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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: deejagi



hi, Sorry, I took longer timer than anticipated. I had to check about this schools & colleges closure on 24th & 25th in Karnataka in lieu of Ayodhya verdict. I had to talk to my friend in new s channel and then call back to my nephew on this. So please bear with me. no worries sweets..!!! i understand...!!!

The episode is a dhamakdhar one👏.awww thanks a ton...!!! so happy u liked it...!!! Geet wearing maan's kurtha, yaar what are you people are upto?i seriously dont know.. i guess i got carried away a little..!!! 😆😆😆😆😆😆 but then came back to planet earth and so did maan...!!! that's when he says, that he would not go overboard😉😉😉😉😉 though many people would have cursed both maan and me for that..!!! every one is making her wear his kurtha and the poor guy will be deprived of the intimacy and will have to control his desires???????? 😉 Too bad Soumya. btw, you have become too naughty off late and letting maan have his way and then concludes in the precise moment, beyond where it might hurt his love. Great soumya, you have a total control over MSK😆 its important jaya..!!! i have to have control over every character..!! and especially the maan singh khurana... u know..!!!! The way Geet was asking hi8m about how many shots it takes for him to get knocked off, I thought she wanted him to knock off and take her wholesome😳 .....she was just curious, becuase maan was all sober..!!! he was making perfect sense, in not just his words but also actions..!!!! 😃😃😃i, personally love such people, who can handle situations without getting them out of their control and i strongly believe i;m one of them..!!! oh hold on, not about drinking, but in general..! i dont drink..!!! so that aspect of his character, is my strength too...!!! when i character sketch the FF, you will see a lot of things that go very close to my real self..!! and this is just one of numerous ones...!!! 😉😉😉😉😉

so was his request for them to wait for the breakfast, but I think it was sanjana & Nishant's idea than Maan's. they were just waiting at the table. cos u know leaving one person and eating is not a polite thing to do..!!! but they jovially blame it on maan...!!!!!
btw, why he didn't gave her his card or wallet when he asked her to go shopping. What will she shop with empty hand? ahaaaa, i'll clear that in the next update.. good point..sweets.!!!!

Daadi & NT together both thinking of outsmarting the other was quite a scene. Will wait for more.
but u know, who ultimately wins.. dont you?????? 😆😆😆😆absolutely no confusions here...!!! when maan khurana himself, has to bow down and keep his mouth shut in front of savitri khurana , i guess NT is just a very very insignificant thing for daadima to handle..!!!

Maan with the child and the childs hand around his neck was scene of the day and he surely deserves a HUG & KISS. awwww, u liked this.... gosh, i loved it too, when i picturized it and wrote it..!!! i fell in love with the kid here......😉😉😉😉😉

love you for the fantastic update. whom do you love more?? me or the update?????? 😆😆😆😆😆u better put lot of thought before u answer this one....
Jaya



Thanks you dear for keeping up the promise. Will read and comment later⭐️

Jaya

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Posted: 14 years ago
#63


@shivangi: hello shivangi.... glad u found the update a combination of a lot of things...!!!! 😛


@lovnya: thanks honey...!!! love u too...!!!


@sona-rai: thanks a ton...!!!


@ansah: glad u found the update cute and adorable...!!! well, about aadi, lets see what she's upto...!!!!!😉


@revav: thanks honey...!!! will try to update in the next 45 minutes...!!!
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@dhara: thanks a bunch...!!!😃


@swetha: thanks swetha...!!!! 😛


@muskan: hello musks.....!!!!! thanks honey....!!! so happy u liked it and i'm glad u find time to comment despite ur 2 FF's....!!! love ya...


@nisha: hello nisha. i did add u to my PM list..!! thanks for reading and welcome...!!!


@aarti: thanks honey...!!!!


@seema: nice to know my update makes u feel good...!!!! yes, maaneet are special in their own way...!!!!


@ashi: thanks honey,...!! the next one should be up, very soon..!!!


@roopareddy: thanks honey...!!!


Soumya

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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: febinyusuff

First of alll

" Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!"


🥳Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!"

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Never thought you will be updating soooooon :).. looks like it's off day for you ..and today's precap is tempting you 😉 hai na....anyways I am very happpy 😃😃
I am yet to comment the last one I guess ( *guilty feeling* :()


Honey, I loved Arron a loooot... cute hai na... Mujhe bhi Geet ko ek Ladka chahiye.. bilkul Maan ke tharah.........Surprised how simple Geet is.. Does't need anything.. If I was in her place I would have dragged him to SS...............

Shimla scene was also light.. I loved it.... I had a feeling something bad was going to happen to dadi.. b ut she is safe I am relieved..

Arrey, yaar are you planning SR in near future??????

And yeah you also deserver a hug and a kiss from me for updating so sooooon...

🤗





febin,

🤗

awwww thanks sweets, for all the congratulations....!!!!! really sweet of u...!!!! ahem ahem, i like surprises u know... and that's what i give u ppl too....!!!! 😉😉😉😉😉😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

omg omg omg i dont even want to get started on the precap...!!!its too hot too handle.... mujhe darr lag raha hai... bhool kahin na hum se ho jaaaye.... 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆


well, yeah, i had a day off yday...!!!! so i spent it very wisely on IF.... 🤣

hmm, geet ka ek beta hoga aur beti bhi hogi.... but who comes first and who next i dont know.... 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 hmmm, me likes aaron too...!!!!! he's cute and his presence in maneet's life is even more cute...!!!

daadi can handle things very well, so no worries sweets...!!!! u want a SR for maneet????? why feboin??? bacha kya hai??? 😆😆😆😆😉😉😉😉😉😉

awww thanks for the hugs and kisses..... maan ne aaron ko utaya , lekin hugs aur kisses mujhe mil rahe hai.....nice nice...!!!!!

thanks for the wonderful comments febin...will update in the next 30 mins....!!!!!! love ya...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: priza

amazing....not just Maan, you too don't go overboard.....but without that itself you just emote everything so well 👏....it was great....Geet sees the price tag and refuses, so sweet of her.....

I want to see Maan taking to Geet for shopping once and let him come to know that Geet is different in that tooby picking things up quickly unlike oter women afterall she is one of er kind 😉....infact Maan might take more time by being choosy and all fussy....



hello priya!!! aww thanks, ur first line took me a little overboard...!!! 😆 but i came back..caught the right tide at the right time..!!! 😆

thanks honey...!! so happy u like the no going over board maan ...!!!! i like him too.............😳😳😳😳

hmm, maan and geet shopping together...!! okay lets see, where i can incoroprate this.. well, not in the next 3 or 4 updates, but i;ll surely add one such scene, in the future update and i;ll let u know, when ur wish has been granted.... 😉



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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: pickle6586



Hello I can suggest that they will have twins ( a boy & a girl) later. But for the time being I could sense that you have finalized on boy.😉😉

Jaya

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@bleuRyu: sure...!!!!!! 😆 what reminder do u want?????


@myinfactuaztionz: thanks honey...!!! sweet and hot haan?????? ahem ahem...!!! 😉


@Jria: thanks dear...!!!


@sumi: thanks for finding my geet and maan adorable...!!!! 😉


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lil-desi, radhika, keyama, prithvisanyo, rituka, kaval : thanks a ton..!!!

@lakshmi86: sure lakshmi, u will get daadi - nt in the next update...!!!!


@koolio: thanks a ton sweets....


@uzma: nice way to spend ur lunch time haan..!!! thanks a ton, sweets...!!!


@navpreet: *ahem ahem* someone likes the night walla scene haan??? naughty girl...!!! 😆thanks honey, nice to know u like the update...!!! dont worry abt NT.. she has lopt of torture in store...!! 😉


@sireesha: wow at the number of ❤️ emoticons...!!! so nice u liked the update..!!! ahem ahem , u;re getting XX tared too like my maan... in the FF...haan..!!!! hmm, so u want him to remind her... well i dont think there is any need.... their only hugging and kissing when they are alone....!!!!! 😆



@sakshi: nice to know, my update took u back to the maneet world.....!!!! thanks honey..!!


@shaila: thanks sweets...!!hey i read ur real name somewhere, it is fatima right??? nice to knwo u liked every single bit...!!!! 😃


@prerna, princess_xaini: thanks a ton, sweets..!!!!


@vinithaa: thanks for getting specific about the scenes u liked...!!!! makes me feel nice... i'd be even happy if u can select ur fav dialogues as well..!!! well no worries, i love ur comments and always waiting to read more...!!!! even i liked the aaron scene a bunch.. the kid is too adorable that maan could not help but take him in his arms...!!! 😳


@ferns, anufa: thanks a bunch..!!! happy u liked it..!!


@afsha: maan ke kaha sari pehno.. and geet did not listen... kya hoga????? u wanna know..well u have to wait.... sowwwiiieeee...!!!!!


@FAtima: thanks fatima..!! glad u found the update cute and good..!!!


@jennifer, heavens, shah10, fijianbabe, sweet cherry, hehe-haha, yasu, nihatri,, , taibaa:😛 thanks a ton..!!!


@sweet scorpio: thanks sweets..u will see what daadi is upto.....very soon...!!! official marriage for maneet..welll u still have some time beofre that!!!


Soumya


Edited by pickle6586 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68

hello everyone,

so here is the next update..!!! 😉😉😉😉😉 hey, i still have to reply to some of your comments. i;ll do that after i finish posting this..!!! hope you don't mind.


Part 79

Geet smiled looking at maan with aaron. Aaron rested his head on maan's shoulder and put his hands around maan's neck. Geet wiped his tears away and kissed him.

She then went onto maan's other side and whispered in his ear, "maan khurana, you so deserve a hug and kiss for this!" she then walked slowly to sanjana, when she heard maan tell her, "I'll remind you of it".

The ladies found some couches to sit and sat there. Maan sat there too, with aaron in his lap. Aaron had fallen asleep already and maan tried calling Nishant. Geet and sanjana were talking about all the shopping they did.

Maan got hold of Nishant and he was told that nishant would be there in like 10 minutes. Sanjana had received a call and so she got up and went and geet turned to see what maan was doing.

Maan gently held aaron close to his heart and leaned back on the couch. He kissed him gently on his forehead and pushed his soft brown hair away from his eyes.

"Maan" said geet whispering.

He looked up to face her and said, "yes geet!"

"cute hai na, aaron?" she said

"hmm, you were right yesterday, mujhse bhi zyaada cute hai!" he said, kissing aaron on his cheek.

"mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap ko bacche pasand hai!"

"I never liked them, geet, until you came into my life!" he said, still looking at aaron.

Geet quickly turned around to see the location they were in. the sitting are was pretty much deserted. There were children playing in the fun zone a little distance away. Apart from that, she did not find anyone else around. sanjana was facing the other side, close to the railing and talking to her mom on phone. Geet immediately turned to maan and kissed him on his cheek.

Maan was stunned. He looked at her and she winked. He smiled, "kya baat hai, pehle hug aur kiss karna tha tumhe, ab kiss bhi kiya, itna pyaar kyun aa raha hai?"

"aap hai hi aise, tuo main kya karu?mann karta hai aur bhi karu, but not the right location, you know" she said grinning.

She then rested her head on his other shoulder. Nishant came and clicked a photo, "oh my god, you people look perfect. So, it had to be a Kodak moment".

He then walked towards the railing and showed sanjana the photo. She smiled looking at him and gestured to maan and geet that they look perfect in it.

Nishant sat in the couch opposite to maan and asked him what they would do next? Sanjana joined them too. Her gaze fell on geet's legs and she literally screamed, "geet, tumhare pairon mein swelling kyon hai? tum massage nahi karwate ho kya?"

Maan looked at her feet, worried. Geet told her, "nahi kuch nahi hoga. Ghar pe meri friend Pinky karti thi, massage, lekin ab char paanch din se zyaada ho gaye, na!"

Sanjana turned to the men, "hum ghar jayenge. Geet ko aaram karna hai". they nodded and left to the car. Nishant took Aaron from Maan while Maan helped geet walk slowly.

They reached home and geet went upstairs. Sanjana knocked on her door and came in with a bottle of oil. Maan walked out of the room, when he saw Sanjana.

He heard Sanjana tell geet before closing the room door, "kapde change kar lo, wear a gown kind of a thing so it would be easier to massage".

Maan walked out and paced in the living room on the first floor for sometime. he was worried about geet. he bent over the railing to take a peep at what Nishant was doing. he found Nishant sleep on the couch with Aaron in his lap.

Shimla:

Daadi and NT were walking in the lawn in front of their guest house.

Daadi thought this was the right moment to talk to her. She sat on the chair there and asked NT to sit too. She then causally started a conversation, "beta, hume badi kushi hui, aapne mansion bade aache se sambhali jab hum b'lore mein the".

NT looked a little worried for some reason, when daadi spoke about the mansion. Daadi continued, "waise kisi ne hamare study mein gaye the kya, jab hum nahi the?" she asked looking straight into her eyes.

"ji, daadiji. Hamare laptop kharaab ho gaye the, tuo humne aapke desktop computer use karne ke liye gaye the. Phir humne dekha ki usme virus thi, tuo humne technician ko bulaake re-boot kar waya. Aur maaf kijiye, aapki study kuch unorganized lag rahi thi, tuo humne socha thoda theek karenge. Isiliye waha se unnecessary information aur papers, hataa diya tha, humne".

"accha kiya aapne. Bahut dino se main bhi soch rahi thi, ki hum who sab kare, lekin aapne hamara bhoj halka kiya".

"aapki koi important information tuo nahi gayi na, daadi?" she asked, feeling contended that daadi was not unhappy about the whole re-booting stuff.

"haan kuch important information thi, lekin koi baat nahi!"

NT's face turned red and daadi did not fail to miss that. "kya information thi, daadiji?" she asked softly.

"beta, dev aur aapke property ke papers, property aur bank accounts information!"

"kya?" screamed NT, standing up from her chair, "hamare property ke papers?"

"bahu, aap itne worried kyun hai?"

"ji, who kuch nahi. Phir maan veerji ke papers bhi honge wahan. Hai na?" she asked, hoping daadiji would say "yes".

"Maan, apna property ke papers khud apne paas rakhta hai. sirf aapke property ke papers mere paas the, jo ab gayab ho gaye".

Nainatara cursed herself. How could she be so careless? She thought she was removing every single evidence that would prove them wrong and guilty in front of maan again, but she had removed the very evidence that considered Dev as the khurana heir. She got up from her chair and paced around the table for sometime. she kept mumbling to herself and daadi watched her very quietly, not intending to speak a word. Her work was done. Now NT, herself, would return every single paper and object that she had removed from the study. Daadi was pretty sure that NT would not have destroyed the evidences so fast, as she would not have guessed maan's reaction or her reaction to the situation.

Daadi smiled victoriously. She got up from her chair and said, "beta, pareshaan hone ki koi baat nahi. Hum maan se baat karke sab kuch sambhal lenge".

"nahi, daadiji" screamed NT again, this time with tears in her eyes, "Maan veerji se kuch mat kehna, please".

"kyun beta? Maan ko pata chalega tuo kaam aur asaani se ho jayega. Mera matlab hai, aapke property ke papers aur asaani se banwa ke dega".

"nahi daadiji, maan veerji waise bhi bahut busy rehte hai. meri bewakoofi ki wajah se yeh sab ho gaya. Tuo hum unhe kyun pareshaan kare".

"theek hai, phir kya karna chahenge aap?" asked daadi, loving the trap she had laid for her wonderful daughter in law.

"daadi, hum phir se dekhenge. Hume lagta hai, ki who papers abhi bhi hamare delhi ke ghar mein hi hai".

"oh, that's good. So you did not throw them away, right?"

"nahi daadiji, hume laga ki aapse ek baar poochke karenge".

"ah, that's a smart move honey!" she told, praising herself. But changed the sentence immediately, when NT looked at her, astonished, "that's a smart move honey, you did not throw the papers away". She smiled and NT was assured that everything would fall into its place.

Daadi spoke again, "once I get back to Delhi, tell me over phone where those papers are, so that I can get them checked with my lawyer again, you know, just to be sure, everything is okay!"

"ji" she said, not having any choice left.

She was trapped now. She should have checked and re-checked the papers that she removed from the study, before leaving. She had walked into the study and realized daadi had papers regarding geet and dev. She was shocked. She immediately searched for other evidences and photos and checked the desktop and laptop. She had collected all the papers and was about to put them in a folder, that was lying on the table there. she wanted to check the other papers in the folder too, but put if off for later, not realizing this very folder would trap her very soon. She had re-booted the laptop and computers. But Dev had come back home just then and she simply grabbed the folder there, so that he would not get suspicious. How would she now hide the photographs and emails from Pammi, that revealed that geet was married to dev and betrayed? She dreaded the day, those pictures would fall into maan's hands. She was looking for maan's weaknesses, but with every passing day, their weaknesses were on their way to show up in front of maan.

Beach house:

Sanjana massaged geet's legs for about half hour. Geet had tears in her eyes. She remembered her mother and her sister, back home. Sanjana was worried, "kya hua geet?dard ho raha hai kya?"

Geet wiped her tears and said, "nahi, main theek hoon. Aapko dekh ke kisi ki yaad aa gayi"

"hota hai, mere saath bhi aisa hi hota hai. shadi ke baad itna sab kuch badal jaata hai na?lekin hum lucky hai, geet. we are lucky to have wonderful people in our lives. Don't you think?"

Geet nodded. She could have not agreed better with her. Maan was beyond words and geet was extremely lucky to have him in her life. After everything that happened and with all the people she had come across, she would not have thanked the almighty, enough for bringing maan, into her life.

"waise geet, aap ki love story kya hai? I mean, you know, when did you people meet, how did you fall in love and when did you get married? I see, you are almost 7 months pregnant right, so I'm guessing you must have been married for atleast a year now. Strange maan never told Nishant that he was married".

Geet did not know what to tell Sanjana. She simply told her, "ji main unke office mein kaam karti thi, aur bas pyar ho gaya".

Sanjana smiled, "you know geet, after knowing what kind of a person maan is, I was wondering if he would fall for anyone. But I don't believe it, he got married and he's going to have a kid".

Geet smiled and sanjana continued, "I'm so happy for the both of you! god bless your Jodi", she said kissing geet's forehead. "I'm sure daadi must have been extremely happy, to have you as her daughter in law".

Geet did not speak. Maan's grandmother did not even know that they were married. No one knew that this child was not maan's, but maan was kind enough to accept this baby as his. Geet was lost in thought, while sanjana continued to massage. But Aaron came running into the room and disturbed her thoughts.

Aaron looked at geet and asked, "mamma, aunty ko kya hua?uncle bahar hall mein walking practice kar rahe hai. udhar se udhar, udhar se idhar".

Geet laughed thinking, so maan was getting worried about her.

Sanjana told him, "aaron, tu badmaash ho gaya. Aunty ko thoda sa dard hua, legs mein. Ab jao aur uncle ko andar leke aao".

Aaron hugged geet and said, "aunty, aap ko dard ho gaya, tuo mujhe chocolates, ice cream aur milk shake kaun dega?"

"uncle denge, aapko!" said geet, "uncle ne hi tuo milkshake banaya tha us din".

"par uncle se darr lagta hai" he said and turned to look at Sanjana, who told him angrily, "uncle bahut aacche hai, aaron. Aise baat nahi karte beta".

Aaron went closer to geet and told her in her ears, "aapko bhi uncle se darr lagta hai kya?" geet laughed and hugged him. she kissed him on his cheek and said, "haan, beta, mujhe bhi uncle se bahut darr lagti hai".

"aaron, kya baat ho raha hai? jao uncle ko andar bula lo beta. Uncle bahar tension le rahe honge"

Aaron turned to geet, and whispered again, "aunty, mommy se kuch mat kehna" and put his finger on his lip indicating, her to keep it a secret.

Geet put her hand on her lip and said, "top secret!" aaron ran out of the room and dashed into maan.

"Aaron, sambhal ke, kya kar rahe ho?" asked maan, who was already tensed.

"uncle, aapko andar jaana hai. aunty aur mommy bula rahe hai, aapko!" he said, smiling.

"acchha?" he asked and lifted aaron and carried him inside. Kissing his cheek.

Aaron told him, "uncle, aunty ne abhi abhi isi cheek pe kiss kiya, aap is ke kijiye!" he said, showing him the other cheek.

"nahi, mein is pe hi karunga" he said laughing at the sweetness in the kid.

They walked in and maan put aaron on the bed and sat on the chair beside the bed. Sanjana told him, "Maan, maine aapko isiliye bulaya, to teach you how to massage!"

"kya?" shouted maan and geet in unison.

"tum log itna shocked kyun hai?kyun maan, har baar, geet ki friend aake massage kyun karegi?aap bhi kabhi kabhi kijiye".

Maan smiled and nodded. Geet spoke up immediately, "nahi main khud kar lungi. Mera matlab hai, maan busy rahenge, yeh sab unse nahi hoga".

"geet, tum chup raho. Maan sab kuch karega, kyun maan aapko koi problem hai?"

"no!what problem would I have?" he said, smirking at not letting any opportunity to touch geet, go.

Sanjana then explained and also demonstrated on how to carefully massage the feet when swollen. She also told him about the other remedies but he loved the massage the best. Maan listened. Geet was feeling uneasy and maan noticed it. He winked at her and she looked away thinking, "inhe tuo bahana chahiye, bas!"

Sanjana finally got up from the bed and told them, "ab main chali, packing karne. Geet tum aaram karo. Raat ka dinner main banaungi. Tumhe zyaada der kadi nahi honi chaiye and when you sleep or when you are resting, rest your legs on an incline, in the form of a pillow. Don't forget!"

"ji, thank you so much!" said geet. sanjana patted her on her shoulder and called out to aaron, "chalo beta, lets pack!"

She walked out of the room closing the room door behing her. Maan took some cushions and put them under feet. He made her sleep and pulled the quilt over her. He was about to walk out, when geet held his wrist, "Maan, kaha jaa rahe hai aap?"

"change karne! Aur phir nishant se baat karne!kuch chahiye tumhe?" he asked.

"nahi, bas aise hi poocha. Mujhe laga aap yahi rahenge!"

"hmmm, aata hoon, geet! woh kal subeh jaa rahe hai na, isilye".

"theek hai".

"thodi der so jao!"

"nahi maan!" said geet and aaron knocked on the door.

"lo, tumhare time pass ho jayega", he said, going to open the door. Geet smiled and aaron came running in with a glass of water. "aunty, aapke liye. Mom ne kaha pani pee ne ke liye. Bahut zyaada".

"thanks beta! Aap mere paas yahan baitenge?" she asked

"haan, lekin aapko mere saath Wii sports khel na padega".

Maan watched the both of them and walked out of the room smiling. He thought about how cute his family would be, once his child would come into the world. He went downstairs and searched for Nishant. Nishant and Sanjana were in the kitchen and maan wondered if he should go in or not.

He yelled out from the dining room, "hello, main andar aa raha hoon. Hope I don't have to see anything that I should not!"

Nisahnt replied, "nahi wahi raho. I'm busy making love to my wife in the kitchen, with my kid walking around the house".

Maan laughed and sanjana hit nishant on his shoulder with a serving spoon. She screamed back, "aaaeye maan veerji, yaha aisa kuch bhi nahi ho raha hai. sorry to disappoint you so much".

Maan walked into the kitchen and found nishant cutting vegetables. He walked up to him, "nishant tum vegetables cut kum kar raha hai, aur zyaada kha raha hai".

Sanjana turned to look at the plate, "what is this nishant?" she yelled at him, "aap jaaeye yaha se, kuch nahi hota aap logo se!"

"arre nahi, jaan, main karunga na! yeh maan, aake hamesha mujhe phasa deta hai". he turned to maan and said, "yaar tu jaa ke apne biwi ke saath bait na. main kitchen sambhal raha hoon. Tum aake, mere aur mere biwi ke beech mein jagde kar war aha hai".

All of three of them fell silent, when they heard, geet and aaron scream together, "yeh, hum jheet gaye!"

Three of them looked at each other and laughed out loud. Nishant said, "mujhe laga is ghar mein sirf ek baccha hai, lekin lagta hai, main ghalat tha. Ab mujhe samaj mein aaya tu yaha kyun aaya".

Maan smirked. Sanjana asked, "waise who dono kar kya rahe hai?"

"Wii sports mein, basket ball khel rahe hai".

"Oh, aaron loves that", said sanjana, putting the cut vegetables into the oven.

"so you people have to go back tomorrow, itself?" asked maan sitting on the other side of the kitchen counter.

Nishant looked at maan, "tu kahe tuo hum aur din rukh jaate. Lekin tu ne kuch kaha hi nahi. Biwi ke saath itna busy ho gaya ki hume rokha bhi nahi".

"guests ke saath formal hona padta hai, veerji, family ke saath nahi. Aap tab tak reh sakte hai, jab tak aapka dil nahi bharta. Chaliye hamare saath delhi" said geet walking in, holding aaron's hand.

Maan walked out of the kitchen and pulled a chair into the kitchen for geet. geet sat down and smiled at maan, as though, thanking him. He nodded his head.

"nahi, geet, London mein bahut kaam hai! we have to go, wish we stay a little longer in India and visit Daadi too", he said, with a sad face.

"acchaa ji? Aapko rukhna nahi hai, tuo aap mere pati ko blame kar rahe hai?yeh accha hai!" she said smiling.

"Oho madam, maan singh khurana ki biwi use kitna support karti hai! sanju why don't take tips from geet, on "how to support husband, in front of his best friend"".

"Nishant, nayi nayi shaadi hui hai na, tuo aisa hi hota hai" said Sanjana laughing.

They had early dinner that night. And sat in the verandah outside the living room. geet and Aaron had walked back into her bedroom, to play Wii sports. Maan came in at around 9:30 pm and saw the both of them playing Wii Sports. He saw geet was dressed in a black color sleeveless top and pyjamas. He sat beside her on the bed and watched the game for sometime. But got bored very quickly. He knelt back and picked up the newspaper and started reading it. It had been more than 20 minutes, since, he walked into the room, but neither geet nor aaron cared to even look at him. He looked at the scores and saw geet was leading and Aaron was struggling to keep pace. He could also sense Aaron, getting uncomfortable as geet was leading.


"geet, tum kya chote se bacche ko pareshaan kar rahe ho? Jeet ne do aaron ko!" he said whispering.

"maan, a game is a game!" she said, not taking her eyes off the TV screen.

"accha?" he thought, "theek hai, I'll see how this game will remain a game, geet!"

Maan smiled. He moved behind her completely and put the quilt around himself, such that it covered geet's back. He realized Aaron would not notice them, since aaron was sitting a little ahead of Geet. he took advantage of the situation. He had to make geet lose her focus in order to make aaron win. So, he slowly unzipped geet's top. She almost dropped the remote and turned to look at him. He did not look at her and continued to look into the newspaper.

She knelt back on him, looking at the television screen, "yeh aap kya kar rahe hai?" she said softly.

"a game is a game, geet! tum apna game khelo, aaron ke saath, aur main, tumhare saath khelunga", he said, running his hands on her back.


Alright, so this is it for now....!!!! 😆 I'll get back to replying to ur previous update comments and you people, can leave your comments for this update..!! I guess i'm going to get more ghalis than comments here, for stopping the update, well well, i'm evil.... 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈

hmm, so the faster you leave your comments, the faster i'd update..!!!! 😉😉😉😉


wait, should I give you a precap too??? here we go- two precaps for wonderful people...!!!


Precap 1: kuch gunaoh ka koi maafi nahi hoti, Mr. Dev Singh Khurana...!!!!

😲😲😲😲😲😲


Precap 2: "You should have stopped me. why didn't you?"

what was this???? 🤣 aisa kya ho gaya????? 😉😉😉😉😉



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Edited by pickle6586 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely update.. liked dadi's trick to trap NT.. aaron is so cute.. precap looks gud.. do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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haha. love the ending. maan playing a game with geet. haha

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