

Thanks hun!
i am glad you can connect with my writing style!!

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Originally posted by: Ayesha.Ization
Your FF is brilliant so far, Akki. I enjoy reading your FFs :-)
Do update the other two FFs of yours also.. and this one too :)

Aye!!😃
Will update soon girl..
And glad you are enjoying it..

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi
This story is very very close to me ,because it reminds me of a couple whom I know very well in real life. 😊 Oh ya!! *wakes up in realisation* 😆

Apart from the obvious differences due to the rules of the society where we and you are brought up and secondly the gap b/w the different generations we fall into (You know what I meant, we already discussed it,rt?) - its more or less same ,atleast till this third chapter.. I doubt its going to be the same further...though..But lest see.. You never know of the coincidences....

Waiting for next chapter to verify whether you are really stalking them or not 😆 Oh! stalker yea! 😎

Jokes apart ,CN - what makes this story more special is its YOU who writes it 👍🏼 Awe now!!😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳(okay i didnt blush so much actually!! )😆

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#176

simply outstanding....love their comfortability level.....................

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prerna_agrawal

@prerna_agrawal

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#177

hey just read all the three parts.......superlike............ its really amazing....... frm where do u get such freakingly awesome ideas???.......... really an awesome ff...... do update soon..........n thnx for ur pm............

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komal samdariya

@dazedworld

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#178

ur were jus awsm again.......😃

yaar i so adore their frndship.......😍

it was jus wow...amazing update...........

thnks fr the pm!😊

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#179

The best part till now i guess...but i can't really say because i love every chapter soooooooooooo much😃😃😃

I love the way you have portrayed the friendship between Mayank and Nupur...a one-of-a-kind friendship...not found easily😃😃 and i am glad they got married...😃

Now what would be interesting as hell would be how they go about the marriage and how they realise that they are indeed each other's soulmates😃😃

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Beet

@Beet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#180

Akki-kins 🤗

Ok, so I am really sorry for this horribly late comment. This was in the bookmarks since the day you sent the PM and I was just not getting time to do it. =(( College and tuitions and stuff =( But I think we have telepathy coz the moment I was editing this your PM came. 😆

So, the update. OHEMGEE! This has to be like the best chapter ever.

I seriously loved everything about it ! From the start to the end. And it left me craving fo rmore, more more! *hyperexcited*

The way you described the whole thing from being shocked at it, to considering it, to setting it's conditions. It was just WOW!

These two have to be the cutest things ever! You know I absolutely loved these lines, Brilliant!

At 12 in the night, they just gave each other awkward looks. That was possibly the first time they had felt this awkward.

At five minutes past twelve they started with the uncomfortable smiles At 10 minutes past twelve, they were bored of the silence and at 11^th minute, the past ten years of comfiture had come back bringing them back to their own elements.

These lines actually show as to how their friendship cannot be deterred by anything and come what may! And when they discussed everything about this possible idea of marriage, I loved the conversation to bits. And especially Nupur's part 😳😆 And how Mayank kept writing everything down 😆

So, the pros have currently outnumbered the cons. Meant to be! *Ok, so I sound cheesy🤣*

But the best part has to be the the end thoughts of Nupur. The way she truly described her feelings and her thinking. Absolutely well written Akki! Bravo!

and I don't need to comment on your writing skills since they are already SOOO good!

This was truly a masterpiece chapter Akki! I loved it to bits <3<3

You are an immensely talented writer!!

And now, I want you to keep up this pace and update regularly 😃

Love ya <3<3<3<3

Daania