MayUr FF: I Thee Wed (Ch. 13 - Pg. 105) 12/06/2013

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Posted: 12 years ago

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PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! Don't leave us hanging :'(

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Akku

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Posted: 12 years ago

#752

Hey I am back! And as promised, I have read Chapter 2 (I had read it before but didn't comment for lack of time 😆 ) and here I am with another glorious review.

I loved this part. Seriously. I mean, their bond is so strong that I am like, "Dude! I wish I had such a friend." I was SO jealous! The way you have taken it from being indifferent to the nadir of their friendship... HATS OFF! Only YOU can pull it off so well.

Now, the dialogues... Gosh, those dialogues got me in splits!!

Especially the one where Nupur said, "I am gonna be a nun and end up with 25 cats." 🤣

And Mayank's dialogue- "I think you are gonna say 'dosti mein no sorry no thanks' now." 🤣

YOU are one effin' amazing writer!!!

Now, whenever I will feel low, I am gonna read this fiction. 😆

Btw for a person who loves angst, it is a shocker you write such amazing piece of comedy.

Off to next chapter... Comment tomorrow! 😳

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Akku

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Posted: 12 years ago

#753

Finished the third part as well. Seriously, how can you write so well is beyond me! Woman, when are you going to write a novel, hmm? I'm sure as hell waiting for that.

Coming back to the story, I simply adored the way these two bantered. The transition from the serious to the playful moments was subtly yet beautifully done. Though, my favorite line has to be-

"Of course it is. Getting married is creepy and to you is even creepier. But well, considering how creepy we both are, I think I would want to take this risk." 🤣

Plus, I loved the concept. You know, friends to life partners. Especially because you didn't do it in the cliched way- the one where the two best friends have feelings for each other, that sorta love. No. You kept both of them practical minded and it was very much an arranged marriage. Honestly? The Pros-Cons list is something that I'd have done too. 😆

Anyway. This is it for today. I'll read Part 4 and leave my comment. (I wanna savor it as long as it'll last, you know 😆).

Hasta La Vista.