FF.manneet **TREMBLE of LOVE** part 25 pg70 - Page 54

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

hay u all'.. ok i am just going out with my friends' to have a meal'. so will be late to update'.. having MAXICAN' :D u will see' my maan & geet also eats mexican heheheh thats all i am saying' will update allot of parts' soon as i am bac :D

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sorry for late one
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lov u all
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and sorry' i didn't PM anyone' so pls don't think i just didn't pm u' will m u all tonight
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HAVE FUN WITH UR MAXICAN FOOD ND THEN DO GIVES US SUM YUMMY UPDATES LOL WOULD BE WAITING 4 U😆 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Looks lik Maan dosent hav control on himself at all Well sort of not liking This Anu
Sumthg is toh wrng wit him paka
Liked the way Geet tries to understand Maan's state witout him telling her
Lets c wat happens aage
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 26


Fighting with emotion wasn't an easy task for maan... One after another.... His mussel was in pain.... It's 5 am..... He haven't slept all night.... He just couldn't remove his mind way from her.... There was something about her that kept maan........ he couldn't think.... how she is affecting him so much.....

He had a shower and sat down with his laptop.... Started working.... He looked at his watch.... 9am......

On his way at work.... He was extremely tirade.... He sat In his Mercedes... Working on the laptop.... Couldn't concentrate at all.... Wasn't the best way to start the work....

Maan: ghar bapaj calo!
Driver: ji sir....

Geet in the office.... Trying her best to call Anu..... Then she realizes no maan sir.... And she needed all this file to get signed by him.... Geet looked frustrated....
Geet: now what shall I do? Anu ko manu.... Or .... Go round mansion and get this file signed! ..... Hmm.....
Adi: what's wrong geet?
Geet: anu is angry with me.... BCs of last night dance with maan sir!
Adi: oh!
Geet: so not sure... Get this file signed.... Or talk to anu!
Adi: how about.... Take this file to mansion.... And then you can call it a day off!
Geet: that sounds perfect!

Maan sat in his room... Trying to do some work.... But just couldn't.... Heavy hedac... Due to not sleeping....

He relaxes on the bed for a minute.... But falls sleep.... After hours.... He feels pocking on the shoulder.... Here's a faint noise.....
The room.... Was dark enough... No sunlight....
Voice..... "Awww..... Sir looks.... So sweet in sleep! Per geet..... Everyone looks sweet......"
Some weird reason the word geet turned him on..... He jumps.... Wasn't sure what he was doing????? He pulls geet by hand.... In surprise.... And in matter of second.... Geet was on his bed..... While his body relaxing on her.....
Geet tries to scream..... But maan closes her mouth with his hand.....
Bothe lost in one another..... There was something.... Something that couldn't be explain.... Something both could feel..... Maan slowly removed his hand.... Stroking her bare skin..... Geet..... Was shocked at the beginning..... But then started to melt like a candle..... With his touch.....
Maan was only wearing a vest.... Geet could feel his bare shoulder.... As he slowly dug his face on one corner of her face.... It was thoughtless.... A normal physical reflex... Geet looks opposite side to give him more space.... His lips kisses her hair.... Maan puls back straight way... Sits up..... Geet also comes back to her sense.... Everything happened in just few second... Geet fails to realize, what just happened!

.... Maan cursing him self.....

Geet stands up.... Bothe embraced....
Geet: I need your sign.... On those file.... I will pop back later....
Geet runs out of his room.... Unaware.... What just happened!

Maan sat on his bed.... Extremely confused... Why did he pull her... His stupid emotion started get out of control day by day....

Geet tries to call anu..... Luckily he answers...

Geet: anu.... Anu.... Please listen to me once...
Anu: what is it?
Geet: please sorry!
Anu: no!
Geet: Extremely sorry...
Anu smiles...: fine last time....
Geet: I wil see you at home....
Anu: I have spoken to my dadi! About are engagement...
Geet: really?
Anu: yes....

Next day in the office...

Maan walks in flowed by his guard.... In his style... He still couldn't wake up from geets touch... He decided to ignore her....

Maan: Adi.... In my room...
Adi rAns in....
Maan: I am going out for 3 days...
Geet walks in....
Maan removes his gaze instenly....
Maan: will be out for 3 days.... If you need anything! Emil me! I am leaving now...
Geet: sir.... We have to go to bangloe in less then a week!
Maan: I know! He answered angrily!
Geet: sorry sir!
Maan: Adi you will go instead of me... Because idk... When I will make it back....
Adi: per....

Maan leaves... He couldn't stay a single second in front of geet.... Anything could have happened... He didn't like taking risk...

Geet: what's wrong with him?
Adi: it's Maan Sing Khurana! Unpredictable!
Geet: so to hi!
Bothe laughs…




hay you all… sorry for late update… hop u like it… i will pm… once i finish updating

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ty for all those lovely comments

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do leave some more

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow first to comment....

lovely update...
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Posted: 14 years ago

there is a problem with this page…… here is the link of my new therad

all the update will be on my new thread….

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/34937918



part 27


Later on that day geet mets up with anu and then straight to maans mansion...

Dadi: mera pota arahi.... Dev!
Geet: so sweet... How many pota do you have?
Dadi: 3... Maan, Dev and Anurag....
Geet looked at her in shock... ( it can't be my anu.... He would have mentioned! when.... Hmm..... Na... Not him)
Dadi: Dev and Merra is planning to get married...
Geet: owo.... Double surprise and happiness Dadi!
Dadi: I know... And look at maan.... He went out of country... Have to be this time!
Geet: don't worry dadi... Ham hi na...
Dadi smiles...

Few days have passed... Maan ignoring geet wasn't just working... He became restless day by day.... Some weird reason... He changed his mind... And decided to go to banglore with geet.... His eyes was craving for her... Just one look... One touch..... He couldn't bare....

Geet was surprised to see him there....
Geet: sir!
Maan: ha... Actually... I had to attend those meeting!
Geet: I know... I have been trying to call you for past three days.
Maan: hmm....
Bothe asks for a room. In the hotel.... And to play there luck.... There is only one room available....
Maan+ geet: what?
Maan: we will go to a different hotel!
Geet: it's 12 at night sir!
Maan: hmm....
Geet: we will take the room...
Maan: per...
Geet: it's just for tonight... We can find another twomoro....
Maan flows her...

The room was big enough for 10 people....
Geet: this room is big enough for 10 people...
Maan smiles....
Geet: seriously... People nowdays...
Maan: you get change... I will be back...

Geet changes in to her nightdress.... One bed... She looks round.... Hmm.... Well I will sleep on the sofa....
Geet sets everything up on the sofa.... Makes her self comfortable... Maan walks in...
Maan: I have orderd food...
Geet: thanks sir... I will sleep on the sofa... You can take the bed....
Maan: emm... Ehh..... I will sleep on the sofa... You take the bed....
Geet: no... It's ok... I really don't mind!
Maan: me 2!
Geet: ok... I will sleep on the sofa....
Maan: do you want to argue all night geet?
Geet dosnt say anything and walks to bed...
Food Arrives... They eat in silent....

While maan goes to washroom for change... Anu calls...

Anu: how is the trip?
Geet: fine... I really should sleep.... I have long day twomoro...
Anu: good night.... I love you...
Geet: I love you 2....

As she says I love you.... Maan walks in.... Bit curious... Who did she say I love you 2.... Far as he was concern... Nothing is going on between her and Rahul.... He became worried...

As Bothe fell sleep... Maan stared at geet... All night... He just couldn't sleep.... The word I love you... Was buzzing through his brain... Like more he wants to go way from her... More he cones close... Who does she love? She have someone in his life.... He was restless... Jealouse....
Maan had no idea when he fallen sleep... Fighting with his emotion....

Geet woke up... Found maan in deep sleep... She decides not to disturb him...

Geet: Awww he looks so sweet....

Maan woke up... Found an empty room.... No geet.... He became worried... Then found a note....

Sir I will be waiting downstairs....

Back in deli....

Anu: dadi... Why can I get married?
Dadi: your big bro needs to get married fast!
Anu: it's always about him! I can't make her wait any longer... Or I can stay way from her... I moving back to marriage after USA!
Dadi: but... You have to understand the situation...
Anu: I don't care... If you don't agree... We will get married without you...
Dadi: anu! I never said no... You just have to wait...

Banglor....

Maan comes down... Finds geet waiting'



there is some problem with my page 1' pls help

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update..waiting to read more ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yay!!! You updated🥳
was waiting since a long time😳

Loved the update😊
Maan has started losing control wenever geet is in front of him. Initially, used to stare him but he gets tempted to touch her😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
some stupid problem with my page 1…. i cant update
W*F??
help gys
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg! anu is Maan's bro :O :O
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Posted: 14 years ago
Anurag is Maan's younger brother, my guess was right :|
WOnder what will happen now?😲

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