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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: ansah

totally different..and i loved it...

maan as chief and geet
as a dancer...really loving it...
and the kiss was just so โ˜บ๏ธ
really awesome...u r fab dear..
keep writing...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

hey ansah
...glad to see u here dear
ummm....mouth zipped ....about the character sketch ..don assume anything just read honey
wait for the next update ...geet is not only a dancer but a law student too....
lolz...u liked the kisss...awwww...thank u so much honey
blushing hard now
thanx and stay tuned
love
reet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: MaanEET_FAN

hey reet awesome ff..

just loved it.. yaar...
thnku 4 the pm....
don't stop cont. soon..........

hey
thanx a lot dear ..
i will continue now
happy that u liked the concept ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
thank u so much !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Dear thats Fabulous.......๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...........

Loved it โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Thanq so much for the PM๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
Thats a very different concept and thats written so beautifully.....โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ..........
Its really Amazing to see Maan in a new way...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ......
wow yaar first meet mein hi Kiss...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰........
Im Eagerly waiting for the next part.......๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜.......
Pls Pls Pls Update Sooooooooooooooon

hey sireesha
welcome to dil mera too,,,,,
honey love ur reply as usual .....
oops u too jumping onto the conclusion ke thats maan ...
uhh...
sighh...!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: seema05

HI REET



NICE START CONG ON NEW THREAD............................. AS USUAL LOVE YOUR WRITING.......๐Ÿ˜›

hey seema
thank u so much dear ....
ahh ..me blushing !!
thanx for ur compliment
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: shreya satish

Different story.....

totally loved it.....
Include me in ur pm list pls.....

hiee shreya
glad to see ur comment
thank u so much dear for liking the total differnet concept ...
the replies are finally calming and assuring me ....that u gonna take it
hav already added u in the list
love
reet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
guys ......i havent yet declared that the man in musk in maan ......if u will read this update u will get to see .....some features of his ...that doesnt match with our very own ....maan singh khurana ....but darling dont loose ur hope .........where there is a hope thr is a way ..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰
and please check the introduction again as added two more charecters...
enjoy the update ....and hit the like button if u enjoy it
~' PART-3 '~

~xXx~

They all noticed him being too silent ....aloof from their discussions........it had been 4 hours they returned from the operation ....and still he hadn't said anything about the next ....

Obviously they were curious about it ...as they are participating in this kind of operation first in their life.....but chief refused to break the seal of his lips.....they all knew ...this operations are not new for him .......it had been only 8 months S joined them .....and after one month R......her brother .......they don't know much about chief's personal life ....except that .......he likes to keep things personal ...they don't have much idea....who are the people acts under him except them ...they had never seen them......as he had kept a few people unseen ....who only followed his orders ....sometimes A got the chance to interact with them...but that too over telephone .....might be because he is working for him for last 1 year ..

Before taking them in ....chief has taken lots of tests ....information's...after being assured by their honesty and sincerity to him ...he accepted them in his gang ......

Before that ....he himself along with A had accomplished lots of CASES....say executions.... robbery ..... or kidnapping ...!.....

They knew ...if one thing lacks in him ...that is fear ......well might be emotions too......they had never seen him being talkative out of emotion ....when he knew everything about their lives...they knew just nothing ....even A too.........they had no idea...who he is ...what he does.....they hadn't even seen his face ......he always kept himself in dark ......he interacted with them masking himself in a black piece ....that kept his eyes along with nose and cheek bones covered...only lower jaw....along with lips could be visible ...

If they recognized something ...its his voice and his fist ......that had the power in them to lie down at least 10 people without any weapon ......he had immense power....

But they could make an idea.....that ...He is handsome .....his fair complexion .....cleen shaved cheeks ..and strong determined jaws ...gave them a hint about it ...

After a long waiting ...they gave up ....and started munching some sandwiches......when A told S to pass him one .....

SIR.....! here it is...S passed him the burger ....!
sir...!!!....she called him louder ......

Her voice broke his trance ......! as he looked up ......

Are you alright sir ....?? A neared him .....

Uhh...yeah ...!!.......thanx .....he took the burger ...and turned back ...when A threw another question ....

Chief ...i was asking how did it go ....? any problem ..?nobody has seen you na ???

Chief replied munching the burger ....

Yeah ...it was perfect ......no obstacle faced........plain and smooth .....he took another bite .......and yeah ..nobody has seen me .......he paused as something struck his mind ........!!!

Shit .....!! she did ..!

In a sudden jerk he straightened his half leaning body against the wall........and ..threw away the last part of the burger ....before announcing ...

EXCEPT ONE ....!!

What ....???????????????? the question came in unison .....

But sir...We had planned na......it should look like an accident .......that the COPD patient died due to asphyxia .....uhh ...had a sudden attack of acute bronchial asthma ...!! she gasped with the shriek .....

Shut up S ....!!

A 's voice made her shut at that instant ......she dared to question the chief ..!!

When he looked at his boot with minute attention ....why the hell this didn't strike in my mind ......she had seen me.......from a very close distance ....she had seen my lips ...my eyes.....ohhh shit ....!!! she is the witness... ....what's wrong with me.........i didn't I think it before.......what if she opens her mouth infront of police ....this is the first time I left a witness of a kill ....

His facial expressions were not readable from his masked face ..........they waited for him to speak up ...

A .....leave this place .......everybody back to your places......its high time we should change our den .....i will let A know about the next den ......he will take you there ....he threw the words while making his way out ......

Sir.... who is the witness ...?? A finally asked being not able to control himself more..

A girl ........!!!he left keeping them in shock ....mouth wide opened ...

Girl...!!!! R repeated the word.....

Sir ...and girl ....?? the next question came from S.....

Ohh please stop it .....she might be just a witness....you are over exercising your pea sized brain ....huh...A retorted ....

~xXx~

Geet had woke up bit later than usual ....due to a long sleepless night ....looking at the clock she rushed to get ready .......its 11.30 am .......

It had been a utter busy day for her ....today dirjee had an appointment to the physician ....she took him there ...after a long queue their turn came ........and after that ...she went to the NGO to receive the payment of her dance show held yesterday ........and she had been reminded again about the stranger ...and the incident ....but she snapped out the idea....

While standing in the cash counter ..she heard some tense discussions going on in between the clerks...she ignored....and concentrated on her job ..she is goin to get 7000 ruppes for just one show .....she should be cautious enough to take it home safely .....

While coming back she heard people scattered over groups ....and huffing puffing in some discussion ....

She scoffed inwardly glancing them from the corner of eye ...... this is Mumbai ...people much more interested in mouth watering topic ...than their scheduled works ........

But suddenly an idea struck her ....what if they had come to know about the incident happened with her .........ohh shit .......what if they are discussing about her ....and the kiss.....she couldn't think more.....she rushed out from there as fast as possible ......she was so lost in her thoughts ...she didn't notice a pair of eyes gawking at her ...

She was crossing the road unmindfully ...when out of the blue she found herself dragged in someone's arm when pedestrians shrieked in fear .......baffled she looked at the road a truck crossed them in a good speed......she realized she had been saved by this person ....she could imagine ....if he didn't ...she would have been lying on the mid of the road soaked in blood .....smashed by the tire of the truck .....

She looked up to see her savior who had still held her by her slender waist ......but couldn't see his face ....as he was wearing a helmet ....umm...seems a biker ....

She mumbled a muffled thanks .....and released herself from him ......when he just nodded ........and moved away ....

She couldn't concentrate on a single thing while her way back to home ....

After slouching in a sofa ...she opened the tv tired of the inner war she was having .......she changed the channel to news while gulping down the water kept in front of her ....

And suddenly something demanded her attention ...her eyes became glued with the screen ....as it showed about the murder of raja rao .....in an NGO program ....

Her eyes popped out in horror....as her mind acted quickly to synchronize events in a chain ......

It was him ...!!! ....she mumbled in a choked voice.....definitely ....!!!!

YES .....IT WAS ME.....!

The glass slipped out from her hand as she heard a voice coming from her bed....

Turning her head ....she found the stranger again .....slouching comfortably in her bed......

She gasped ....and stood up in jerk ....

the same zed black outfit.....the same black musk .....

her eyes widened in horror....as she found him in her bed.......munching an apple held in his hand covered in gloves ... she never thought of meeting him again ....

what happened .....?? looks like u have seen a ghost ...?he chuckled ....

she released the breath she was holding and took a step behind ....

what are you doing here .. ,.......she finally found her tongue ...and spoke almost in a inaudible voice ..........

tch ..tch ....what a question ..!! Is it the way to welcome your guests ??....he said without looking at her ....while checking the apple in his hand ..while still munching bite of it ....

you are not a guest ....u r an intruder ..,.!!just get out of here ........she raised her voice.....!

hmmm....so you can talk ....at first I thought you don't have a tongue ....he smirked ...

shut up ...and get out ....u bloody murderer ..!! she hissed remembering his act ..well acts ...

he woke up from the bed ......and moved towards her ........when she took a step behind .......her legs had become so heavy in fear .......

listen girl ...!!i m not here to take snacks .......to have some words with you .....he replied huskily ...... his cold voice attacked her ears ...

she licked her dried lips to give a reply ....but stopped as she found him gazing at her lips ....the deadly lust in his stare made her gasp a little ....

gulping she dragged her heavy leg to another step behind when he moved closer...

look .... u have seen me yesterday....only u ......and I want you to keep your mouth zipped ...till eternity ...he cleared it out

gaining some senses that its his weak point she dared to speak up .....
what if I don't ??

what if you do ......!! a quick reply came ...u r going to have a normal life ahead.....why would you entangle yourself in danger ...??it will be better for you if u dont mess with me !

I don't care ....!!!

U must ....u have your law studies to continue ....final exam is approaching u woman ...!!!he chuckled .....

How come he knows all about me....she dreaded at the thought ...

Look ...go away ...or else I will shout ...!!!!

Shout ....!!! ......there is nobody at home ...ur dirjee had gone to play chase with his friend ....ur maid shivani had gone to meet her husband .....he replied in a cool way ..

Her butterfly eyes widened in shock .....oh babaji ...!! seems he knows everything about me.....

Yes ...i do know...he remarked as if he is able to read her mind ....

I m not a coward ...a future lawyer after all ..i should be afraid of a mere criminal .. she tried to convince herself...

Look .....i don't care ..what you do .......what more you can do ...you will kill me.....but till I m alive ...i will speak ......i m an Indian ....and I have some duties towards the nation .....i will speak up against a crime ! I m not going to sit quiet in fear of my own life .....she informed adamantly .

While he gawked at her ....she had left her tresses loose open ...wearing a simple blue suit ....almost no make up ..except...her big brown eyes adorned with little koel ....and a light pink gloss making her fruity lips more appealing ....she is beautiful in deed.......he said the last set of words to himself ...2nd time in last 24 hours ....

His eyes twinkled in appreciation with the confidence in her voice......and she missed it ....

She found him mum ....mistook he is scared by her speech ...

So she continued.......huh ...do whatever u like ....i will not keep mum .....!!

When he quickly covered the distance between them and suddenly grabbed her by her waist ........she gasped at the sudden move ........he was swifter than a leopard....

She again felt the 6 pack strong abs against her soft skin of tummy ......the dress material were thin enough to stop the heat passing through them ...

Don't think I m scared .....!! she retorted while wriggling hard to release herself from his clasp ......but what is a deer fights with a leopard......

He pressed her tighter with himself .......and whispered in a husky voice....

Liar ....!!

She gulped down to ease her throat .......

no ...i m not .......... I ...i ... never lie ........she was conscious about the effect he was passing to her .......she controlled herself from falling under his daze......

his gazed at her pink supple lips ....he was so close to her ......he could even see the wrinkles on it ......he noticed her lips to part to say the next set of words..........

she gathered confidence and spoke next........ ..till I m alive ....u cant stop my voice.....i m not scared by a criminal .......u can kill me ....what much u can do ...but i will speak up till I m alive ..!!!...she declared ...

there are lotsa ways to zip your mouth ...one of them I had demonstrated earlier ......looks like you have forgotten ....lemme remind u darling !

saying this he smacked his lips again with hers ......

he had no plan of doing it again ...in fact he cursed himself thousand times from yesterday for doing it......and see...he is repeating it ......this time with open eyes...

he pressed his rough demanding lips hard to her supple one ....in way to part them...but she didn't open her mouth ........his eyes twinkled ...at which she understood he is upto something .....

before she could make herself ready ....she felt a stinging pain on her lower lip ...he has nibbled it again ......she gasped and he took the advantage of deepening the kiss......he entered his tongue inside her mouth ...to taste her saliva

...he again felt himself drowning in her ...she is driving me crazy again .....how this woman awakes the demons in me ......!! ....but he was too lost to control himself....and dug his nails in her waist ...to clasp her harder ....

for some seconds she too lost herself in his demand......what is it in him that makes break all the walls I had raised around me .....??......she was about to respond to his passion .....when she realized she is kissing a murderer ....

she bit his tongue moving inside her mouth ..

ouchhhhhh.......!!!

he left her instantly with a sudden shriek ....

u stupid jangli billi ...!!!!what u have done ....!!

he groaned at her tasting the salty blood of his own oozing from the tongue ...... when she enjoyed her victory with a grin on her face ......

but to her utter dismay he clutched her again but this time by her shoulders ....he shook her hard ...

look u stupid woman ...!!! don't dare to go against me ....!!do as i say ....keep ur butt out of my way !!

huh ...she twitched her little nose...i m not scared of death ...

I don't kill a innocent ...!! he retorted peering her eyes through his burning gaze... ....

I must admit she is quite brave in this little age.....how much old she is ..may be 20 ..?? he thought ...

I don't kill innocents ..he repeated .....and continued after a short pause.....and to be precise I have saved you from death .....two times till now ..he informed as a matter of fact ....!

Whatttt??

He released her from his grasp and gapped from her ...........

Yeah ...1st yesterday ....your burning dupatta ...and today when you were all ready to hug the truck ....uhh ...even u had passed a thanks to me .....he grinned slyly ....

Saying this he turned back to her ..checking out her room ....

Whattt.....that was you .....my goodness..you were following me ....!!!

Yes honey ..i was ...and I will ...remember ...my eyes will be on you if u dare to speak up .....!

what if I do ...?

he turned at her ....and looked straight in her eyes.....that made her numb instantly ....

then you have to leave this place ...world ....and LIVE TOGETHER WITH ME......!!!

she let out a hushed shriek at this .......ohh babaji ,....what a shameless person he is ....!!!

ahh ...dont worry ..i m not interested sharing bed with you ............he clarified again with a straight look on his face ... ...as if he can easily read her mind and continued .....its just your future life will be confined to me only ......remote from the rest of the world...

byee honey .......hope you got my words......saying he sat on the window pane.....was about to jump down when again he stared at her .....Indicating her by two of his fingers after pointing his eyes too .......that said .....his eyes will be on her ....

he vanished in the thin air ...leaving her flabbergasted ...

did he just give me a threat of kidnapping me ???

if u have liked it ...please please hit the like button ...!!
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reet
Edited by maanmeet_Reet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
this is something different n interesting !
pm me too :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
i am loving it really awesome... this is just so good...really fab.. superb...amazing...maan is just too good...keep writing ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice, lovely part.loved it.continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet

hey ansah

...glad to see u here dear
ummm....mouth zipped ....about the character sketch ..don assume anything just read honey
wait for the next update ...geet is not only a dancer but a law student too....
lolz...u liked the kisss...awwww...thank u so much honey
blushing hard now
thanx and stay tuned
love
reet

i will wait like obedient gurl...and wait what is all so happening....
right she is doing all the dancing for her studies..love her independence...
loving everyhing...it is just so good...and u deserve all the credit..
keep rocking

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