Tishnagi..New FF...Geet and Maan....Part-3..Pg-14 - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rosette80

Ufff!!sach mein jaan yeh kya tha!!mujhe rula diyee dil se!! Soooo touching and amazing! Truly as all says wish soooo tht this happens soon wher maan sabke saamne geet ki haath pakadke uske banaonge!

Hiii dear....thank u soooo muchhhhhhh tht u love this part....jaan yeh sirf ek pyaar ka nazrana tha..jo hum Geet me dekhna chahte hai lekin dekh nahi pate....i m hoping tht it was tears of joy rather than pain....i knw i m wishing too ki Maan sabke samne Dev ke saamne kahe ki Geet sirf uski hai...cant wait to see tht happening...but ur comment truly touched me...ple keep reading n commenting...thankssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very well written. I wish this really happened in the show. It won't happen now under the circumstances. May be later.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pannetcomp

Very well written. I wish this really happened in the show. It won't happen now under the circumstances. May be later.

hey dear..thank u so much for this sweet comment....i knw we all wish tht to be happen in real Geet too...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part-3

After the engagement, Geet is standing with Maan and Dadi.
Geet: Dadi…ab raat kafi ho gayi hai aur aap bhi thak gayi hogi ..aap jake aaram kijiye main bhi chalti hoon outhouse…

Maan: Geet tum..

Before Maan can say anything Dadi raised her hand to stop him …Maan looks at Dadi in surprised way because this is the first time Dadi has cut him in middle of saying.

Dadi: Maan aap kuch kahe usse pehle hum kuch kehna chahte hai…humne soch liya hai ki aapki aur hamari Geet ki shaadi agle hi hafte hogi …

Geet and Maan look at each other in shock and than they turn to Dadi with wide eyes open..

Dadi: aap log to aise hairaan ho rahe hai jaise ki main aap dono ki zabardasti shadi karane ja rahi hoon…aur yeh faisla lene pe bhi aap dono ne muje mazbur kiya hai…aap humne dekh liya ki aap ek dusre ke kitne kareeb hai ki aap ek dusre ko ek pal ke liye bhi akele nahi chod sakte….so Maan agle Sunday ko aapki aur Geet ki shaadi hone ja rahi hai…Geet aapko koi problem to nahi na…

Geet: jee…jee nahi Dadi…

Maan: Dadi..main kuch aur batane ja raha tha aur aapne..

Dadi: aap kya bolne ja rahe the woh bhi hum jante hai…Maan aap hamare chahite pote hai …to hum aapke dil ki baat kaise nahi samaj payenge…aap Geet ke liye kitne befikar rehte hai woh hum jante hai…aur isi liye humne tai kiya hai ki jab tak aap dono ki shaadi nahi ho jati Geet hamare saath hamare kamre me rahegi…aur haa hume pata hai ki abhi Geet yahi kahegi ki isme muje taklif dene ki kya zaroorat hai lekin yeh sab main Geet aur hamare khandan ki maryada ke liye kar rahi hoon kyunki Geet ke pyaar ne to Maan ko bilkul pagal kar diya hai…kyun Maan

Maan looks at Geet and than looks down in embarrassment..Dadi puts her hand on his head and looks at Geet..

Dadi: Geet hum agar aapko laakho bar bhi sukhriya kare to who bhi kam hai kyunki aapne muje jine ki dusri waje hamare Maan jo hamesha hasta tha who hume lauta diya hai…hum aapka ehsaan zindagi bhar nahi bhul payenge…

Dadi folds her hands infront of Geet…Maan looks at dadi and comes behind her hugging her from back looking at Geet …Geet looks at Maan and than holds Dadi's hands in hers..

Geet: Dadi aapko hume sukhriya karne ki koi zaroorat nahi kyunki humne jo kuch bhi kiya hai who to kuch bhi nahi jo Maan ne hamare liye kiya hai…sach to yeh hai ki aaj Maan ki di huyi zindagi main ji rahi hoon warna main to kabki mar chuki hoti..

Geet looks at Maan and gets flashback of how Maan saved her in Hoshiyarpur…

Geet: lekin dadi aaj Maan aur aapki waje se jo hume sanman mil raha hai use to hum kabhi bhul nahi payenge aur uske liye main aaj se aapki karzdar ho gayi hoon…mere pass aapko ya aapke pote ko dene ke liye to kuch bhi nahi lekin aaj main aapse itna vaada kar sakti hoon ki aaj ke bad mera jina marna sab Maan ke saath juda hai…jab tak Maan muje izzat nahi denge tab tak hum unse kahi durr nahi jayenge…hamesha uske saath rahenge…

Maan: aur Maan kabhi bhi apni Geet ko kahi jane ki izzat dega hi nahi…

Dadi looks at both of them and smiles…

Dadi: lagta hai aap dono ke beech main ab sandwich ho rahi hoon…Maan hum aapko Geet ke pass aadhe ghante ka waqt de rahe hai tab tak aap Geet ko leke Outhouse me jaiye aur unka saman hamare kamre me la dijiye….

Maan: jee Dadi..

Maan moves back and looks at Geet while holding her hand and walks towards the entrance…

Dadi: Maan…

Maan and Geet turn back and look at Dadi.

Dadi: 1 bajne me 30 minute baki hai ….1 bajne pe hume Geet aur unka saman dono chahiye hamare kamre me ….thik hai Geet beta..

Geet: jee dadi..

Dadi laughs at both of them and goes to her room …

Geet: Babaji pata nahi Dadi kya kya soch rahi hogi hamare bare me …ab aap chaliye bhi…abhi to muje mera saman bhi pack karna hai…kitna kam time diya hai Dadi ne….chaliye na..

Geet drags Maan towards the Out house….

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Geet and Maan both enter in Geet's Room….Geet goes to her closet and gets her bag out and starts to dump all her clothes and other belonging in her bag…Maan is standing against the door looking at her…she is trying to put all her stuff in it while putting her hair behind her ears each time she looks down…Maan just starts to come forward towards her and holds her from the back resting his head on her shoulder…geet gets scared of his sudden movement..

Geet: Maan …yeh..yeh aap ….

She tries to free herself but he holds her more tightly…

Maan: jitna chudane ki koshish karogi utna aur waqt ke liye tumhe pakad ke rakhunga aur waise bhi abhi abhi tumne dadi ke samne kya kaha ki tum muje chodke kahi nahi jaogi to phir kyun ab jana chahti ho mujse durr…

Geet: nahi who…waha pe Dadi hamara …intzaar kar rahi hai..

She is trying her best to control herself and finding hard to get words out of her mouth…

Maan: usme abhi bhi 15 minute baki ki …aur yeh 15 minute sirf meri hai…haa to kya keh rahi thi aap Dadi ke samne ki aap hume chodke kahi nahi jayegi….

Geet puts her hands on his which are resting on her waist…

Geet: hmm…sach hi to kaha maine…

Maan: pata hai Geet aaj main bahot khush hoon kyunki ab muje yakeen ho gaya hai ki tum muje chodke kahi nahi jaogi kyunki aaj tumne dadi se jo vaada kar liya aur….

Geet: aur kya Maan…

Maan takes her hand in which she is wearing engagement ring…He moves her hand near his lips and kisses the finger which she is wearing the ring…geet closes her eyes and feels her heart is melting …

Maan looks at her and smiles whispering..

Maan: aur sagai..

Geet opens her eyes and looks at Maan

Maan: Geet aaj Sagai to ho gayi aur maine Dadi ke saamne bhi kuch nahi pucha lekin iska yeh matlab nahi ki main sabkuch bhul gaya..ab batao aisi kaun si waje thi jot um Sagai chodke waha itne durr chali gayi thi aur tum aise ro rahi thi jaise ki tumne kuch galat kiya hai..

Geet is shocked to hear his words…

Geet: who Maan main….woh..

Maan: who main kya geet..

Geet: Maan…ab who baat mayne hi nahi rehti kyunki ab hamari sagai jo ho gayi hai aur agle hafte to hamari shaadi ho rahi hai…aur abhi abhi aapne kaha na ki main aapse kabhi alag nahi ho sakti…to bas who ek kamzor lamha tha meri zindagi ka jise main kuchad ke aage badh chuki hoon aapka saath deke…ab who kya waje thi who ab mayne hi nahi rehta….

Maan: thik hai agar tum kehti ho to sahi hi hoga lekin ..lekin jab bhi tumhe lage ki tum muje who waje bata sakti ho tab tum muje aake bata dena aur main vaada karta hoon ki waje chahe kuch bhi ho na hi main tumse naraz honga na hi tumse gussa…

Geet smiles at him..

Geet: Gussa hamesha aapke naak pe rehta hai…thoda sa chedo aur jwalamukhi ki tarah bahar aata hai…

Maan: GEETTTTTTTTTTT…..

Geet: dekha…main sahi hi kehti hoon…gussa meri suatan honewali hai..

Maan smiles at her and than turns her around….he kisses her forehead and hugs her tight…

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On the other side, Meera is trying her best to calm Dev..

Meera: Dev…shayad humne bahot dair kar di…jab tumhe pata hi tha ki who Geet hi hai to tumhe Maan ko yeh sachchai bata deni chahiye thi ki who wahi ladki hai jiski waje se tumne uski zindagi barbad kar di…

Dev: maine jaan bujke kuch nahi kiya tha…who us waqt muje…muje paise ki zaroorat thi aur agar Bro muje ghar se na nikalte to nahi main kabhi dusri shaadi karta nahi kabhi Geet ki zindagi barbad karta..

Meera: tum apni galti Maan pe dalne ko koshish mat karo aur waise bhi shaadi to tumne ki lekin kisne kaha tha ki uske saath tum shaadi ki raat bhi manao…..

Dev looks at meera in shock…

Dev: tumhe kisne kaha….

Meera; because you damn it…Geet is pregnant with your child….

Dev looks at Meera not believing what she is saying…

Dev: nahi aisa nahi ho sakta….Geet aur mera bacha…

Meera: haa tumhara bacha….

Dev: who bro ka bhi to..

Meera: tumhara dimag bigad gaya hai ya to tum bahot hi chalu kisam ke insaan ho jo apni galti apne bhai pe dal rahe ho jo bhai jisne tumhara paap bhi apna liya hai…..

Dev: WHATTT….bro ko sab pata hai ki yeh bacha kisi aur ka hai aur phir bhi…

Meera: haa kyunki Maan tumhari tarah nahi….unka dil bahot hi bada hai…who hamesha apni galti ko maannewale ko maff kar dete hai….tumpe apne paap ko confess kar lo…

Dev: haa yeh thik rahega waise bhi jabse maine Geet ko apni zindagi main laya hoon tabse use bhul nahi pa raha …isse achcha yeh hai ki main Geet aur mere bache ko apna loon….aur Naintara ko chod doon….use Divorce de doon…

Meera: Dev tum puri tarah se pagal ho gaye ho….jis bro ne aaj tumhe phir se is ghar me jagah di usi ka pyaar ab tum phir se chin lena chahte ho….Geet Maan se pyaar karti hai aur uski khushi tum pehle hi chin chuke ho ap us bechari se uska pyaar mat chino….

Dev: lekin who bacha mera hai….

Meera; who bacha tumhara tha Dev….tha..lekin ab who Maan ka ho gaya hai kyunki Geet us bache ki maa hai aur jiski Shaadi ab Maan se honewali hai….

Dev: shaadi honewali hai lekin huyi to nahi…main apne bache ko kisi aur ka nahi hone de sakta aur uske liye muje Bro se lad ke bhi Geet ko wapas apni patni banana pade to yeh bhi main karunga….

Meera: kitne swarthy ho gaye ho tum….aisi soch to koi ghatiya insaan ki ho sakti hai…..aur main aise ghatiya insaan ke saath nahi reh sakti…..aaj se mera tumse koi vasta nahi….aaj se main sirf Maan aur Geet ki dost hoon…aur main bhi dekhti hoon ki tum kaise Geet ki zindagi dubara barbad karte ho…

Meera leaves the place in anger…Dev looks at the door in frustration and sits down holding his head…

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Posted: 14 years ago
that is really awesome....i am so loving it alll....
great update...maaneet scenes are so adorable...
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
Argh!!!
That DEV!!! 😡
I am gonna kill that 🤬
Continue soon dear!!!
Dying to read more!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Devvv.. Dont u dare to com back in Geet's Life...
Loved it dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
pls don't tell me they not gonner get married pls do something idon't want the truth come out before Maaneet get married pls great update pls cont soonnnnnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
dev is such a cheapo.... hate him... luved maneet as usual... do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
oops i hate dev!!! hope dev doesnt do smething lyk this onscreen

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