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Posted: 14 years ago
awsummmm work mehak...you are getting better and better
loved the idea....
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello sweets, back with an ARTI OS! 😃, i had typed it long before, but just couldn't post..so now enjoy! hope u all like it..😳, hopefully u all will finish this thread at this OS..😳

Missing you..


"Hey baby, good morning", arjun said in his usual jubilant voice and rati came out of her slumber at once, "arjun?", she looked at the time piece, it was 4.00, " itni subha phone?, sab thek hai?", she was shocked hearing his voice so early in the morning and that too on Sunday.

"arey yar!!, ik toh my princess gets so worried, bus aisey hi, I woke up and couldn't sleep again so I called you, socha agr main utha hua hon, tu tumhain bhi nahi sona chaiye, it's not fair na,?", he cheekily said and rati just shook her head in disbelief, smiling, she snuggled back to her blanket, "very funny arjun!, neend ku nahi a rahi hai?"

"bus rati, ab akeley mujhe neend nahi ati hai", he sighed dramatically and rati blushed deeply, "acha!, toh apni friends ko bula lo na, tumhari jo itni best friends hain, they will accompany you", she said controlling her blush and arjun got irritated, "plz rati!, that was not funny ok, I don't want to talk about anything else than us", he was sounding stubborn like a child and rati so wanted to hug him at the moment, "ok g sorry!, ye batao k kal ka call time kab ka hai?

"wohi usual 8.oo am, I just hate waking up so early", he said huffing, "kia arjun, hamesha se hamara call time itni subha hi hota hai aur tab toh..

"tab baat aur thi, I had something to look forward too, meeting you, now it's just..

"arjun stop it sweetheart", she cut in between and arjun just smiled at her "sweetheart", she very well knew how to handle his frown, "it is not going to work this way arjun, aur tum ne kab se kaam se irritate hona shoro kar diya hai?"

"jab se tum door chali gayi ho," his voice was sounding low and weak and rati was at a loss of words for a moment, "arjun!!!, aisi batien ku kar rahe ho?, agr main sath nahi hon toh u will start behaving like a kid?"

"yes I will!, because no one can handle me except you", he said in an angry voice and rati's heart filled with affection and love for him, "ok fine, u share what u want to, let me know how much you miss me, "she softly replied because this was the only way she thought he would feel somewhat better, "kahan se shoro karon?", he said and rati could feel the jubilance returning, "dil se shoro karo..",she replied tenderly and arjun laughed softly, she could imagine his dimples, "well sab se ziyada toh I miss your smile, GOSH, I love when your beautiful lips curve into the most heavenly smile of the world, I just used to look at you after every 10 minutes just to see that beautiful sight"

"meri smile??, OMG!, smile toh tumhari pori duniya main famous hai" , she said in disbelief, "may be, but for me it is only your smile, well next I soo miss the way u used to bring tea for me, like I just used to think k chai honi chiye aur tum le k a jati thi, that was so great, tumhain kaise pata chalta tha?

"tumhain jab bhi chai chaiye hoti hai toh tum chewing gum khana shoro kar detey hon,", she said laughing, "really?", he paused a bit and then remembering his own ways he was stunned, "arey haan, main chewing gum khana shoro kar deta hon, wow rati!", he was startled and rati was laughing imagining his expressions,

"well phir I so miss how u used to steal my lunch, main tiffin kholta tha aur wo adha khali hota tha", his tone was mocking and rati got furious, "stealing??, listen aur apne bare main kia khayal hai?, tum ne kitni baar mera lunch khaya?"

"ik ya do baar bus", he said thinking, "ik ya do baar??, agr bhol gaye ho toh it was almost everyday ok!, main ne ik ya do baar khaya hoga", she said in a convincing tone, "choro na rati, main ne hisaab manga kia, tumhare liye toh jaan bhi hazir hai", he said laughing and rati huffed but she was happy sensing he was smiling.

"and next I miss our one-take shots!, u can't imagine rati, I need to give so many re-takes, my new co-star is so..

"arjun!", she spoke authoritatively because she knew what was coming next, he was going so say dumb or slow to her new co-star,

"acha nahi bolta kuch us k bare main, but rati it is so irritating that u can't imagine, it was so much fun working with you, not just because I love u and all, but u are an amazing talented actress, u just bring out the best in your co-star, it is so easy to reciprocate emotions and dialogues with you, aur ik woh..

"OMG! , itni tareef?", she tried changing the topic because she didn't want him to say something more irritating about his new co-star, she genuinely wanted to see him in good terms with her, she wanted this show to get a success, so she always used to repress his complains about his new co-star, but at the same time she knew he was always right.

"u deserve it!" , he replied plainly and rati smiled, "but the rest of the cast is so amazing arjun"

"no doubt, each and every one rest is just simply a class apart!, I learn so much from them, it is just because of them and your support that I am continuing, wanra agr akela us k sath hota toh..

"acha aur kia miss karte ho?", she again tried changing the topic and arjun understood her intentions, "GOSH rati!, tumhari jaga aur koi hota na toh araam se beth k sari buraiyon sunta, aur ik tum ho jo mujhe us k againt kuch bolne nahi deti ho"

Rati bit her lower lip as she spoke her real intentions, "kia faida arjun, u need to work with her, fazool irritation ka kia faida, just think about good things, she is a sweet girl and..

"ok stop, apne bare main baat karte hain..", he again sounded stubborn and rati started giggling, "acha g!, tum agli chez bataney wale they k kia miss karte ho?

"haan next I miss your singing, ufff, that soothing and calm feeling, the way u used to sing for me slowly in breaks, sirf merey liye, no one else used to listen, that was so peaceful."

Rati wanted to say something but couldn't and then there was complete silence on both sides, even rati's eyes started brimming with tears, after a while the silence was broken "rati?"

Rati took a moment to respond, she didn't want him to sense her tears, "haan?"

"will you sing for me?.. now?", rati couldn't help smiling, he was always so innocent in asking things, 'ok, which song?"

"koi bhi.."

Rati thought for a while, there was complete silence and then suddenly the soft mesmerizing voice of rati filled the silence..

"tu..tu hai wohi..dil ne jise apna kaha..

She was singing in a soft voice, the feelings and emotions were so evident, arjun heart started flowing with the tune of the song, she was singing with so much affection, " I love you rati", he spoke in between her song and rati was again speechless, " I lov..

"chup chuup chup!"

"kia hua?", rati was shocked as he said her to stay quiet in a hurried way,

"ye mujhe tab bolna jab main abhi samne aaon ga!", he said confidently and rati couldn't understand, "kia arjun tum.."

"tyaar ho jao rati, main a raha hon, the lets go out.."

"kiaa??", she was shocked, "arjun it's just 5 in the morning", she said glancing at the clock.

"tu kia hua?, lets see the sunrise, beach pe chaltey hain then we will go for a breakfast date"

"listen arjun tum.."

"time waste mat karo, main a raha hon", he hung up the phone and rati was just staring in disbelief at her cell phone. He was just so..she wanted to say something else but couldn't, she had to say that he was JUST SO AMAZING!. She started smiling and jumped out of her bed to get ready for her breakfast date.

Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

lovely os angel......i love ur imagination!! great one!😍 n this is so true i kno...😍😳...the phone convo was just adorable....gosh these twio!!

does it hav more parts?!! i wish it does....do wite abt their breakfast date. on d beach....omg...😍😳
thnx fr d pm.....😳 tc🤗...😳
Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey mehak🤗 loved the OS as usual brilliant
just like you make mayur real..............arti look real too😳
well it kind of reminded me of raat raat ko phone karti thi😆
but their conversation was amazing shows the understanding level
and loved the way it was so normal yet so special.
do continue with it coz i want to see what happens next, i know its a one shot but still😆
and now i am really missing them yaar
Edited by --Nida-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was so sweet! 😊
thnanx for the PM!😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely os!!!
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww....😍
dats all I can say...
it was so adorable😳

thnx for the pm mehak
its so good to see you😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW.....it's beautiful Mehak.....i rarely read OS or FFs....but i totally loved this OS....your way of explaining all the emotions and feelings is really superb....tabhi mein kahoon....aisy hi tou best writer ka award nahi mila madam ko......(;
jo bhi ho.....i loved reading it....[:D

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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing....simple yet beautiful..................thnx for pm................!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW........... mehak brilliant OS
just loved the way u wrote it!
it was so simple but still so beautiful
i loved their understanding level ...................
it was just so amazing ..................
do continue coz i wanna read futher abt wat happens next ........
thnx for the pm 🤗

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