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Khadija

@khajju

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#201

awesmee...i think heer is actually a bit jealous of simon....who won't be...her prem with smeother girl...no way...nywayz thanks for pm...update sooon

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-SnowKid-

@-SnowKid-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#202

awesomeeeeeeeee update...........luved it..........
thnx for d pm..........update sooooooooooon

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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#203

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Hey guys thanks for such a wonderful response for my ff........its just because of you guys i have been able to come so far

Once again thanks a lot guys

I have a request to new readers please please if you want me to send you a pm regarding the updates of my ff

Please please I request you all to atleast to pm me or write at the ff thread that you want a pm regarding the ff

I have been receiving a lot of friends request but no pm regarding the pm list so please it's a request atleast pm me mentioning that you wished to be pmed for the update

Thanks a lot

topsyturvy

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Lisa

@Aymee

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#204

Hi topsyturvy,

Great update.

I am sorry about Chapter 8 that I misunderstood about Preet and Meher's marriage. I thought they were going to get married soon 😳

Writing in Heer's POV was great. I loved how Prem is teasing, calling her fat and lazy 😆, it was very cute.

I can't believe Prem has a girlfriend. 😕 I feel bad for Heer though. She has to come home late and hide in her room so there wouldn't be any conflict between her and Simon. Her documentaries obsession is very cute. I thought it was very sweet of Prem to record her show earlier.

I hope you will be able to do it Prem's POV also.

Thank you for the PM. Looking forward to your next chapter. Please do continue to PM whenever you update this FF.

Edited by Aymee - 14 years ago

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Sanjana

@harshiti8

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#205

awesome update...post the next part soon

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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: sweta2005
awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap.

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thanks a lot
will try to update in 1-2hrs or maybe tommorrow morning

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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: newt2007
Heer getting jealous

naration about simon is funny. barbie. i imanged how barbie will look in life size. how did you got htis idea?

now we'll see who falls in love first?

thanks a lot
i am glad u liked it a lot
n abt that barbie description i have someone really special who helped me with that
u will see soon who reacts first

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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: shahrukh_divya
awsum update..!! luved it..!! cnt wa8 2 c wht happen nw...!!!! thx for da pm dear :)))))

ur welcome
i am glad u liked the update

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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: khajju
awesmee...i think heer is actually a bit jealous of simon....who won't be...her prem with smeother girl...no way...nywayz thanks for pm...update sooon

i am glad u liked
ur welcome
i will try to update tommorrow morning

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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: Aymee
Hi topsyturvy,

Great update.

I am sorry about Chapter 8 that I misunderstood about Preet and Meher's marriage. I thought they were going to get married soon 😳

Writing in Heer's POV was great. I loved how Prem is teasing, calling her fat and lazy 😆, it was very cute.

I can't believe Prem has a girlfriend. 😕 I feel bad for Heer though. She has to come home late and hide in her room so there wouldn't be any conflict between her and Simon. Her documentaries obsession is very cute. I thought it was very sweet of Prem to record her show earlier.

I hope you will be able to do it Prem's POV also.

Thank you for the PM. Looking forward to your next chapter. Please do continue to PM whenever you update this FF.

thanks a lot for the wonderful comment
ur comment means a lot to me
even i liked the teasing part when i wrote it...........i will write story but not in anyone pov's anymore i wont be able to tell u who but i got a few pms saying that they didnt like the pov part so i am gng to write as usual i write
dnt worry i will pm u
n i am gng to update tommorrow morning for sure i hope u can wait till then