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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sadhz

Great update. Luv this prem....
Thnx for pm. Update asap






thanks a lot
even i love this prem
gonna update today late night hopefully u will read it tomm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: punjabi0926

Nice that Rishab is all done... Are we going to start the love story phase of Prem and Heer?






yes now rishab is gone for good
i have started rolling the ball for premeer love but will bloom eventually
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: khajju

awesmee...luvd it....finallt heer is free rrm tht reshabh now...thanks for pm....try to update soon





thank u ji n no problem for sending the pm
will update today late night
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Aymee

Great update topsturvy.

I am glad Prem finally got Rishab and that accountant caught with their schemes and now they are spending the rest of their lives in jail.
So, finally Heer and Meher are finally free from Rishab and they can move on with their lives.
I hope some sparks will start to fly between Prem and Heer 😃.
Thank you for the PM, dear. I am looking forward to your next update. Also, take care of yourself. We all want you to be in your best health whenever you update. 😃






thanks a lot for the awesome comment
ur comment means a lot to me
ur welcome and its my pleasure to send u ppl pms
i am much better now so i hope u will like the next update which i am gonna post in a few hrs maybe 2-3
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: newt2007

wow Prem juneja you are simply great.

now Heer has to cook for Prem. wonderful
nice update.





thanks a lot
i am big foodie myself so i hope this heer cooks for me a lil too😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Miracle_leo

awesome update loved it





thanks a lot
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Xxcoolchick1xX

Hey,

Just started reading this FF!!
It's awsome...plzzz update soon n add me 2 ur PM list.




thanks a lot i have made my internal pm list n have added u to it
sent u a buddy request accept it willbe easy for me to send u a pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 8

Soon everything got sort out and Meher and Heer were free from the clutches of Rishab. Heer went back to live with Meher in her apartment but she didn't want to become a burden on Meher. So she took started looking for job. She faced many difficulties because of her education but gradually due to her hard work and mass interest in designing she got a job as sales assistant under a widow lady who pregnant with a child. Everyday she used to cook for Prem, Meher and herself. It was like Teddy the housekeeper in Prem's house was for just cleaning and taking care of the house. He never got the chance to cook anything for Prem because all days he was found sharing his meals with Heer and Meher.

Soon the marriage date fixed for Meher's wedding came and only Heer and Prem were there from her side but they left no stone unturned to make it a dream wedding for her. Meher and Preet decided to settle in Miami after marriage where Preet had his main office headquarters. So Meher transferred the apartment in name of Heer. Now life was set for Meher and Heer.

Prem and Heer became inseparable best friends. Everyday Prem used to skip his office in lunchtime to have lunch with Heer. Together after picking Heer from her store they used to go to a nearby beach and used to have lunch made by Heer. They were best of friends. Prem used to return to his home to just sleep. Life was really good for of them. But life is known for its up and down. After so many blissful days problem knocked first at Heer's door.

One as she was working in store she got a phone call from one of her neighbor to reach her apartment as quickly as possible. That person never ever mention what the real problem was but just hung up. Out of habbit Heer called Prem and asked him to meet her there.

When they reached there a fire engine sped past, then another. As they turned the corner an ambulance joined the company of flashing lights several blocks down the street.

"I wonder what happened," Heer said as another police cruiser shot past.

Prem craned his neck to see over the crowds gathering on the sidewalk. Those emergency vehicles were

stopped awfully close to … no, it couldn't be. "Heer, that's not—"

She had already let go of his hand and was shoving her way through the ocean of bodies clogging the

side-walk. Against a backdrop of blackness, billows of gray smoke hung ominously in the moonlit sky.

Right over Heer's building.

*

It could be worse.

That seemed to be the consensus as Heer leaned on the back of the police cruiser, watching the

firemen pack up their gear. She supposed that was pretty easy to say when you hadn't just lost

everything you owned.

"Miss Mann ?"

Heer looked up to see Annie, Mr.Malhotra's daughter. They'd taken her father away by ambulance

shortly after Heer and Prem had arrived to find the upper half of the building consumed by flames and

billowing smoke.

Her face was streaked with tears. "Miss Mann , I'm so very sorry for what's happened."

"Is your father okay?"

She nodded, wiping her cheeks. "He's got a few second-degree burns and suffered from mild smoke

inhalation."

"I'm glad he'll be all right." Heer rubbed her eyes with her thumb and forefinger. They burned from

sheer exhaustion and the acrid smoke still hanging in the air. All she wanted to do was crawl into bed and

sleep, but she didn't have a bed to crawl into anymore. She didn't even have clean clothes to change into,

or a toothbrush. She had nothing.

"This is all my fault," Annie hiccuped, fresh tears springing from her eyes. "I knew he wasn't well, but he

wanted to be independent. I couldn't bear putting him in a home. He was so happy here."

"Did he say why he did it?" Heer looked over at Julia (her helper at the shop) and Prem on the sidewalk speaking to one of the police officers. Mr.Malhotra had set the building on fire because he thought Abhay's(a resident of the building) fiance was an alien. How absolutely perfect. She would have laughed, but she didn't have the energy left. She didn't even have the energy to cry.

"I'm so sorry," Annie said again. "All of your things, your beautiful appartment—"

"They're just things," she assured her. "They can be replaced. People can't. All that matters is everyone

is okay. You should go and be with your dad. He needs you."

Annie reluctantly left and Heer watched her walk away, feeling only pity. Mr.Malhotra wasn't

malicious and she truly believed he never meant to harm anyone. He'd been a good, if not entertaining

tenant for six years. Now Annie would have no choice but to put him in a nursing home, or possibly

institutionalize him.

Prem sat next to her on the trunk, wrapping an arm around her shoulders. They both smelled like

barbecued carpet and their clothes were damp and dirty. "You holding up okay?"

No, she wasn't okay. She was exhausted and depressed and homeless. She nodded anyway. "Don't you

have to go back to your office?"

"I called Louis and explained the situation. I'm not going anywhere." The arm around her tightened. Now

came the bad news.

"A building inspector will be out in the morning. When he says it's safe, we can go in and pick up

whatever wasn't ruined. Julia called your insurance company and they're sending an adjuster out when

they get the all clear."

"Did the firemen say how bad it is?"

"Mr.Malhotra's place, the hallway and everything below are going to have to be gutted. Most of the

fire was contained to that part of the building. Your living room is singed, but it was superficial. Most of

the damage is going to be from smoke and water."

She stifled a yawn and rubbed the sleep from her eyes. Now that all of the emergency vehicles were

pulling away, the crowds on the sidewalks had thinned to a few stragglers. She was beginning to feel less

like a circus sideshow.

Julia joined them in the street.

"Is she okay?" Julia asked Prem.

"She's fine," Heer answered for him. "She's just exhausted."

"Come home with me," Julia said. "You can stay with me."

Before Heer could accept or refuse her offer, Prem stood, pulling her with him. "She's

staying with me."

I am?she almost said. She didn't remember him asking. Although, she couldn't imagine another place she

would rather stay, where she would feel more comfortable, and less like a charity case.

"There's no point in hanging around here anymore," he said. "Let's go home."

Home? She didn't have a home. But she didn't bother to point that out.

"I'll help you pack up your stuff," Julia promised. "Call me."

Heer thanked her and let Prem lead her to his car in the public parking lot two blocks away. He

unlocked the door for her, helped her in and fastened her seat belt. She wasn't much in the mood for

conversation, so she sat quietly as he drove to his place. He parked in the garage, helped her out of the car and led her inside.

He'd need a really long one tonight.

Next day she, Prem and Julia together went to Heer's apartment to see what has been left fo her so called home and her belongings. Everything was covered in black. People from insurance company came and their survey. After that they told Heer that will try to compensate for as much as possible but for the time being she has to shift to a hotel and expenses will be covered by them. Before she could say anything an gad interfered and said that a hotel room will not be needed as she will be staying with him until and unless her apartment is ready. Before Heer could say anything to Prem or either to insurance people they were hurrying out to leave the apartment in order to escape from the suffocating environment around.

Heer faced Prem and said ' Prem its really nice of you to help me like this but I cant really stay in your house like that until my home is ready. The insurance will pay for a hotel."

"Forget it. I won't let you spend months in a hotel. It sucks. And no more arguments." Heer stared up into the gaping hole in the ceiling of the stockroom, where Mr. Malhotra's floor used to be. She couldn't believe this was happening to her—that everything she'd worked so hard for stood in ruins. Temporarily, she reminded herself. It was fixable. Her life would be back on track. It would just take time.

Yellow caution tape blocked off half of the apartment and the door to Mr.Malhotra's apartment

upstairs. Her own apartment, singed as it was, was still accessible. Not that much of it was worth saving.

They'd stopped the fire before it reached the kitchen, but the excessive heat had melted anything made of

plastic, and the ceiling was black with soot. Even the clothes tucked away in her closet, far from the

reaches of the flames, reeked with the stench of stale smoke. She, Prem and Julia had packed her clothes

in black trash bags and Julia had hauled them to a dry cleaner that specialized in removing the smoke

smell from fabric.

Heer didn't have any more option but go and live with Prem in his house.

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Posted: 14 years ago
hii.,,.it was great...poor heers house got burned....but one thing is good...she will now stay with prem....snd yaaar pllzzzx give sme premeer romance.....luvd the way prem stood and said tht heer is leaving with him..tht was sooooo sweet....thanks for pm and plzzz update sooon

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