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hey ashu..nice starting....and the song sequence is beautiful....liked it....plz.con't soon....
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PART 17B - complete

armaan slipped the ring on her finger then captured her lips in a slow and sweet kiss...feeling her...both registering the fact that this was real, they weren't dreaming...

Armaan slowly leaned back out and smiled at her

arm: i love you basket

rid: i love you too teddy



riddhima then pulled armaan back down for a more passionate kiss...as the kiss intensified riddhima could feel armaan's hands caressing her waist under her shirt, she ran her hands through his hair pulling him closer if possible...She could feel armaan slightly raising her shirt to get better access. Suddenly Armaan backs out from the kiss and bends down to kiss her stomach, slowly sucking and licking her naval making her gasp.
Riddhima fisted armaans hair pulled him up to meet her lips again and captured them yet again. again riddhima began a highly passionate kiss...during the kiss armaan could feel riiddhima trying to ae her clothes off.immeadiately he backed away making her confused

arm: shona stop trying to take your clothes off

rid: kyunnn? i thought ki you wanted this too?

arm: hmm chata toh hoon, i want you so badlly only i know how i'm controlling myself par at the same time i want our first night to be special, i want to wait for our suhaag raat...main nahin chati ki shaadi se pehle hum utna door jaaye...

riddhima smiles at her super sweet fiance. In this day and time only armaan would say something like that. that's why he was perfect. that's why she loved him...

arm: toh ab i just want to hold you, feel you near me while we sleep... please?

rid: i love you teddy

arm: i love you too basket i love you too

Armaan and riddhima fall asleep laying in each others arms...

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Riddhima wakes up in the morning to see armaan's face hidden in he crook of her neck, and arm wrapped around her waist and a leg wrapped around hers. One of her arms were wrapped around his. He looked so cute sleeping with a huge smile on his face. Riddhima knew she had to get up and somehow get to her apartment before the other guys get up and catch them, but she didnt have the heart to wake armaan. he looked so peaceful. she could tell he hadnt slept properly in a while. What was she to do? She couldnt help but smile and close her eyes and enjoy the moment, laying there in his arms...hmm she wondered if she would be walking up to this every morning after they got married....she couldnt help but blush at that tought....

suddenly riddhima feels a wet trail of kisses on her neck

rid: armaaan? tum jag re the?

armaan mumbles with his eyes still closeed and his lips still on her neck

arm: hmm nahin mere pyaare biwi to be, i woke up when you were blushing dreaming about our married life...

rid: kya? lekin tumhe kaise...

arm: tumhare baare mein toh sab kucch pata hai jaanu, aur no i dont plan on getting up anytime soon and no i dont care if everyone catches us...mujhe mere hone wali mrs ke saath rehna hai bas...

rid: armaan please dekho jitne jaldi you get up utne jaldi we can tell everyone ki we want to get married

arm: waise i was thinking ki why dont we just get married right now? lets just run away to a mandir and do it! phir hum sab se kehdenge ki humne shaadi karliya hai!

rid: armaan pagal ho kya? mujhe sab ke saath ek traditional shaadi chahiye!

arm: kya?! *jumps up* tum sab se shaadi karogi?

rid: uff buddhu! *gets up too* mera matlab yeh tha ki i want everyone to be at our wedding.

arm: ohh woh matlab tha...hehe acha theek hai ab kya karna hoga mujhe?

rid: well mummy papa se toh baat karna hoga...in fact they are coming in town today toh...

arm: hmm lagta hain kisko bohat jaldi hain shaadi ke liye......

riddhima blushes and says armaaann

arm: oyee hoyyyee

rid: ab chalo utho,i'm going to go and try to get in my apartment, phir i'll bring the girls here toh we can tell everyone?

arm: hmm, jaldi ana shona

Soon enough riddhima had brought the girls over and armaan had woken the boys

rah: stop fumbling around will either of you tell us ki kya hua?

arm: woh...

rid: um kya haina...

musk: OMG! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

all turn towards muskaan who is staring at ridz screaming and jumping up and down all excited!

mus: OMG HE PROPOSED! OMG RING TOH SOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL ! OMG OMG OMG OMG ARMAAN YOU SLY DOG!

atul: acha muski ek minute first armaan and riddhima what were you trying to say....WAIT WHAT?

riddhima was looking down blushing while armaan's state was no better...

they were attacked by hugs from their super excited friends

their friends wanted to know how the proposal went down but ridz just blushed and armaan said

arm: well woh tooh ek secret hain...sorry woh share nahin karsakta lekin haan shayad dus ya 20 saal baad batunga

rid: armaaan! *hides herself in his chest*

maan: hmm matlab ki something

geet: super naughtyyy oooooo

anji: kya? what naughty? armaan! keep in mind ridz meri behen hain okay? shaadi se pehle no naughty!

arm: yes maam! i'll try! lekin no promises...

anj: waise mom dad just called...they reached angad bro's place... toh kab milna hain aur officially puchna hain?

arm: actually aj hi...woh as soon as possible...i was thinking should we go to angad bro's house? or treat everyone out to lunch? i mean kripa bhabz is pregnant and we dont want to impose....

anj: hmm waise i think lets meet them at angad bro's house phir go out for lunch...

arm: haan good idea

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At Angad's house

Armaan and the gang walk in nervously, but as soon as Armaan walks in he is utterly shocked!

His eyes well up with tears and he runs and hugs someone saying "Shashu uncle! Ap kaha chale gaye the? ap mujhe bilkul bhul gaye the?"

Everyone is shocked at this!

Suddenly the man armaan is hugging says "shashu uncle woh toh sirf ek hi larka mujhe bhulate the..."

he leans back a little to look at the crying boy in his arms

sh: blue ankhien...dimples...armi beta?

arm: shashu uncle aap kaha chale gaya tha? mumma papa ka accident ke baad i looked for you...i waited for you lekin you never came?

armaan's shashu uncle hugs armaan tightly

sh: i'm sorry beta..jab tak mujhe unke maut ke khabar mile tab tak you had left with your bi...i didnt know her name toh i couldnt locate you....i tried to find you everywhere! for years i searched lekin mille nahin!

even he had tears in his eyes

suddenly a woman spoke up

"shashank, kya yeh.."

sh: haan padma...billy aur anaya ka beta armi hain....hamara armi

padma too had tears in her eyes

pad: armi, apna padu mom ko hug nahin karega? mujhe bhul gaye kya?

armaan runs from shashank to padma and starts crying harder (he almost tumbles on his way due to his injured leg, but padma hold him in time)

arm: padu mom...aap ne bhi kaise mujhe chor diya? mera sab kuch ek saath maine koh diya tha...sab kuch....

pad: shh i'm sorry beta...i'm so sorry

padma takes armaan and sits down on the sofa making armaan rest his head in padma's lap facing her stomach... he was holding her crying...

the rest of the gang was utterly confused

anji: matlab armaan

rid: humara armi hain?

anji: jo bachpan mein humse gayab hogaya tha?

rid: mera armi?

anjali and riddhima were both crying too...

riddima ran over to armaan and pulled him up and gave him a huge hug

rid: armaan tumne mujhe bata kyun nahin ki tum meri armi ho?

arm: i'm sorry basket mujhe bhi pata nahin tha ki tum meri riddhi ho...aur anji hi humare ani hain...woh we never called each other by our real names na toh mujhe kaise pata hota?

anji: stupid duffer mein bhi hoon yahaan!

armaan then hugs anji as well, then before riddhima can hug him again he hugs padma again leaving ridz a little surprised..

arm: bohat saal baad finally i feel like i'm at home...mumma ka paas...i love you padu mom...pata hain mom ke baad you were always closest to me..aur shashu uncle toh mera best buddy tha...yaad hain hamesha dad jaal jate the? kethe ke not fair mere do buddy gang up karke mujhe hi bhul gaye!

riddhima has tears in her eyes imaging how much armaan must have suffered...

sh: armi beta i'm so happy ki ab tum humme milgayee...ab we'll never leave your side...i promise

maan: okay armaan i'm utterly confused..

rah: lekin i think i understand... armaan yeh wohi haina? jab we were younger you would always talk about your best friends riddhi and ani? and their dad - your buddy your shashu uncle, and their mom you padu mom? how your families were best friends, but they moved aur before you could get their new number your parents died in that accident phir bi took you and you guys left? wohi haina?

maan: omg no way...ridzi aur anji wohi hain? aur kisiko pata bhi nahin chala?

rah: zindagi ka khel dekh...all those years ago you lost them aur ab look under what circumstances you've met?

sh: lekin what do you mean what circumstances?

arm: woh actually shashu uncle woh hum sab bohottt ache dost hain college mein...actually best friends...aur woh mein...woh actually i...

padu: kya hua?

arm: woh actually...*armaan tries to get up* ahhh ouchh

sh: kya hua?

arm: woh actually i had a small accident aur i hurt my leg pretty badly....toh its just paining...

rid: armaan i told you na, let's bring the crutch..lekin no tum kaha sunte ho mujhe? ab its paining na? uff ruko mein ek glss haldi milk lati hoon..

arm: nahin please basket haldi dood nahin...woh bohot bura hain...pleasee

rid:nahin peena hain...chalo ab ek aur shabd bhi nahin bus ek minute main aati hoon..aur bilkul hila nahin!

shashank and padma were shocked at the duo's conversation and riddhima's care for armaan. armaan dutifully listened to her and did not speak or move until she came back and sat next to him with the haldi milk. he just continued pouting and making cute faces

arm: shona please mujhe nahin chaiye..i promise ki i'll listen to everything you say lekin pleasee you know na ki its so baddd *pouts*

rid: nahin armaan ab toh peena hain...kaise theek hoge tum agar tum aisa karte raho huh? chalo ab stop making these faces it wont work this time, apna muh khulo!

armaan slightly opens his mouth and riddhima makes him drink the milk.

arm: ab bas please aur nahin...

rid: nahin teddy chalo bas thora aur, almost finished chalo piyo

arm: nahin pleaseeee

rid: armaannnn

armaan then opens his mouth and allows her to feed it to him

rid: see katam hogaya...it wasnt that bad now armaan huh?

arm: nahin it was horriblee

rid: armaan tum na bilkul bacha ho... dekho muh mein bhi milk laga hain

riddhima then wipes his bottom lip with her thumb

rid: kab baara hoga tum?

arm: woh um jab mujhe na ek chota pyaaresi angel miljaye jo mujhe papa keh kar bulayegi...tab...actually no tab bhi na you'll just have to mummy us both...*armaan pecks riddhima's cheeks forgetting where they are*

maan/rahul/atul/geet/muskaan/anji: *cough cough* guyss!

armaan and riddhima then realize that they are in front of everyone - including riddhima's parents and cousin brother and extremely hormonal pregnant bhabhi

ang: care to explain?

riddhima was so embarresed she just hid herself in her favorite hiding spot - armaans chest

arm: woh actually...um woh actually woh

sh: yes?

arm: um woh main aur riddhima woh....humekdusresebohotpyaarkartehainaurshaadikarnachatihain....

pad: armaan slow down, i didnt understand any of that..

arm: actually we all came to meet you especially because riddhima aur main..woh hum ek dusre se bohot pyaar karte hain aur shaadi karna chate hain...

sh: kya?

arm: haan, woh i love her a lotttt woh main uski bina jee nahin paunga...please?

sh: riddhima kya tum bhi armaan se...

rid: haan..i really love him papa

sh: well humme rishta manjor hain! humme atul aur armaan se zyada acha damad kaha mil sakta hain? aur jab tum dono ek dusre se pyaar karte ho toh humme kya problem? waise ek secret batao..when you were both younger toh billy and i dreamt of getting you two married one day...ab dekho unknowningly that's exactly what's happening!

They fed each other sweets and then brought up the idea of going out for lunch - which kripa was happy about as she was craving chinese!

arm: hmm jaane se pehle do you mind if i use he bathroom?

sh: of course not! go ahead

arm: basket can you show me the way?

riddhima helps armaan go upstairs to use the bathroom, but once upstairs armaan has other intentions!
He turns and pins riddhima against the wall

rid: armaan? i though ki tumhe bathroom jaana hain?

arm: nahinn toh.........*he had one arm on the wall and one around her waist* mujhe na chance nahin mila properly celebrate karne ke liye...woh tumhare mom dad man gaye aur we realized ki tum hi meri riddhi ho...itna kushi ki baat, aur woh sab tha na neeche toh mujhe akele tumhare saath celebrate karna hain...

riddhima puts her arms around his neck

rid: oh really?

armaan smiles naughtily

arm: reeeaaallyyyy

armaan then leans in and captures her lips in a hot and steamy passionate kiss.



they were so engrossed in kissing that they didn't realize how much time had passed...

soon shashank and padma began to worry...worried shashank went upstairs looking for them...

he was shocked to see them deeply engrossed in one another..




sh: armaan! riddhima!

armaan and riddhima seperate in a shock!

riid: woh pa..pa..papa..woh...

sh: chalo...niche aao...sab intezaar kar rahe hain...aur haan shaadi se pehle aisa waisa cheez acceptable nahin hain...

arm: sorry uncle...hum niche jaate hain

sh: armi beta ab toh at least mujhe papa bulao

arm: ji unc..papa............

sh: oh haan aur armaan?

arm: ji?

sh: wipe off the lip gloss from your lips before padma or angad see you...they aren't as accepting as me....

complete - pms later
Edited by ammy_ka_ashu - 14 years ago
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hey dear........the part is too good.....Awww Ammy is so caring and understanding also......try to complete the part soon.......take care............
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Part 18 - complete

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Okay final part guys => i know you will all hate me....sorryyy, will think about an epilogue maybe? idk no promises

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As they took the last round around the sacred fire, he couldn't help but let a tear escape his eyes...his dreams were finally coming true...finally he had someone in his life that was all hiis...just his...he had a family! he had love! he knew his parents and bi were watching him from somewhere and he hoped they were proud of him. he hoped they were happy for him...

as they completed the last phera riddhima hugged him tightly...she was so happy...he was finally hers and she was his...nobody could change that now...yes the bride and groom passionately hugging each other right after the pheras was a little unconventional but hey that was armaan and riddhima for you...

riddhima slightly moved back when she felt a tear on her shoulder

she wipes the tear on his face

rid: hey kya hua? tum khush nahin ho?

arm: nahin aaj mere zindagi ka sabse khushi ka din hain...finally mujhe pyaar milgaye...mujhe mera pariwaar milgaye...finally aisa lag raha hain ki even i'm allowed to be happy...yeh aasoon gham ka nahin lekin khushi ka hain

rid: armaaan tum bhi na! aisa koi karta hai kya? i mean usually shaadi mein larki ro tha hain, lekin yahaan? larka hi rorahi hai? aur woh bhi khushi ki aasoon?

arm: hey main senti type hoon okay? ab toh your stuck with me hamesha and forever!

rid: i wouldnt have it any other way jaan...

riddhima leans in and captures armaan's lips in a sweet kiss which was slowly building passion when suddenly they heard the pandit screaming ram ram ram!

In a frenzy the duo panicked realizing that all 300 guests were staring at them jaw dropped...

arm: hehe..oopps..

highly embarresed, riddhima once again hid herself in armaans chest before everyone laughed it off and came to congratulate them.

musk: you guys have a knack for forgetting your surroundings huh? hamesha sabb jaaga bas pyaar aur romance sujta hain...

rid: muski jab you fall in love na, tab you'll know...

musk: hmm pyaar...sab ke kismet main nahin hote...

suddenly they here music playing

rahul walks up to the middle of the stage and sings

Hey Ya... Hey Ya...
(Hey Ya Heeriye Sehra Baandh Ke Main Toh Aaya Re
Hey Ya Doli Baarat Bhi Saath Mein Main Toh Laaya Re) - 2
Ab Toh No Hota Hai Ek Roz Intezaar
Soni Aaj Nahi Toh Kal Hai Tujhko Toh Bas Meri Honi Re
Tenu Leke Main Javanga, Dil Deke Main Javanga - 2 (points to muskaan and holds up a ring)

atul goes and sings:
Hey Ya... Hey Ya...
Aa Keh De Zamane Se, Tu Mere Ishq Ki Hai Daastaan
Hey Ya... Hey Ya...
O Jaaniya Keh De Bahaane Se
Main Tera Jism Hoon, Tu Meri Jaan (pulls anji to dance with him)
Kuch Na Chupa (maan sings)
Mushkilon Se Milta Hai Aisa Sona Pyar
Soni Cheez Tere Jaisi Na Mujhko Na Mujhko Khoni Re
Tenu Leke Main Javanga, Dil Deke Main Javana - 2 (sings with geet)

Armaan sings:
Jaan Aise Na Tadpa Ke Dekh Le Madhbhare Andaaz Se
Hey Ya... Hey Ya...
O Jaan Tu Awaaz Ko Apni Aa Mila Ab Meri Awaaz Se (dances with ridz)
Are Haan Keh De Haan (all boys sing)
Kar Diya Hai Tune Mujhko Yun Bekaraar (ridz sings)
Maahi Keh Diya Duniya Se Main Teri Main Teri Ho Gayi Re (geet and anji sing)
Tere Naal Mein Aavaangi, Sasooral Mein Jaavaangi (muski sings to rahul making him jump with joy!)
Hey Tenu Leke Main Javanga, Dil Deke Main Javanga (rahul sings)
Hey Ya... Hey Ya... (rahul puts a ring on muski's finger)
Toh finally riddhima and armaan were married...atul and anji were engaged still as were maan and geet and now rahul and muskaan who would have guessed ki rahul and muskaan (or tom and jerryas armaan called them) secretly loved each other but neverconfessed?
After a lot of tears the newly wedded couple headed home to armaan'snew house - yes their own home...
wait no your mistaken - the tears - they weren't shed by riddhima,or her family, in fact it was armaan, atul, maan, and rahul who cried...not the girls..they were overjoyed and emotional...plus it didn't help thatin one of her moodswings kripa had thrown plates and shoes at them...
At night:
Riddhima was waiting for armaan when finally he came in...
Armaan sat down on the bed after locking their door.
he slowly removed removed her duppata from her head then took up herhands to look at her mendhi
arm: wow rang bohot dark hain! basically black!

rid: armaaan jaldi apna naam jaldi dund lo na?

arm: hmm kyun koi jaldi hain kya?

riddhima just pouts and armaan slowly stares at her palms tracing everyline

after nearly 10 minutes

rid: armaan agar tum ek minute ki ander apna naam nahin dhund leti toh main na mumma papa ke paas chale jaunga!

armaan slightly laughs and puts his finger over his name

arm: jaan maine toh apna naam bohot pehle dekhliya tha, bas yeh dekhna chata ta ki tumhare patience kitne kaam hain

rid: armaannnnn

before riddhima could finish or really even begin scolding him armaan fiercefully threw his lips over hers engaging her in the most passionate kiss they had ever shared....

The night went by with passionate steamy hot love making....the duo did not sleep a wink..woh kamre mein toh sirf pyaar hi pyaar tha....

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done! okay sorry to disappoint but i know ki this ff has some young readers so hehehe tried to keep it all at least pg13 :D and mere dosto you all know how hard that is for me! (me being a dirty corrupt mind lol)

anyways i will consider writing an epilogue but no promises....

-Ashu
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oh and p.s. if i left any question unanswered in the ff do let me know so if i decide to write an epilogue i will try and clear it up :D
Edited by ammy_ka_ashu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
reserved!!!!!!!
omg! ending it so soon?!
awwwwwwww im going to miss this ff alot
the two parts were cute && adorable!!!
( ps: i just read this ff in one go inorder to get the concept lolz)
well i just hope you put up an epilogue soon!!
i'll be waiting for it!
really loved the way you described their feelings and their way of life and
also loved AR moments alot!!!!
keep up the goodwork!
btw thanks for the pm
&& update epilogue soon ( if you could, if not then i understand)

Aahana;D
Edited by -Aahana- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiiiii
awesome updates
loved them
AR r soooooo cute
loved them
loved shanky and padma scene with armaan
loved da wedding
perfect ending
thanks 4 a wonderful ff
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey awesome part
i cant believe you finished the ff.............but it was really good.............love the ending
love the conversation between shanky, padma and armaan
they were childhood friends..........that is so sweet
loved the marriage.........it was funny how they started kissing each other at the mandap.......and then armaan teasing her by taking forever in finding his name
loved the end..................it was amazing
please do write an epilogue
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
hahaha this part made me LOL litreally! super job!
I want an epilogue!!!

Pleashh??
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome


thanx 4 the pm


update soon


Kamal

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